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Provocations Linger- chapter 1
2004 – After Provocations
Bette and Tina’s Bedroom
“No,” Tina cried again. Her voice, muffled by the pillow, was an anguished combination of fury and disbelief. This was Bette. Bette shoving her onto their bed, holding her face down as she ripped off her dress. This was Bette pawing at her breast. Bette.
Tina’s mind could not process what was happening. She heard the frantic words whispered in her ear, “I’m sorry! Please. I love you. You’ve got to believe me! I love you!”
Feeling Bette’s hand grapple between her legs, touching her, Tina was outraged. “STOP IT!” She wrenched her arms from Bette’s control, twisting on to her back. She tried to strike her. Bette sobbed, shouting the same words back to her. “Stop it! Stop it!’ as she grasped and held Tina’s wrists again against the mattress. “I love you… I love you!” she repeated, hysterical.
She kissed Tina desperately through the blonde’s protests. “Fuck you,” Tina whimpered. She twisted her head back and forth, trying to elude Bette’s mouth.
Adrenaline kicked in as Tina swiftly rolled them both over, straddling Bette in a reversal of positions. She grabbed at Bette’s wrists, pinning them over her head. "Fuck you!" she wailed repeatedly. Positioned above her, Tina thrashed wildly growing progressively more irate.
She felt completely raw; a wretched combination of pain, betrayal and anger. Shattered.
Leaning into Bette, she felt the stronger body heave beneath her, her shallow breath panting against Tina’s throat. The jolt of arousal Tina felt confused her. Furious and desperate she bit her lover hard on the side of her face. Bette cried out sharply. Tina bit her again several times along the side of her breast, an angry parody of lovemaking. Bette screamed again. Her anguished cry penetrating through to Tina. The blond collapsed onto Bette’s shoulder. She lifted her head and thru a tangle of hair took in Bette’s face.
“This isn’t real,” Tina’s brain rejected everything. She only acknowledged the searing physical ache inside her she needed to make stop. Her mouth found Bette’s once in a hard kiss before she grabbed the brunette’s hand, directing it to her center. She needed the hand inside her, to release her. Obeying, Bette entered her at once, pushing Tina back. Rising up, Tina leaned back onto Bette’s hand rocking hard against her as Bette fucked her until she came.
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(110 votes, average: 3.55 out of 5)
Wonderful, can’t wait to see what happens!!!!
Wow! Great start. I’m looking forward to see where you take this. PPS.
i hope a happy ending is involved :) pps
Looking forward to see where this is going. Please don’t let either of them be involved with anyone else.
oke y just wondrefull you start the FF now keep updating I hope a happy ending too
this is gonna be an interesting flight afterall!!! PPS :)
yeah..nice beginning..keep posting,i luv it so far..
great work zuzu, very creative. I have to agree with the others a significant other in the way of tibette could get so messy. Now I’m just thinking of all of the wonderful things that could happen on such a long flight ;) please post soon, can’t wait…
Interesting start, can’t wait for more. PPS:)
What an intriguing beginning.PPS.
What a great start. I can’t wait to see how this plays out.
Well written and compelling: what more could a reader want? Thanks, and PPS!
Hey Zu! Good to see we got the registration done for you. Thanks a bunch for posting this! I love new fan fics, cause I get to start RIGHT from the beginning. I can sense this is going to be one that keeps all of us YEARNING right along with our gals! Thanks a bunch Zu, and welcome to the world of Fan Fiction.
You’re very good. This is a great start. PPS!!
Intensely sad ending to their relationship. I do hope this is a new beginning OR are they both re-attached?? That would be too sad. PPS.
lets see what we get 37K miles high!
I too would have liked to see the aftermath of that scene played out. I agree it was probably one of the most powerful that I have ever seen on TV or movies. I’m glad you are going to take us there…it should be a very interesting ride. Please post soon!
Super beginning – can’t wait to see where this goes. V
Awesome story, please keep it going.thnx
Just hope for a new beginning,the ending was to sad. thanks
I’m thinking this is compelling to see what could happen on a cross country flight! PPS
Great idea for a story and a wonderful beginning. Nicely written. Thank you.
alright i am liking this…if you continue you have a fan.
Good chapter, more please! Thank you.
I’m hooked! Please post another one soon.
What they all said! This is a great start! PPS
I’m all in.
I hope there is a happy ending through the exploration of the most terrible of break up scenes. You are starting off brillantly.
Oh Zuzu, I already know it’s going to be a great read. Looking forward to all the tension, angst and processing, it lingers doesn’t it?
ooohhh interesting PPS :)
so glad you’re writing – you have a wonderful style – can’t wait to see where you take this!
This is interesting and good start!