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Pretty Women, episode 14A
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She is waiting for you in the lounge, sir… Ma’am
Bette tried to hide the laugh that Dana’s slip-up had caused, and pretended not to see how the young woman closed her eyes in disbelieve over her own mistake…
Thank you, Miss… ?
Fairbanks, manager of the…
But the dark-haired woman was allready striding past her, in the direction of the lounge where Tina would be awaiting her… Unable to whipe the smile of her face that she knew had much more to do with her relieve that a certain blonde hadn’t left, then with the manager’s little mistake, she left Dana stammering, putting back the card she had gotten out of her pocket to offer the businesswoman, shaking her head while mentally reprimanding herself over her stupidity.
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Chocolatebrown eyes scanned the lounge, as those of a predator trying to locate its prey, unsuccesfully…
Had she understood the woman correctly? Would Tina indeed be waiting here for her? Allthough knowing better then to look again, the brunette did, the slight hope in her heart she would have somehow not seen her?
From the corner of her eye, she saw how a woman, seated at the bar, turned elegantly towards her. The dark fabric of the dress as a perfect contrast to the milky white skin it seemed to cling onto. Her legs crossed in a seductive yet sophistocated manner… Bette’s eyes shot back and met the shape of the woman she had been looking for, and she felt how the air around her seemed to freeze…
As a wrinkle formed itself in the perfectly shaped lips that were forbidden for her, the brunette felt how her heart momentarily stopped. Tina hadn’s seen her yet, but instead of making her presence known, Bette just stood there… As if she had lost her ability to move… To speak… All her nerves set onto that one sense… To see…
To see the shape of the calf that was visible due to the smoothly cut black silk…
To take in the transformation she had asked for and yet not expected…
And maybe even more so…
She hadn’t foreseen it’s effect…
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looking to everywhere? am i the first?let me check….
yes i am the first!!! ;) i don’t remember been the first in comment but now i am and as always is a pleasure read your lovely story, you know how much i like it! thanks so much, so so so much… and i won’t forget ever!
Mememememe I’m going to Blackpool! Such a sweet story! :D
Ohhh good you do know how to write a excellent story all over :O) – just catching again….love it and do give us more – the best is jet to come (smiling)
as soon as i saw this chapter i began singing: Pretty woman, walking down the street….LOL and i can’t stop…wonderful chapter and i’m going to Blackpool as well
nice chapter, and u did well with one of my favorite scenes in the movie. npp
JUSTICE was undoubtedly served!!!! Another chap so soon was such a wonderful suprise. U did a wonderful job!!! The scene, thoughts, and reactions were brillant!!
i LOVED THIS PART OF THE MOVIE.”THEN STOP CALLING ME THEN”. THE TEASING So different from the strict business woman. I just love the movie. One of the best that J. Roberts played in. I’m feeling great got about 8 mos and I;ll should be fine.{I hope} thanks for posting and take care of you my friend.
gogk…you crack me up my friend! OK JLBT, this is so good! I love this movie and your version of it really does improve on a classic because..well..it’s Bette and Tina! My ceiling is coming along as well as your studies on the skin I’d imagine! LOL! Miss ya Hun..we’ll talk soon!
Excellent chapter once again. I also wish you could just stay home and write, write, write… what a treat that would be. I love the mental image you provide in setting each scene. The dialogue and the emotion is just spot on. The “stop calling me” scene is my favorite of the movie and your description of Bette standing at the desk was just perfect. Always look forward to your updates. Good luck with the internship…can’t imagine dermatology being my thing either.
As much as I like the movie, your story is so much better! Thanks for the update.
Were you talking about the same story? You rock pal! Loved loved the update and everyone else feels the same! The last part was like “oh” I’m all dreamy now! LOL. My brother is a doctor, man, couldn’t have become one, not my thing, but you keep going, you’re on the right path.
yay ur back gerat update!!!!!!!!!!! but wrong story lol
Such a fun story! I love it when Tina holds her own with Bette!
The eyes give it away. Both Bette and Tina can not control their eyes and their mind. They have that look of love oozing from their pors. Thank you for taking time out of your busy life to post this chapter.
Net terug van vakantie. ‘t Was leuk om dit verhaal weer terug te hebben. Succes met je stage en verwaarloos dit verhaal niet.
wow such a beautiful chapter.. I swear girl you just keep gettin better and better!!! hell thats an understatement… can’t wait for more!!!
Hey friend… am still waiting for your post… but looks like your internship really got the best of you. Anyway, post soon when you can… but of course you yourself must take time off for yourself too ;) take care!!
This is awesome and love it!
oh… me???? thanks for the shout out :)anddddddddd im going to L3 too!!!! yes i am… but my roommates have forbidden me to bring girls to the room… sorry for disappoint u!!! LMAO im kidding! im kidding!!