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Provocations Linger- chapter 1
Her orgasm arrived quickly, offering the physical relief she craved but only briefly. Tina came hard against Bette and than collapsed onto her weeping, allowing Bette to hold her. She fought against the clarity that would follow, knowing this act had been their good bye. Bette, held her tight, terrified to let her go.
2008- Present Day
Bette’s eyes swept the courtesy suite in search of an open desk amid a bank of printers and fax machines. Her search came to a sudden stop as she took in the blonde seated directly in front of her. Although she was hunched over her laptop, her head bowed in conversation, Bette recognized Tina at once.
She stared disbelievingly. For the longest time she had assumed they would run into one another- both were still in the area. Yet this was the first time Bette had seen her ex lover since that night at the hospital they almost lost Dana. Two years. Over four since Tina had laughed with Bette as easily as she did now on the phone.
Tina was breathtaking in a low cut, green summer sweater and black pants. Bette’s heart pounded as ‘fight or flight’ reflexes activated immediately. She was at once joyful and terrified at the prospect of seeing Tina again.
Tina raised her eyes, still bright with amusement and took in the woman before her. She looked at Bette vacantly for a moment. The taller woman could observe her brain trying to catch up with what she was seeing. “Bette,” she acknowledged, finally.
“Tina.”
Bette offered a small smile, still scrambled at the sight of her ex. They were at Los Angeles Airport in the American Airlines Admiral’s Club lounge.
After a lengthy silence, Bette finally asked, “Are you flying to New York?”
The red eye to LaGuardia was delayed and seemed to be about the only domestic plane still waiting to depart that evening.
Tina nodded. Finding her voice, she added “How about you?”
“I…am. I’ve been trying to get out of LA all day- this is my last shot or there won’t be much point in going…” Bette trailed off, remembering Tina hadn’t asked why she was traveling to New York.
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(110 votes, average: 3.55 out of 5)
Wonderful, can’t wait to see what happens!!!!
Wow! Great start. I’m looking forward to see where you take this. PPS.
i hope a happy ending is involved :) pps
Looking forward to see where this is going. Please don’t let either of them be involved with anyone else.
oke y just wondrefull you start the FF now keep updating I hope a happy ending too
this is gonna be an interesting flight afterall!!! PPS :)
yeah..nice beginning..keep posting,i luv it so far..
great work zuzu, very creative. I have to agree with the others a significant other in the way of tibette could get so messy. Now I’m just thinking of all of the wonderful things that could happen on such a long flight ;) please post soon, can’t wait…
Interesting start, can’t wait for more. PPS:)
What an intriguing beginning.PPS.
What a great start. I can’t wait to see how this plays out.
Well written and compelling: what more could a reader want? Thanks, and PPS!
Hey Zu! Good to see we got the registration done for you. Thanks a bunch for posting this! I love new fan fics, cause I get to start RIGHT from the beginning. I can sense this is going to be one that keeps all of us YEARNING right along with our gals! Thanks a bunch Zu, and welcome to the world of Fan Fiction.
You’re very good. This is a great start. PPS!!
Intensely sad ending to their relationship. I do hope this is a new beginning OR are they both re-attached?? That would be too sad. PPS.
lets see what we get 37K miles high!
I too would have liked to see the aftermath of that scene played out. I agree it was probably one of the most powerful that I have ever seen on TV or movies. I’m glad you are going to take us there…it should be a very interesting ride. Please post soon!
Super beginning – can’t wait to see where this goes. V
Awesome story, please keep it going.thnx
Just hope for a new beginning,the ending was to sad. thanks
I’m thinking this is compelling to see what could happen on a cross country flight! PPS
Great idea for a story and a wonderful beginning. Nicely written. Thank you.
alright i am liking this…if you continue you have a fan.
Good chapter, more please! Thank you.
I’m hooked! Please post another one soon.
What they all said! This is a great start! PPS
I’m all in.
I hope there is a happy ending through the exploration of the most terrible of break up scenes. You are starting off brillantly.
Oh Zuzu, I already know it’s going to be a great read. Looking forward to all the tension, angst and processing, it lingers doesn’t it?
ooohhh interesting PPS :)
so glad you’re writing – you have a wonderful style – can’t wait to see where you take this!
This is interesting and good start!