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Provocations Linger-chapter 3
2004- Two Months after the Provocations Opening
Rae’s Café, Santa Monica
Tina arrived at Rae’s early hoping to grab an outside table before the girls arrived. Casting an eye about the Diner, she tried to imagine how Alice, Shane and Dana would view it.
She liked the café and felt comfortable there. Rae’s was only a few minutes walk from her new home and was quieter than the more touristy restaurants along the promenade.
Situated back off the street, the Diner was able to offer several tables on the front Patio along with courtyard seating in the back to customers wishing to eat outdoors.
Their food, coffee and relaxed atmosphere had lured Tina back several mornings with her newspaper or laptop. Looking around, she told her self to relax as she saw again for herself the obvious charm of the place. “Calm down, Kennard,” she blew out a breath.
She laughed inwardly, knowing it wasn’t Rae’s she was feeling anxious about. After seven years, this was the first time she’d asked her friends to meet her for breakfast anywhere other than the Planet or without a certain Museum curator.
Tina had met up with the girls a couple times at Alice’s for pizza and bad movies, but this was the first time they’d been to see her in Santa Monica. She was still unsure why she had had them meet her at Rae’s instead of her house.
Tina was living in a townhouse Alphaville owned a block off of both Santa Monica Beach and the Third St. Promenade. The beach house was one of many properties taken over by Alpha when they bought a smaller studio a few years back. The take-over purchased had been very low on marketable titles but was rich in real estate.
Alpha offered Tina a rental price that bordered on ludicrous as part of her package.
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Brunch finished, the group fell into the easy banter they usually shared. They were enjoying just being together, absorbing Bloody Mary’s and the Santa Monica sun. Tina couldn’t help but think of the member of their group that was missing.
“So… how is Bette?” she asked finally. She didn’t expect a real answer; she was asking more to put the topic behind them.
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(93 votes, average: 3.28 out of 5)
Still loving this story and my computer seems to be fixed, I got full page 3…LOL!!!
Yay a new chappy. Loved it and can’t wait for more! PPS
Those two are just too cute on the airplane. Between the text messages, the blushes, and the smiles, I’m grinning from ear to ear. PPS!
Great chapter! Loving it! PPS.
hey zuzu good to see another post for this great story. I love the backgound short and the depth you bring to tins and bette’s relationship. Can’t wait to see where this flight takes our starcrossed lovers. Pps
thank you for posting…i’m enjoying this story very much. more please.
Wow, Tina really meant business back then. Great update…can’t wait for your next one!
Hope I sleep all night with this smile on my face Love that I got 3 full pages and got to read about my two favorite Classy Ladies. thanks
I love the contrast between the distressing 2004 flashbacks and the hopefulness of the present-day narrative. All of it is beautifully done.
I could never understand how Tina could stay away so long from Bette. PPS.
I love the plane banter. hopefully they will take it to another level next time. pps
Absolutely loved it, i desperately want more..
Toom much…can u plz post again soon, it hurtz waiting to see them 2gether again.
It case I had forgotten the wrenching tearing apart that happens to one’s insidesduring a breakup – you certainly are making it real for me. You write really well. Guess who’s being added to my “Favorite Authors” list?
I continue loving it! Hope you keep posting regularly!
i just read your story and my co-worker wanted to know what i was smiling about:)
They are just too cute. You so better be planning on getting them back together.
Yes this is so great. I love the way you are filling in the chasm after Provocations…how Bette then, so wounded, and Bette now, swagger, seem so different yet quintessentially Bette. Thanks
I Love it. You can really feel the hesitation and the tension.
Enjoying your story. Thank you.
You are walking us down the path of what could’ve been so amazingly well. Great writing!
They are so cute!