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Pretty Women, episode 1 (don’t forget to read the pilot)
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Come on… First gear has got to be around here somewhere…
She again mumbled, extremely frustrated…
Hey baby, are you looking for a date?
A gorgeous red-haired woman seductively leaned against the door of the car. Beautifull hazel eyes locked into Bette’s chocolatbrown ones just after the pretty woman had uttered that last word.
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When Tina saw she had adressed a woman, she was momentarily taken aback. Her eyes were wondering over the brunettes classicly beautifull features. She felt a slight blush appear on her cheeks as she saw the woman raise an eyebrow in answer to her question and was about to appoligize and turn around to flee. But at once Bette’s face folded into a smile… revealing her perfect white teeth, that were a wonderfull contrast to the color of her hair and skin.
No I am merely looking for directions, can you help me?
Tina quickly snapped out of her daze and wondered what was wrong with her as she felt her heart pound heavily… Her mistake had been understandible… Not many women dared to drive through Hollywood Boulevard alone. And she had never had a woman stop for her… She was not unfamiliar to the art of making love to a woman, she had only never done that proffesionally and she was still slgihtly embarresed that her invitation had insinuated otherwise. Applying the trick Shane had taught her she anwsered automaticly
Sure, for 5 bucks…
Tina could see the woman’s confidence waver shortly
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You can’t ask money for directions!
Bette stated, regaining her confidence quickly. She felt strangly intrigued by this woman… The sexy outfir and the sentence she had introduced herself with made it clear what kind of occupation this redhaid had… But somehow those gente hazel eyes did not seen to match her appearence, nor her words
I just did didn’t I?Now the price is up to 10…
Those hazel eyes were now sparkling and Bette felt her heart jump up.
What in the name of god is wrong with me? The brunnette asked herself silently while freeing her long soft locks out of the prison once called a hairdo. Deciding that she needed to get back to the hotel, no matter what it took…
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Right before turning her back on the beautifull woman in the car, Tina saw her loosen her hair and shake her head slightly so that the long dark curls fell in gently across her gorgeous face. She felt her hands tremble slightly as she put them on her hips, waiting for an anwser. She blaimed her confusion on the fact that she had not suspected a woman. But before she could get her head clear she heard that warm voice again
Do you have back from a 20?
Tina turned around and felt her lips fold into a smile as she saw the woman hold out the money for her. She took it and placed it under her top, right againts the bare skin of her breast, taking advantage of the way that distracted the brunette to get in the car, feeling the warmth of the other womans close body burn on her skin
For a 20, I will show you…
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Cool poster you have there… LOL… it’s sooo cute. Longer story… can’t have enough of it ;) Yea, so u know a 7 kid wouldn’t really understand that movie right? hehe ;)
Ooh, Bette better watch out. ;) I love this story already. I can’t wait to see what comes next…seeing as I have no clue what’s supposed to happen…ya big line thief. Haha. Kidding, kidding. Excellent update though. Please, continue soon.
it’s just like watching the movie only it’s better because Tina and Bette in it…julia roberts who?
one more thing: congratulations on the fantasy challenge win, your story was awesome ;)
I love it every much. LOL… I can see you have put a lot of efforts in this story, I like the poster idea! LMAO when I saw it. Give me a shout if you need more help in that department. POST SOON, can’t wait for more! And don’t forget the other stories of yours.
More please
Hi…read the pilot…Can´t believe I missed the first post…hm…I lovvr it…it´s great, can´t wait to see were your are taking us…and the cover..really nice touch… :)
Love it..and where your are taking us… yez my spelling sucks…
too short…i love it! post soon pls
Ok, alright…I like it!! Now, will you stop teasing us with these short chapters??? LOL
JLBT you such a tease and this chater is to short but like it. They are cute and funny, cant wait to see what’s next. Post soon please, thanks!
well well well, Bette, I can do it for u free…hahaha….anyway…please continue and SOON…thank u…
Hé, this is really something different, and i like it mmmmmmmm.
Fucking hilarious….loved the picture :o))
Frist to comment I hope…Loved it B+T keep up the good work =)
Her head was throbbing with pain and she couldn’t get herself to efficiently use that stickshift thing… ‘At least I can throw that on the fact that I am a lesbian…’ LMAO!!!!! Man this is already smokin’ hot! Still loving Tina with red hair. *dies*
so glad you posted this i loved the idea from the pilot. more please ASAP.
I’m loving this story. keep it cumming
its darn hard to multitask between ffs thread bettilicous and readin your chapp i am gonna read this firstthen go and post there and then move my ass to workhehehe
now tht was a good readtina as a red headwow
hehehe im loving this take on b&t Fantastic – looking forward to the next installment – loved the pic made me giggle
I love it…but to short…
Dear B+T… you’re teasing right??? it’s too short… LOL! maybe the next time a couple of lines more… maybe during the weekend??? ;)
OMG where can I find a Tina. I am sure that Tina was really thrown after Bette took her hair down. Man, my imagination is running wild just picturing Bette and then Tina. You made my day. I can not wait for the next scene.
I loved Pretty Woman and this is going to be a lot of fun with Tina dn Bette as the principal characters. Keep the chapters coming our way.
I’m so loving this story! But please, longer posts! :) Post as soon as you can!
Read the title but didn’t pay attention to the author, what’s wrong with me??? for $20 I can show you, man, I almost faint! what a tease!
I love it! But it’s too short! You must post it at least on a daily base. Please~~~ *wink*
Love it, love it, love it. My only complaint is too short. This version is better than the original.
This is so cute!!!! Waiting for the next chapter.
Oh prety woman another wonderful story, look forward to more from you
mmmm M&M’s are ok i can buy something for you i like it too!. the beginnig of the chapter is so good and the picture excellente you get an A for it! don’t you thing $20 is a low price? Tina is priceless! the next please!