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QUE SERA SERA- Chapter 11
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“Right!”
“And I’ll see you around 7!”
“Bette! You already told me all of this girl!”
“Ok, ok, I know…” Bette smiled into the mouthpiece again.
“And where the hell are you going girl? It sounds like you’re driving in the middle of a tornado or something down there with all that wind!”
“Aw, don’t ask Kit, just don’t ask! Right, I’ll see you tonight then!”
“Right girl! See you tonight!”
Bette snapped her cell shut and discarded it on the passenger seat next to her.
She checked her watch…3.37pm.
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“Hi!…Well how’s that for impeccable timing!” Bette smiled as Helena opened the front door.
“Bette! What are you doing here?” Helena exclaimed, holding the door open and moving aside, “Thank you Tony, see you on Monday…” Helena said as Tony walked out.
“Yea, see you Monday Helena…don’t worry, just a little more work and you’ll have that crow in its cage in no time! See you Monday!” Tony said winking at Helena and giving Bette a thumbs up before walking off.
“Bye!” Bette called and Tony waved back before getting into his car.
“The crow in its cage???” Bette raised an eyebrow and smiled playfully at Helena, “Weeell…are you just gonna stand there or are you going to invite me in?!”
(The crow is a yoga position that needs a lot of upper body strength: you lift and balance your legs on top of your arms with your buttocks up in the air…It sort of looks like a messed up hand stand! :) )
“Do I have a choice?” Helena said leaving the door open and walking back inside.
“Nope.” Bette grinned at Helena’s back and followed her into the kitchen.
“Drink?” Helena asked opening the fridge and looking inside, “there’s Perrier, orange…”
“No, I’m alright thanks.” Bette interrupted mid-sentence, noticing the complete difference in the girlish way Helena was dressed now compared to her formality this morning.
“So, how did you know where I was?” Helena called from inside the fridge and lifted a Perrier.
“Well it wasn’t really that hard…considering that you left your diary wide open on your dressing table last night with the time of your half hour yoga session with Tony circled in red!”
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Helen needs to lighten up…Bette can’t help the way Tina feels. She needs to let Bette explain and stop being in denial…she knows she wants her no matter how many times she tries to convince herself that she’ll be fine without Bette. What did Blues Travelers say…the hook brings you back…thanks for posting…
Thanks for another great chapter Nesha. =) 5 Stars
Great chapter. I didn’t mind going back to read the other chapters. It had been so long since you posted I needed to put the story in the proper context. I do like the flow of your story. You thought this one was long. I thought it was too short. Please continue on more and soon. I think this is going to be a tough road for our trio. Looking forward to seeing where you go with it.
nesha..amazing read i went through all your chappys from before and refreshed myself but so worth it :) bettys kisses oh my…:) i really admire your writing style …U bring life in words and give me a feeling as if everythin is happenin right in front of me ..hats off
Helena knows her weakness….BETTE PORTER…..Did you have to stop there? Post Real Soon!!!!!!
Girl u’ve gone and done it again! yes ur a very very good writer and i’m happy u’ve come back to us :) :) :) Please post soon.
Nesha! Why didn’t you yell at me for not commenting. I know I commented on one of those damn threads but I just can’t keep track anymore!! sorry! Love the last two chapters and I’m soo glad you picked it back up. I think Tina is loony and needs major help and I think that Bette better start talking fast hey? Can’t wait for more!
nesha..that was good…i understand where helena is coming from…she doesn’t want to put herself out there if there is a chance that bette isn’t ready…bette has to – pardon the express – “man up”…check tina, and get to gettin’ with ms. peabody – cause she is fineeeeeee. really liked the update…but you gotta stop leaving us hangin’ like this…what’s up with that? LOL…Thanks for the post.
Shit girl, this was really good, you’re a natural. There’s no way Helena can resist Bette, no way at all. My heart was racing at the end and it’s still pounding now. I really hope the next chapter will come very soon.
I thought I’d just go back a chapter or 2 and refresh my mind. Instead, I started @ 1 & didn’t stop until I arrived here. I understand H’s position; she spends an incredible night w/ Bette only 2 find B / T lip locking the next morning. Right about now, H has every right 2 feel as she does. As Sky pointed out, Bette can’t B responsible for how T feels; hell, T doesn’t even know what she feels. As much as I want H / B 2 make love all the time, I don’t want them 2 make the same mistakes that B / T did. Instead of talking about what’s bothering them, B / T would always have sex, and act like their problems were solved. Not that I want H / B 2 talk this 2 death, but I don’t think they’ve talked about it enuf b4 B started seducing H again. Nesha, QQ’g 4wrd 2 the next chapter. Hope it’s sQQn!!
wow Nesh that was cool and Helena can’t resist the Porter charm, she just can’t so stop fighting it H and enjoy every moment of it LOL
nesha!! Wow, i really enjoyed them!! So great!! Thanks for telling me about your stories :-D
That was amazing, thanks Nesha! Also, thanks for taking my comment into consideration and elaborating on that a bit more. Although, if I may clarify, its not that I didn’t get how Helena is able to do that, I was merely commenting on how that blew me away, kind of :) Anyway, this was really really good…I think I, for one, like it better when you edit less and let it flow more.
oh wow helena needs to just stop fighting it and give in, she knows she can resist bette!!!!! Great chapter Nesha!!!! i cant wait for the next im so happy your posting again
Nesha-Bette a lousy kisser–forget about it! I can’t believe ou ended the chapter right there-you big tease. Helena is goin to have to accept that Bette can’t control the way Tina feels about her and be a litte more secure when it comes to Bette saying she is done w/ Tina. Please post soon.