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    Provocations Linger- Chapter Five (revisited and revised)

    Story written on April 16, 2010 by Zuzu's Petals.
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    The fight after Provocations is the backdrop to an encounter five years later.

    “How about Bette? Are she and Tina both coming?” Kit’s tone sounded worried.

    Shane nodded, unconcerned.

    “They said they were.”

    Gesturing toward Jenny, she gave Kit a wave, “I’m going to go help Jenny hold the table. Come join us when you can.”

    The roommates had arrived early and snagged a large table near the dance floor and bar. Shane had a fairly good idea what this was about but wasn’t positive. Dana and Alice had both been keeping a low profile recently.

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    “Hi there,” Tina greeted Jenny and Shane. She wore a bright smile and offered a little wave as she scanned the room with her eyes. “Are the ‘Ladies of the Hour’ here yet?”

    Shane jumped up and pulled her into a hug, very happy to see Tina at the Planet again.

    “Not yet,” she informed her, noting Tina’s reference.  “You know what this is about?”

    Taking a seat, Tina raised her eyebrows and gave an innocent look to both her and Jenny. “Nope. You?”

    Jenny and Shane laughed, knowing exactly what Tina was thinking. “Well they certainly are making a production of it, whatever it is,” Jenny noted.

    “Making a production out of what?” Bette asked walking up behind Shane’s chair. She massaged the hairdresser’s shoulders in greeting and glanced shyly at Tina.

    “Hi,” she smiled.

    Tina nodded back, mirroring the same half smile at Bette.

    “Hi.”

    “We were just guessing what Dana and Alice are up to, Bette.” Jenny explained.  

    Bette chuckled, “Well, we certainly seem to have been summoned.”

    She slipped her jacket over the chair next to Tina and sat down. She was wearing a simple black tank top and a turquoise and silver necklace Tina had bought her in Mexico.

    “Nice necklace,” Tina noted.

    “Isn’t it?” Bette smiled back.

    Shane and Jenny exchanged a quick look. Their friends seemed to be making a real effort to put aside their problems for the evening.

    “So we all think their fucking, right?” Jenny nodded, looking around the table.  Kit chose that moment to join them.

    “Think WHO are fucking?” Kit questioned Jenny, eyes wide.

    “Alice and Dana,” came the chorus as Tina, Bette and Shane answered for her.

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    3. I remember the pages and pages of debate we had on TWOP over that supercharged word. Tempers flared, lines were crossed, people got bounced from the site for their inflammatory rhetoric. Rape. There, you said it, and I’m proud of you for going there. So many years later, can we cooly reflect on the passions of that night? Wow, what a way to end a season!!! Bette and Tina wrecked on the shores of infidelity! Season One was great, even with the Marcus Allenwood’s stupid girlfriend and Jenny’s mushroom trip. It was great, I tell you! You’re bringing it back. Thanks!

    4. ” The dominance of the act had aroused her and she had allowed herself to view it as sexual rather than controlling.” – interesting to finally see what was going through their minds at that time – wow

    5. This was such a hard scene to watch in season 1 and it is still hard to remember it this far out. It brings up such uncomfortable feelings still. This conversation was great. Thanks for bringing this story back!

    6. What an excellent chapter. The way you wrote about the rape scene was extraordinary. So complex, and so subjective. I’m really loving reading this story.

    7. Wow this was a hard conversation. I, too, shuttered at the word ‘rape’. It is so hard, I remember at that time a lot of conversation going on around whether that was or was not rape. What I do know is that the conversation was hard in this chapter and will continue to be hard. You’ve got me hooked, amazing writing, and thank you!

    8. This was the chapter that got me so hooked on your story in the first place. When Tina used the word rape, I remember thinking, What?! And then I went through the scene in my mind. You’ve written this so well, from both perspectives…I can’t wait for the rest of the conversation. Fantastic writing!! Thank you!!

    9. I just have one question, you are going to finish it? I remember reading the first post and you left us hanging. please tell me we’re going to get a good ending

    11. that was the hardest scene to watch in season 1, so well done…the way you wrote about it brought back all those painful memories for them both but if they will survive that, they should be okay, right? i hope so :)

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