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Prodigal Chapter 16
Carrie laughed. Consider it done. Without another word, she walked away, bouncing happily on the balls of her feet.
T, I really like your sister, Bette said as they watched her go.
Shes something else, isnt she? Tina asked, smiling after her.
Caroline was getting ready to go down to the hotel bar and meet
Needless to say, it had been a trying morning, even though it had started so well, which might explain the way Carrie answered the phone. What?
Its nice to talk to you too, Caroline,
*****, Carrie thought, and checked the clock. She was late too. Helena, not to be rude, but I dont have time for you right now.
Then why did you answer the phone?
Reflex, Im sorry I was so short, Carrie explained, composing herself. No reason to be rude, even if Ms. Peabody may or may not be a psycho hose beast. Im going to be late for an interview. What can I do for you, Helena?
I wont keep you. I was just calling to see when we could discuss the price tag you want to put on the rights to your book,
Carrie sighed. I dont know,
As highly as I regard your sister, Ms. Kennard, and as much as Bette might like to think so, not everything is about them. Have you considered that this might have nothing to do with them?
Ouch, but Caroline had to admit it.
And you think thats suspect in itself,
No, Carrie said, stopping
Ill see you at 10,
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(20 votes, average: 4.45 out of 5)
Carrie is playing with fire and is going to get burned.
rattle snakes kill people, carrie better have some anti-vemon
Carrie needs to leave helena alone she is bad news!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great story… hope all is well and you will be updating soon.
Thank you
Damn the game Carrie play with Helena is a adventure and fire and let see how the game began. Post soon, thanks!
Caroline should call Helena’s bluff and ask her a hundred million.
I love Bette with the baby. Tina’s mother should have a Xanax handy for that phone call. Black baby daddy – ha!!!
I trust Helena Peabody about as far as I can throw the Capitol Records Building.
Caroline should follow suit.
Thank you for coming back with another post. I love this story!
I failed to mention after the last chapter that, I love your story and what you are doing with it. By exploring Tina’ family and background, you have broaded the scope of your story and added alot of texture that I.C. has missed in the series. I love Carrie’s interaction with Bette. I think that she has the potential to be as valuable sister-in-law for Bette as Kit has been for Tina. In reference to Carrie’s dealing with Helena, I am not as worried as everyone else seems to be. If Helena uses or screws over Carrie, not only will she have deal with Tina and the gang, But Carrie’s boyfriend family seem to also be very powerful people. I also remember you mention that the invest in the Arts, which is right up Bette’s ally , along with the fact that Carrie lives in NY where Bette has to go sometimes to book artist. I would love to see them team up to give Helena a taste of humble pie. Please post again soon. Your story is very refreshing.
I totally agree with CPQ fine comment !
Anyway, Helena Peabody is a very interesting character and an ideal way to bring dramas in any story ! We always need someone to hate in stories, no ? *wink*
Oh, and don’t worry about any “idealistic” touch : after all, fiction is such a delightful way to dream…
Now, I cannot wait for Tina’s mother reaction ! ^_^
carrie can take care of herself…besides, when all else fails….call BETTEZILLA!
Carrie/Bette – wonderful Bette needs someone like Carrie
Carrie/Helena – hhmmm watch out for the curves
Looking forward to the next installment Tina/Rose/black Bette & daddies;0)
HElena likes Kennard family a lot..lol..one more to her collection..lol..i hope Carrie knows what she is doing..great chapter post soon thanks :o)
Helena is really good at playing people…lets just hope Carrie is capable of outplaying Helena.
Caroline should stay as far away from the fire breathing dragon as she can!!! Great chapter, post soon.
this is great, write soon
she better watch her back for that witch!
This is an awesome stoy. I lke that Tina’s Mom stood up to her Husband. Oh yeah , I soo don’t trust Helena.
K
Just caught up, wonderful chapters. Such a sweet story with the fam. Can’t wait for more.
Hi jenny,
I am a big fan of your story. It’s very well written and I look forward to every update. It’s been awhile, I hope all is well. Please continue writing this wonderful story.