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Angus: This place is pretty great you guys.
Tina: Yeah; we were thinking of having everyone over on Saturday; you guys should come.
Angus: Defiantly.
Kit: Yeah Saturday would be great; we better get going now.
Tina: Okay; we’ll walk you out.
The four of them walked back inside and down the stairs and to the front door.
Tina: Thanks for everything guys.
Angus: No problem.
Bette: So we’ll see you guys on Saturday.
Kit: Yep. See you then.
Kit and Angus left; Bette closed the front door and locked it. She and Tina flopped down on the couch.
Bette: Well; at least all the unpacking is all done.
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Saturday…
Tina had just returned from grocery shopping for their small gathering tonight. They called Shane; Jenny; Alice; and Helena (who had just returned from a long trip to England with her mother and children). Everyone was coming and anxious to see the new house. Tina dropped all of the bags on the island in the kitchen.
Tina: Hello?
Tina looked from room to room for Bette and Angelica.
Tina: I’m home! Where are you guys?
Tina opened the sliding door leading to the back porch. She saw Bette chasing Angelica who was running towards the sand dune on the beach. Tina started walking towards them.
Bette caught up with Angelica and picked her up.
Bette: No, no sweetie; we can’t play on the sand dunes. Let’s go play in the sand.
Bette carried Angelica to where they were digging holes in the sand earlier. She placed her down and handed her the shovel; the little girl resumed where she had left off. Bette sat down on a blanket. Tina had finally caught up to them.
Tina: There you are.
Bette: Hi; sorry I forgot to leave a note.
Tina bent down and gave Bette a quick peck on the lips and sat down next to her.
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in sadden its done!im glad they found their way back to each other.and im sorry your sick,that sucks! waiting for this sequel to start…lol get better soon.. love this story…
wouldn’t it be a great time for Tina to propose? Great story!!! Thanks for posting it. I loved it.
Bravo! I can’t wait for the sequel and for when Tina proposes. I’m sick too so I know how ya feel!! We can get caught up on the reading though!
I am glad you shared this story with us. I love your writing. I am also happy this isn’t the end of your posts…we are looking forward to the new.
I hope they cleaned the couch before anyone sat on it. xD Thanks for sharing!
Can’t wait for the sequel to begin. Love your writing.
I loved this series and I love it even more than there will be a sequel! You rock!
Thank you for such a lovely story…you definitely have to write the sequel becuz this feels like the beginning, not the end.
This ROCKED! Can’t wait for the sequel!
Awesome, but I hate to see it go. You are making me feel a little better by doing the sequel to the story. You can not just leave us wondering when Tina would ask Bette to be her wife and Bette’s reaction to the ring. Thank you for taking the time to do this story.
The road to home for them is each other thanks
thanks for this wonderful story! i already waiting the sequel! it will be as good as this one! congrats girl
That was wonderful ending and let see the sequel, thanks!
Hey Coffee, Sad to see it finish but happy that the gals can now run along the sand together, hand in hand, hearts united. They have their friends around them, supporting their every choice, a beautiful daughter and a new babay on the horizon. Perfect! Take care and come back soon. A sequel or new story will be much appreciated. Your Loyal Fan.