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Powerful Feelings Part 4
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After a few seconds.
‘Bette I’m sorry I fucked you over your desk today,’ Shane said with a smile in her voice.
Bette chuckled and leant forward to nibble Shane’s ear.
‘Ok ok. Now I know why you’ve been a stud all these years. God you are so good.’
‘Yeah. I know.’ again Shane chuckled.
After the two had stopped smiling, Bette got serious.
‘Shane we have an age gap of over 10 years and I cant see myself dressed in leather and riding a surf board.’
‘God Bette hold that thought there, I fucking can, I can see it now and wow that is so so hot.’
‘We do have a serious chemistry.’ Bette sighed.
‘Serious chemistry? Its more like a fucking nuclear explosion.’ – Shane turned to look up and kiss Bette’s chin.
‘Yes, but Shane you cant say you want to be with me – the whole package – in every sense of the word – you cant want that- if we were dating I’d say you were moving way too fast.’
‘But we’ve known each other for years – I’ve just been biding my time.’
‘What, you’ve waited for me to fuck up on Tina???’
‘Well yeah something like that.’
‘Whoa, wait, you’ve never respected our relationship?’
‘Oh yeah – wholeheartedly – you were the guys I wanted to be.’
‘But we’ve gone wrong.’
‘Yeah I know………………’ Shane sounded sad.
Although Bette wanted to be back with Tina, she wasn’t ready to jump back into the relationship.
‘But you cant have loved her if you cheated on her.’ Shane was entering shaky ground.
Bette did not want to hear this – but she knew it was true.
‘I was under enormous pressure I was stressed.’
‘Yeah?’
‘Yes’
‘So why didn’t you just go to the gym?’ – Shane said this with a little too much sarcasm for Bette’s liking. But the whole situation was getting to Shane too much she couldn’t maintain a cool outlook on this any more.
‘It was the baby thing as well – in the group session – I couldn’t – well it was – I couldn’t .’
‘Bette you weren’t ready for the baby.’
‘How did you know Shane?’
‘It was obvious it was Tina more than you.’
‘Yeah well I was gonna be the provider and……………..’
‘Tina was gonna be the Mom.’ Shane smiled.
Don’t laugh at me Shane.’
‘I’m not, just think about it Bette. No answer to that? What, you weren’t in control?’
Silence
‘Maybe you had a seven year itch and it had to be scratched.’ – Shane thought she’d said a little too much but couldn’t back down.
Bette didn’t like people trying to analyze herself.
‘So what about us Bette – you wanna fuck me on the side as and when needed?’ Shane said this with a little too much hostility – the situation was getting to her and she didn’t like it.
‘Maybe.’ – Bette felt like she needed to end where this conversation was going.
‘Fuck you Bette, you wanna pay me too…….. you know my past always returns to haunt me.’
Bette regretted this as soon as the throwaway comment had left her lips.
Shane started to rise from her lying position – she turned to Bette and finished with…. ‘That’ll be $100 dollars for tonight – well make it $200 you can afford it and I was good.’
Shane reached over to the door handle and flew the car door open and started to scramble out – Bette grabbed at the back of Shane’s T- shirt. Shane was so angry but there was no way she’d have used any physical strength against Bette so she didn’t resist. Shane let Bette pull her back into the car.
‘Shane were miles from anywhere and its pitch black please sit back down and we’ll go home.’
Shane sat down in silence.
Bette got into the drivers seat and started the engine – Shane adjusted jeans – but she didn’t feel cheap she just felt love in a way that shed never felt before. Shane thought, ‘Shane you gonna get so hurt…………….just like you always knew would happen,’
‘Please would you just drive me home – its been a hell of a night – you may as well have paid me.’ Shane mumbled.
Bette pretended not to have heard as she slowly pulled away.
‘Shane – I’m sorry I keep on hurting you.’
‘Yeah well I’m expecting a whole fucking lot more.’
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Wow, it’s been so long. Glad you decided to continue. Thia Bette-Shane pairing somehow reminds me of Brian and Justin in QAF. The difference is Brian is a dude, while Bette has(had?) Tina. It’s quite difficult to choose who would get hurt between Tina and Shane. But I feel like Bette and Tina would last longer than Bette and Shane.
smoking hottht was sizzlingyou really did a great job
I’m glad you posted!!! I really love this story… please don’t let us wait too long before another chapter ok?!Great job!!!
Wow…this is sooo wrong but sooo hot. Bette can’t have both. Does she REALLY love Tina? She sure not acting like it…maybe she needs to be single until she can “keep it in her pants.” I like this story though…
not a good storyline – kinda of silly cant imagine where this is going
I have always thought that Shane and Bette would be hot together for a short term thing, because they do care so much for each other, and this started out good, but this is wrong. Bette would never treat Shane like this, like a prostitute.
You do capture their raw passion and the sex is hot and animalistic. Maybe sex w/Tina is too wifely and Bette needs cold, hard f*cking. It is a fantasy.
This story is awesome! Theres not many bette and shane stories out there so i was surprised to find this. I hope you post again. Theres still the first date between them and tina finding out! Please post soon! :)
My, my, my! Well worth the wait! Please continue quickly; this is so intriguing! Thanks for the post.
it’s been a long time coming but it worth it. I am happy to see Bette and Shane together…for me with Tina…it’s over. With Shane it can be quite interesting to see how the relation will go. For now it’s very hard but perhaps they will find a way to go together. I will like that very much. This story is a good change. Thanks and update soon please.
Incredibly hot chapter!! Nice job.Bette has some major issues to work out. She has all these feelings for other women, but still wants Tina back. She’ll never be able to do it, this has got to get out of her system before she goes back to Tina. IF Tina will have her, I’m sure Alice has spilled the beans.
that was hot! i love bette and shane together. the stud and the alpha. plese don’t wait too long to post. I can’t wait to see what Tina does when she finds out.
So happy to see you resurface with an awesome update. I hope you won’t make us wait so long for the next one. Welcome back!
YES! I just found your story, but this is exactly what I’ve been looking for, for a whileeee… Um, please keep it Shane/Bette? Oh, and make Bette slap herself for hurting Shane. Great update
Well this is a new spin, but it’s interesting and I like it. I always felt like Bette and Shane had a special connection b/c they were so alike in so many ways. They are both HOT, independent, strong willed and neither is big on opening up about their feelings (yet they can open up to one another). Bette really has herself in a bind now. Shane has fallen for her and wants to be w/ her, but Bette still has some feelings for Tina (though she isn’t sure what they are). I think Bette just doesn’t want to be committed right now-she probably wants the free dom to sleep w/ Tina, Shane and anyone else that crosses her path w/ out having to be apologetic about it. I’ll keep an eye out for the next chapter.