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Provocations Linger- Chapter 15
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Tina and Sam’s room, 4:30pm
Tina answered the room’s phone, wondering why Tessa didn’t just call her cell.
“What are you wearing?” Tessa didn’t bother asking about Sam, she knew she’d be wearing a black tux and look fantastic.
“Kind of late to be comparing dress choices, isn’t it?” Tina teased.
“I brought two,” Tessa shrugged eyeing her choices.
“Well, unless one is an all sequin, black and mahogany tiger print we should be fine.”
“Ooooo, that sounds hot! Style?”
“Just above the knee, halter neckline,” Tina supplied. “And after the lunch we just had, tight!” she added, laughing.
Tessa laughed with her. They’d both gorged on the crab imperial and shrimp at the pool before remembering they had a dinner to go to in a few hours.
“Okay, that’s helpful, I’ll go above the knee too. I just didn’t want to be the only woman tonight not wearing an evening gown.”
“Is Sam back?” Tessa looked at her watch.
“Yep. She’s in the shower now. She was covered head to toe in dirt when she got back but she looked happy. Don’t ask me how or where she got that dirty, the woman should do laundry detergent commercials,” Tina joked before telling Tessa they would call her when they were close to ready.
Earlier that afternoon Sam had borrowed a mountain bike from the hotel and gone off on the bike trails with her camera. Her enthusiastic recap of the dune trails before jumping into the shower sounded beautiful to Tina. Mostly she was just happy to see Sam acting like herself again.
A kiss on her shoulder along with several drops of water signaled the end of Sam’s shower. Tina giggled as she scooted out of range. “That tickles!” she complained.
Sam followed, grinning at her girlfriend. “Oh come on, what’s a little water? You’re going to shower anyway.”
Quickly she scooped in behind Tina encircling her stomach with her arms and kissing her neck. As Tina was still in her bathing wrap from the pool, she was fairly accessible.
Tina dropped her head forward granting Sam more access to her neck. Sam obliged her by licking off the offending droplets of water. “Is that better?” she asked kissing Tina just below her ear.
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How naughty of you to keep us hanging here…I am thinking Sam and tina are done and also Now tina is going to be very jealous thinking Bette and helena are a duo having fun…….PPS
Speechless. PPS
i bet helena called tina to the room… loving this… oh and sam… take care… you will be alone soon… bette is in the house… bring it on…
Loving the story. Your dialogue is pot on and so are the transitions in between. The dialogue is so nuanced w/their individual style and speech patterns. Please keep up this pace of frequent posts.
Oh…love it! And Helena’s comment – I’ms sure she planned this too. Can’t wait for more.
Whoops! Well maybe seeing Bette with Helena might do the trick! *wicked cool!* Thanks for the story loving it so far. I like Helena in this story too ;)
This just keeps getting better and better! Hmm..I wonder what Sam will have to say about Bette being there. Tina is going to be flanked by her exes. Sam should be glad that Tina stays friends with her exes..after all, it’s highly likely that she’s going to be one (ex) and sooner rather than later. LOL! Love your story Zuzu!
hahaha, Helena’s last line was hilarious. I look forward to this tory every time I check the site.
such a tease…is there going to be more misunderstanding, more drama or with B&T talk and find another way to get romantic? post soon
doing an awesome job with the updating..I absolutely adore Helena in this story..
Perfect last line. I love your Helena! Three posts and I’m still craving more… maybe your excited state will translate into additional posts… Can’t wait for the dinner!
Well, they could just cut to the chase and skip the formalities, the formal dress and the formal dinner. Poor Sam, I don’t think she has a chance.
Sooo good! What a treat to have three posts on this so very good story. I look forward to the unfolding of the evening on Fire Island. Thanks for writing.
Love Helena, love Sam, but really really love Bette and Tina!
hahahaha Tina will think that Bette and Helena had a good time just beforeher arrival lol. Very funny. PPVS
Oh, this doesn’t bode well for Bette earning Tina’s trust, does it? Or… does it? Truth is stranger than fiction, as it’s been said. Tina couldn’t believe that Bette’s taken up with her host (and Tina’s ex) so gauchely, could she? I love the ins and outs this story takes. Thanks, Zuzu. :)
Uh oh, Bette has some explaining to do…..I don’t think Tina is going to stick around long enough to hear it though.
Briliant update. Oh dear! Is Tina going to think that Helena and Bette have something going on? This is getting absolutely interesting :). Thank you!
I take it Helena’s plan went a little haywire. Now what is going to happen? All I would like to see is Bette and Tina making progress and just not in the friendship sense.
AW SHUCKS…bETTE ALL NAKED UNDER THE ROBE AND IN HELENA’S ROOM; SO MUCH FOR NOT MAKING T JEALOUS. LOL. MIND U THE WAY SHE IS TREATING SAM-she needs a wake up call! PLZ CONTINUE…
Hahahaha….I love this Helena…in cahoots with Bette to get Tina back. I can’t guess which way that you’ll go with this…there are more than a couple of possible outcomes. I can’t wait for your next installment to see which one you chose.
loved the update. i hope the past frequent updates will not stop you from updating again very soon. love your story!!!
OK!God, or rather, Zuzu, this is delicious!
That was awesome. Great update as usual. Tina’s gonna freak out thinking there’s something going on with Bette & Helena. Btw, I adore Helena in this story, i want her for myself :)
First, an apology: I’ve been meaning to comment on this story and have no excuse as to why I haven’t. I’ve been enjoying it all along and was happy to see that you came back to it. I also want to say thank you for your note the other day mentioning me in such esteemed company! I am trying to find time to write and will try not to disappoint! I look forward to reading more of this story–thanks! Lin
:) loving the story.
This is so funny and love it!