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Pretty Women, episode 14A
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She allowed her eyes to travel up as the gorgeous lighthaired woman made her way to her, her lips going dry as she followed the shape of the calf to the arc of her hip, the delicate smoothness of her waist, flowing into the suggestive curve of her breasts…
Inhaling sharply the brunette tried to control the rapidly building desire that washed over her… And closing her eyes momentarily she still saw the image of the approaching blonde, as if it was etched into her retina… A mesmerizing scent entered her nostrils, and carefully opening her eyes again, as if afraid of the bright light that would enter, the chocoloatbrown met the hazel, inducing what seemed like a flash of light… The vulnurability in the light brown eyes shook Bette to the core… The insecurity, the wonder, the question… Had she done ok?
Tina’s heart was pounding with a velocity that made her wonder how much longer she would be able to handle it, a burning sensation in her chest made clear to her she was about to cry.. Why did it matter so much to her what this woman thought? Hy did it push her back into a vulnurability she had left behind long ago as she was raised by a mother who did not care for her at all? Where was the shield she had held as a protection for so long? She looked into the hypnotizing darkness of Bette’s eyes, seeing first nothing then wonder and confusement, and then something she was even less prepared to handle…
Tenderness…
Swallowing hard to wash away the tears that were about to overflow, the blonde streched out her hand, trying to reclaim her mask by quasi-stern reprimanding the woman in front of her…
You’re late
Billiondollar-deals and art were the last things on Bette’s mind right now… She did not care about her appointment with Peggy Peabody… All that mattered was the softness of the skin that now touched her own… Inhaling the scent that dazzled her, the brunette instincticily turned Tina’s hand, pressing her lips not against the back of it but bringing her mouth to the palm, causing the blonde to shiver. She’d ment to apoligize, but somewhere as she looked up and met those hazel eyes again her words got lost, and the brunette uttered breathlessly:
You’re stunning…
Tenderness had hit her like a wave as she had seen the swirling question in Tina’s eyes… But now as she saw them light up yet again it was as if her heart welled up and became to big for her chest… She had trouble breathing and keeping an upright position as the twinkles in the blondes eyes became a loud out laugh…
You’re forgiven…
Relieved that her appearance seemed to have a good effect, Tina felt something stir in her chest that frightened her instantly… Trying to blame it on the nerves for the upcoming dinner, the blonde suppressed the jitter of her heart as the brunette offered her arm, ignored the shiver as she felt how long slender fingers enveloped around her own, and dismissed the feeling that ran through her as those fingers entwined with hers…
Never had that feeling struck her, not at the house where she was born, not at the house where she lived now, not in all the places she had resided… And it was now, in the back of her heart, that Tina realized it had nothing to do with a place to stay, but everything with the pressure of that hand in hers that made her feel as if she belonged…
A hint of a thought that was reinforced by the fact that she was feeling it while leaving a building…
Without knowing, or realizing fully, two heartbeat adjusted themselfs to eachother…
Finding their ultimate rhythm in eachother…
Finding the feeling Tina was afraid to place…
The feeling of home…
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ TBC ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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looking to everywhere? am i the first?let me check….
yes i am the first!!! ;) i don’t remember been the first in comment but now i am and as always is a pleasure read your lovely story, you know how much i like it! thanks so much, so so so much… and i won’t forget ever!
Mememememe I’m going to Blackpool! Such a sweet story! :D
Ohhh good you do know how to write a excellent story all over :O) – just catching again….love it and do give us more – the best is jet to come (smiling)
as soon as i saw this chapter i began singing: Pretty woman, walking down the street….LOL and i can’t stop…wonderful chapter and i’m going to Blackpool as well
nice chapter, and u did well with one of my favorite scenes in the movie. npp
JUSTICE was undoubtedly served!!!! Another chap so soon was such a wonderful suprise. U did a wonderful job!!! The scene, thoughts, and reactions were brillant!!
i LOVED THIS PART OF THE MOVIE.”THEN STOP CALLING ME THEN”. THE TEASING So different from the strict business woman. I just love the movie. One of the best that J. Roberts played in. I’m feeling great got about 8 mos and I;ll should be fine.{I hope} thanks for posting and take care of you my friend.
gogk…you crack me up my friend! OK JLBT, this is so good! I love this movie and your version of it really does improve on a classic because..well..it’s Bette and Tina! My ceiling is coming along as well as your studies on the skin I’d imagine! LOL! Miss ya Hun..we’ll talk soon!
Excellent chapter once again. I also wish you could just stay home and write, write, write… what a treat that would be. I love the mental image you provide in setting each scene. The dialogue and the emotion is just spot on. The “stop calling me” scene is my favorite of the movie and your description of Bette standing at the desk was just perfect. Always look forward to your updates. Good luck with the internship…can’t imagine dermatology being my thing either.
As much as I like the movie, your story is so much better! Thanks for the update.
Were you talking about the same story? You rock pal! Loved loved the update and everyone else feels the same! The last part was like “oh” I’m all dreamy now! LOL. My brother is a doctor, man, couldn’t have become one, not my thing, but you keep going, you’re on the right path.
yay ur back gerat update!!!!!!!!!!! but wrong story lol
Such a fun story! I love it when Tina holds her own with Bette!
The eyes give it away. Both Bette and Tina can not control their eyes and their mind. They have that look of love oozing from their pors. Thank you for taking time out of your busy life to post this chapter.
Net terug van vakantie. ‘t Was leuk om dit verhaal weer terug te hebben. Succes met je stage en verwaarloos dit verhaal niet.
wow such a beautiful chapter.. I swear girl you just keep gettin better and better!!! hell thats an understatement… can’t wait for more!!!
Hey friend… am still waiting for your post… but looks like your internship really got the best of you. Anyway, post soon when you can… but of course you yourself must take time off for yourself too ;) take care!!
This is awesome and love it!
oh… me???? thanks for the shout out :)anddddddddd im going to L3 too!!!! yes i am… but my roommates have forbidden me to bring girls to the room… sorry for disappoint u!!! LMAO im kidding! im kidding!!