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    Prodigal Chapter 17

    Story written on August 20, 2005 by jenny8675309.
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    Drunk with Alice in a hotel bar and the difficulty of waking a sleeping Bette

                “Ok, that’s fair I guess,” Alice said, wondering what the ***** this girl could ask her.

                “What’s with you and Dana?” Carrie asked.  From the dark look that passed over Alice‘s face, and her refusal to meet Carrie’s eyes, Carrie figured she had just hit the nail on the head.  Alice shook her head and turned as far away from Caroline as she could.  Ok, she didn’t just hit the nail on the head.  She drove it home in one shot.

                When Alice finally met Carrie’s eyes again, she had composed herself.  “Am I that obvious?”

                “I’m a trained observer, Alice.  I don’t know how obvious you are to everyone else”

                “Maybe I should stop stalking her,” Alice interjected half-kidding, not about the stalking, but about the stopping.

                A sympathetic look passed over Carrie’s face and she put her hand on Alice‘s arm.  “You aren’t kidding about that are you?”

                Alice hung her head.

                “Ok,” Carrie breathed.  “You love her, huh?”

                Alice shook her head, no.  “I don’t think love feels like this.  I hope it doesn’t.”  A tear slid down her cheek.

                “No, honey, Alice,” Carrie said, squeezing her arm.  “I’m sorry.  I had no right to ask.  Don’t cry.  I just, noticed a tension between you, a push and pull that I thought was interesting.  I had no idea she broke your heart.”

                Alice smiled sadly.  “Don’t be sorry.  I, we  We were best friends.”

                Carrie cringed, “ouch.”

                Alice nodded.  “I should have known better.  I just, I don’t know  She was the first person that I felt safe falling for.  I never thought she would hurt me.”

                “Oh, baby,” Carrie sighed quietly.  “It’s gotta be hard for you too, with Bette and Tina dealing with their stuff and you can’t talk to Dana, obviously, and Shane and Carmen are in their honeymoon, whatever”

                “Yeah,” Alice breathed.  She looked away and then back at Caroline.  “I’m usually much more entertaining than this,” she apologized.

                “Do you like scotch?” Carrie asked, out of the blue.

                “Um, I dunno.  I don’t really drink it,” Alice answered, confused.

                Carrie nodded and turned to the bartender, ordering two shots of Johnny Walker Blue, neat.  “Don’t shoot it,” she instructed Alice.  “This is to be savored.  Besides, I think you could use something high quality right now.”

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    1. I’m glad you came back to your story. I’ve been hoping you would keep writing it. It’s a wonderful story. Please continue writing when you can.

    12. Glad to have you back. Yes…life intervenes at the most inopportune moments, but that’s life. ;-) Love the story…please continue when you can. Thanks for taking the time to update us. ;-)

    13. Good chapter. Carrie seem stronger than Tina and she will kick Helena’s ass soon. Bette and Tina are so sweet and let see about the phone call from Tina’s mother. Post soon, thanks!

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