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Prodigal Chapter 16
Saying good-bye to Danny was harder than Tina thought it would be. He had held on like he was afraid he would never see her again, but she knew he would. After the past few days she would be damned if she lost her family again. He promised to call her as soon as he landed. As the plane took off, Tina turned to Carrie who was wiping the tears from her eyes.
Christ, when did we turn into such sentimental saps? Carrie asked, her gaze shifting from Tina to Bette to the baby cradled in Bettes arm.
Im blaming you, Tina accused. I spoke to mom today for Gods sake! Tina laughed through her tears. That wouldnt have happened without you, Caroline.
Yeah, well, good luck getting rid of us now, Carrie threatened. Were like a virus, just when you think were gone for good theres another outbreak.
Tina rolled her eyes. Im one of you, you know.
I know, Carrie sniffled. I was warning Bette.
Bette smiled. Kennard-itis? Yeah, Ive had it for like nine years now. I kinda like it.
Hey! Tina exclaimed and Bette cocked her eyebrow at her wife. Thats my look and you cant have it.
So you do know you do that! I always knew you were more manipulative than you looked, Bette bantered and Tina smiled guiltily.
More than that, I know how well it works on you, babe. Give me some credit, Tina laughed. She turned to Carrie. Whats going on with you today?
Believe it or not, I have a late lunch meeting with
Baby duty, Bette said, indicating Angelica.
Work, then home to wear a rut in the floor waiting for mom to call me, Tina said.
Nervous? Carrie asked.
Honestly, Im wondering how many bombshells I can drop on her before she has a heart attack and dies on me, Tina said, only half-kidding. I mean, theres the baby, and the babys black daddy, and no longer working for Alphaville, switching careers, Helena, you, your book
Tina, stop, Carrie commanded. Ill take care of the book and
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(20 votes, average: 4.45 out of 5)
Carrie is playing with fire and is going to get burned.
rattle snakes kill people, carrie better have some anti-vemon
Carrie needs to leave helena alone she is bad news!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great story… hope all is well and you will be updating soon.
Thank you
Damn the game Carrie play with Helena is a adventure and fire and let see how the game began. Post soon, thanks!
Caroline should call Helena’s bluff and ask her a hundred million.
I love Bette with the baby. Tina’s mother should have a Xanax handy for that phone call. Black baby daddy – ha!!!
I trust Helena Peabody about as far as I can throw the Capitol Records Building.
Caroline should follow suit.
Thank you for coming back with another post. I love this story!
I failed to mention after the last chapter that, I love your story and what you are doing with it. By exploring Tina’ family and background, you have broaded the scope of your story and added alot of texture that I.C. has missed in the series. I love Carrie’s interaction with Bette. I think that she has the potential to be as valuable sister-in-law for Bette as Kit has been for Tina. In reference to Carrie’s dealing with Helena, I am not as worried as everyone else seems to be. If Helena uses or screws over Carrie, not only will she have deal with Tina and the gang, But Carrie’s boyfriend family seem to also be very powerful people. I also remember you mention that the invest in the Arts, which is right up Bette’s ally , along with the fact that Carrie lives in NY where Bette has to go sometimes to book artist. I would love to see them team up to give Helena a taste of humble pie. Please post again soon. Your story is very refreshing.
I totally agree with CPQ fine comment !
Anyway, Helena Peabody is a very interesting character and an ideal way to bring dramas in any story ! We always need someone to hate in stories, no ? *wink*
Oh, and don’t worry about any “idealistic” touch : after all, fiction is such a delightful way to dream…
Now, I cannot wait for Tina’s mother reaction ! ^_^
carrie can take care of herself…besides, when all else fails….call BETTEZILLA!
Carrie/Bette – wonderful Bette needs someone like Carrie
Carrie/Helena – hhmmm watch out for the curves
Looking forward to the next installment Tina/Rose/black Bette & daddies;0)
HElena likes Kennard family a lot..lol..one more to her collection..lol..i hope Carrie knows what she is doing..great chapter post soon thanks :o)
Helena is really good at playing people…lets just hope Carrie is capable of outplaying Helena.
Caroline should stay as far away from the fire breathing dragon as she can!!! Great chapter, post soon.
this is great, write soon
she better watch her back for that witch!
This is an awesome stoy. I lke that Tina’s Mom stood up to her Husband. Oh yeah , I soo don’t trust Helena.
K
Just caught up, wonderful chapters. Such a sweet story with the fam. Can’t wait for more.
Hi jenny,
I am a big fan of your story. It’s very well written and I look forward to every update. It’s been awhile, I hope all is well. Please continue writing this wonderful story.