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Provocations Linger-chapter 3
She felt tired most of the time. Exhausted by the smallest efforts. She assumed she was depressed but figured that was appropriate and ignored it. She had stopped checking the machine for messages from Tina each time she got home.
Half glancing around her, Bette climbed the steps to the entrance. She knew Tina was off having brunch with the girls and assumed no one would object to her taking a closer look.
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Bette sat admiring the wrought iron work and landscaping throughout Tina’s small patio garden when Tina’s sharp voice made her jump.
“What are you doing here, Bette?” Tina stood on the landing outside her door.
Bette blinked, slowly looking toward the harsh voice. It was still strange to hear Tina angry. She couldn’t help but stare at her ex after so long. Tina looked gorgeous in a form fitting black t-shirt and low cut jeans. Her sunglasses were perched in her hair, which appeared longer since Bette had last seen her. Bette swallowed.
“How did you get my address?” Tina asked, clearly annoyed.
“I asked your assistant for it.”
“I don’t believe that,” Tina’s eyes narrowed in warning. “Cara wouldn’t have given it out.”
“I told her I was Alice,” Bette admitted, jutting her chin up. Inside she begged herself to ‘get it together’.
Tina blew out a breath, exasperated.
“Bette. If you knew I didn’t want you here, why would you come?”
“I’m sorry…” Bette offered weakly. She paused as she sorted out her reasons,
“You don’t take my phone calls, Tina. You never call me back. I hate that everyone knew where you live but me… I had to find out you went back to Alpha from Oscar!” she shrilled, remembering that particular indignity.
Catching herself, she took a deep breath before continuing more calmly,
“Tina. I just needed to see it… to see you here…” she trailed off knowing she’d made a mistake.
“Aren’t we ever going to talk about all this?” she asked. She bit down on her lip and blinked rapidly trying not to further embarrass herself.
Tina chewed her own lip, frustrated. She was having a hard time being mean to Bette when she was obviously hurting but Tina resented being put in this position.
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(93 votes, average: 3.28 out of 5)
Still loving this story and my computer seems to be fixed, I got full page 3…LOL!!!
Yay a new chappy. Loved it and can’t wait for more! PPS
Those two are just too cute on the airplane. Between the text messages, the blushes, and the smiles, I’m grinning from ear to ear. PPS!
Great chapter! Loving it! PPS.
hey zuzu good to see another post for this great story. I love the backgound short and the depth you bring to tins and bette’s relationship. Can’t wait to see where this flight takes our starcrossed lovers. Pps
thank you for posting…i’m enjoying this story very much. more please.
Wow, Tina really meant business back then. Great update…can’t wait for your next one!
Hope I sleep all night with this smile on my face Love that I got 3 full pages and got to read about my two favorite Classy Ladies. thanks
I love the contrast between the distressing 2004 flashbacks and the hopefulness of the present-day narrative. All of it is beautifully done.
I could never understand how Tina could stay away so long from Bette. PPS.
I love the plane banter. hopefully they will take it to another level next time. pps
Absolutely loved it, i desperately want more..
Toom much…can u plz post again soon, it hurtz waiting to see them 2gether again.
It case I had forgotten the wrenching tearing apart that happens to one’s insidesduring a breakup – you certainly are making it real for me. You write really well. Guess who’s being added to my “Favorite Authors” list?
I continue loving it! Hope you keep posting regularly!
i just read your story and my co-worker wanted to know what i was smiling about:)
They are just too cute. You so better be planning on getting them back together.
Yes this is so great. I love the way you are filling in the chasm after Provocations…how Bette then, so wounded, and Bette now, swagger, seem so different yet quintessentially Bette. Thanks
I Love it. You can really feel the hesitation and the tension.
Enjoying your story. Thank you.
You are walking us down the path of what could’ve been so amazingly well. Great writing!
They are so cute!