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QUE SERA SERA- Chapter 17
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“Your ideas for Angelica’s birthday?” Bette asked, “You did say you wanted to talk about Angelica’s birthday didn’t you?”
“Yes, I did. Bette, I want to take Angelica away. It’s her first birthday and…”
“That’s a fantastic idea Tina! Why didn’t I think of that?!”
Tina shook her head, “No, wait…let me finish…”
“Ok…” Bette agreed, seeing the sombre look on Tina’s face, “Go ahead…”
“Henry and I want to take Angelica and Mikey to Disneyland for her birthday…Now I’m not saying we…”
“You what?” Bette asked disbelievingly.
“We want to take her and Mikey to Disneyland for…”
“I can’t believe this!” Bette shook her head.
“It’s her first birthday and…”
“No.” Bette interrupted quietly.
“No?” Tina answered.
“I said no. It’s my daughter’s first birthday and you want her to spend it away from her mother? Tina!”
“Bette, I’m not saying you won’t be able to…”
“You’re going to take that away from me? I can’t believe you’d be that cruel!” Bette interrupted again.
“Bette! I’m not taking anything away from you! Can you listen to me for a minute please?!”
“Listen to you? Tina, you just told me you want my daughter to spend her first birthday away from her mother and you still want me to listen to you?! The answer is no. I’m not going to let it happen! It’s not going to happen! How could you even consider it? You can tell Henry to go fuck himself!” Bette said vehemently and stood up.
“Bette…God, will you just listen woman?” Tina stood up and called exasperatedly after Bette who was heading inside.
Juggling Angelica carefully into her other hand she followed Bette indoors.
Seeing Bette disappear into her bedroom, she walked to the nursery and settled Angelica with her Winnie the Pooh stuffed toy and a soft rattle.
God, this was turning out to be harder than she’d thought it would be!
Closing the nursery room door behind her, she switched the baby monitor on and placed it in her pocket then went to look for Bette.
Knocking on Bette’s bedroom door, she opened it and went in. Seeing smoke coming out of the shower, she sat on the bed to wait.
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alrighty then
I think you blew my mind with that ending. never figured that would happen Great writing
Neeeeeshaaaa, I am so glad that you are back. On to the story: Whaaaaaat?!!!
aaaaarggh no no no!! please let Bette say no to that! pretty please? oh can I use those 100 brownie points to convince u to write Bette saying no to Tina? (OR I could put those points to better use!) ;) really really loved this one as well babe- the unediting shows, trust me. And you DO have every right to be proud of this one- I felt like I was part of Bette’s every emotion.. excitement to see Angelica, at ease with Kit, and annoyance at what Tina said. Brilliant chapter, seamlessly written. Thanks, can’t wait for more! PS: I’m really glad you think my writing’s good. Hope you know I think the same of yours!
oh shiz-nit…didn’t see that happening. what will bette do? will her body give in to reflex, will she hurl, or will she slap the shiz-nit out of tina for playin’ her? well, post soon so that we can find out. enjoyed the post…looking forward to the next.
Whaow ! I’m so late to comment. Anyway, this was a grrrreat chapter, Nesha. I loooove the last twist. You sure know how to keep this thrilling for your readers, girl ! You know, even though I don’t think Bette is gonna give in to Tina this time, I must confess a part of me would like to see that happen… Anyway, I’m really loving this triangular story between Helena, Bette and Tina and I know I’m gonna sound like a perv, but what the hell, I’ll say it anyway : bring on the threesome, Nesha ! LOL ! Just kidding, of course !
INCREDIBLE ENDING!! Didn’t see that coming. What is with Tina? she just wants everyone– not caring who she hurts. See, THIS is why I like Bette and Helena together. Tina is crazy these days. Great story!!!!!!
Hey girl, first you let us wait for 19 days, then you come sneaking in and give us a cliffhanger as big as a house. Shame on you ;). On the other hand I have to commit that this is an excellent chapter worth waiting for, sure hope the next one can be expected this weekend. Btw. Bettefortina I don’t think it’s an ego thing that’s goin’ on with Tina. It’s common knowledge that one can have almost the same feelings for two different persons, though it’s very confusing it can happen. Sometimes it’s necessary to look with someone else’s eyes just to see what’s right in front of you. I do hope they both make the right choices. Nesha thanks again for this great chapter.
Oh no you didn’t!!!! Ok we tagged you and I guess we deserved you leaving us hanging like that BUT Nesha babes???? This is BeLena talking don’t please don’t let B & T get back together again. Please give Bette the strenght to push that dicklover away from her please for the sake of BeLena. PPS
*sputters* OK, what did Tina lace her tongue with? That plus Bette’s record of Her Body vs. Bette with Her Body +1, Bette 0, uh-oh!! Naaaah, Bette won’t hurt Helena *innocent smile* Right? *smile wavering* Never ever *nod*
what a gr8 cliffhanger Nesha, this is a really really good chapter and i really cant wait to find oiut if tina a nd Bette get it on. i hope they do and i hope they don’t i can’t wait to see what you write for us, please publish soon ok thanks.
My first reaction to seeing the story. YES!!!.nesha has posted again. My first reaction after reading the story. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!. NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!. NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
lol….love you Neesha! I was reading this and was like ” she said this one was for me but all Tina is doing is twisting the knife in Bette’s heart by asking her to go with her male lover and son to freakin Disneyland” then I got to the last few sentences and I was like “yeah baby” but I know what you’re gonna do…sigh…you have all these Belena’s crying about the injustice and what is Bette thinking…so what you’re gonna do in the start of your next chapter is have Bette push Tina away from kissing her and send her away…and I say this because you are a tease…lol…but I could be wrong…prove me wrong Nesha
Haha, shame on you getting all the Belena fans worked up only to put Tina back in the mix. Love your work as always babe xxx
ok so that is very mean of you to leave us hanging liek that lol but yeah ppskthx
More B & T, Please? How sexy they are fighting one minute, then Tina has her hands inside of Bette’s robe the next. Absolutely lovin’ it. Oh, and please disregard “witches” comment. Do not have Bette say “no”, make her say “Yes” and let them both have mind blowing make up sex!!! LOL!
real good chapter Nesha =)
well damn nesha you get me all riled up and then boom……no follow through. I just don’t get Tina. She wants Bette, she wants Henry, she doesn’t Bette to be w/ anyone else—the ego on that chick. I know I said the suspense was killing me but deep down i like it. I ove that you keep me guessing so keep it up and i can’t wait for the next post. Until then my imagination will just have to run wild w/ what is happening b/w Bette and Tina in that bedroom right now…..
I”l give A fREE GETOUT OF JAIL CARD some strawberry Ice Crean, Dont lke Bettes body betray her. Let her say NO Her let Tina take Her boy toy to disney land and his son and Angie,just get her out of her home. Leave Bette in peace. thanks PS honey am a reader not a writer. thanks