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Powerful Feelings Part 4
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‘This can not be happening.’ Bette was pacing her office, the after glow of sex still flushing around her body. ‘How did, in the space of a few minutes, I tell Shane it was over yet the next I couldn’t resist her?’ Bette was starting to lose control. Keeping on top of things was Bette’s speciality, but everything was falling apart.
Bette jolted back to reality and picked up her office phone to phone Tina, Bette questioned her reason why she was going to make this call. Was it because she had been caught or was it because she felt the should tell Tina personally before Alice got there first?
Tina’s phone came up with ‘Bette’s Office – Tina felt excited yet apprehensive and guarded that Bette had called. Tina answered but didn’t speak.
‘Tina?’
‘Yes’
‘Its good to hear your voice.’ – Bette really meant it.
‘OK’
‘Tina can we talk?’
‘Are you still fucking the carpenter?’ Tina was blunt.
‘No.’ Bette was also blunt.
Tina was relieved but immediately changed her emotion to hurt and humiliation.
‘Ok.’ Tina was going to continue but was interrupted by Bette.
‘But………….I erm……..I…….’
Tina froze there was a but?
‘But what………………..Tina’s voice was no longer short and stern but scared searching.
‘Like I say can we talk?’
‘Bette you’ve hurt me so bad, you’ve humiliated me, left me feeling like I have nothing ,confused and vulnerable. What was the but? Are you unsure if you want me, is that it? Tina started to panic. ‘Are you seeing other people?’
Silence
‘God Bette you are.’ ‘If you’ve had a one night stand we may be able to get over it. If you were actually having an affair with that woman then there would be areas that I could not have gotten over but Jesus Bette if you are out every night fucking other women then we will never get over this and I don’t know what has happened. One minute we were fine then the next this…………………..’
‘Tina……….’
Tina was making this scenario in her mind and she was suddenly very scared. God Bette cant have loved me for a some time, she must have been bored with me physically as well as mentally.
‘Bette we’ll talk when I feel like I can face you……. you feel like a stranger to me.’
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Wow, it’s been so long. Glad you decided to continue. Thia Bette-Shane pairing somehow reminds me of Brian and Justin in QAF. The difference is Brian is a dude, while Bette has(had?) Tina. It’s quite difficult to choose who would get hurt between Tina and Shane. But I feel like Bette and Tina would last longer than Bette and Shane.
smoking hottht was sizzlingyou really did a great job
I’m glad you posted!!! I really love this story… please don’t let us wait too long before another chapter ok?!Great job!!!
Wow…this is sooo wrong but sooo hot. Bette can’t have both. Does she REALLY love Tina? She sure not acting like it…maybe she needs to be single until she can “keep it in her pants.” I like this story though…
not a good storyline – kinda of silly cant imagine where this is going
I have always thought that Shane and Bette would be hot together for a short term thing, because they do care so much for each other, and this started out good, but this is wrong. Bette would never treat Shane like this, like a prostitute.
You do capture their raw passion and the sex is hot and animalistic. Maybe sex w/Tina is too wifely and Bette needs cold, hard f*cking. It is a fantasy.
This story is awesome! Theres not many bette and shane stories out there so i was surprised to find this. I hope you post again. Theres still the first date between them and tina finding out! Please post soon! :)
My, my, my! Well worth the wait! Please continue quickly; this is so intriguing! Thanks for the post.
it’s been a long time coming but it worth it. I am happy to see Bette and Shane together…for me with Tina…it’s over. With Shane it can be quite interesting to see how the relation will go. For now it’s very hard but perhaps they will find a way to go together. I will like that very much. This story is a good change. Thanks and update soon please.
Incredibly hot chapter!! Nice job.Bette has some major issues to work out. She has all these feelings for other women, but still wants Tina back. She’ll never be able to do it, this has got to get out of her system before she goes back to Tina. IF Tina will have her, I’m sure Alice has spilled the beans.
that was hot! i love bette and shane together. the stud and the alpha. plese don’t wait too long to post. I can’t wait to see what Tina does when she finds out.
So happy to see you resurface with an awesome update. I hope you won’t make us wait so long for the next one. Welcome back!
YES! I just found your story, but this is exactly what I’ve been looking for, for a whileeee… Um, please keep it Shane/Bette? Oh, and make Bette slap herself for hurting Shane. Great update
Well this is a new spin, but it’s interesting and I like it. I always felt like Bette and Shane had a special connection b/c they were so alike in so many ways. They are both HOT, independent, strong willed and neither is big on opening up about their feelings (yet they can open up to one another). Bette really has herself in a bind now. Shane has fallen for her and wants to be w/ her, but Bette still has some feelings for Tina (though she isn’t sure what they are). I think Bette just doesn’t want to be committed right now-she probably wants the free dom to sleep w/ Tina, Shane and anyone else that crosses her path w/ out having to be apologetic about it. I’ll keep an eye out for the next chapter.