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QUE SERA SERA- Chapter 17
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Eventually when Bette emerged in her white bathrobe, she stood up and walked towards her.
A little shocked, Bette ignored her and sat at her dressing room table drying her hair with a fluffy white towel.
“Bette, will you just listen to me? Let me finish what I was trying to say for God’s sake!”
“Look, it doesn’t matter. What the hell does it matter Tina? You said it in plain English. You want to take her away and I said no and that’s that. End of story.”
“Bette I was going to suggest you come with us! I’m not doing this to hurt you!”
“You want me to come with you?”
“Yes! That’s what I’ve been trying to tell you all along!” Tina pleaded.
“Oh don’t fucking patronise me Tina. How dare you even think that I’d go along with you and your fucking lover with our daughter for her first birthday? God the thought makes me sick!” Bette retorted standing up and flinging her hair towel onto the stool she was sitting on.
“Well I thought you could come with us or maybe we could celebrate with you before we go!” Tina explained passionately and her eyes dropped slowly to Bette’s partially uncovered cleavage.
Bette saw the eye movement and turned away to look for her moisturiser, “Well the answer is still no Tina. I’m not changing my mind.”
Tina watched her search the dressing table for it.
“Did you fuck her then?”
“What?” Bette turned around in disbelief.
“You heard me.” Tina replied.
“Did you fuck Henry today? No, wait, I really don’t want to know the answer to that.” Bette responded.
Tina looked intently into Bette’s eyes.
“That’s none of your business anymore.” Bette continued curtly, starting to moisturise her face.
“You’re the mother of my child so it is my business. You don’t teach any classes this late…I phoned Kit and you weren’t here…”
“You’re keeping tabs on me? Ha! Well that makes a nice change considering you dumped me months ago…” Bette laughed disbelievingly and shook her head. She turned around to face the mirror and continued moisturising.
“Bette…”
“Tina, the answer is no. I’m not changing my mind about it.” Bette answered camly.
“Bette…”
“What?” Bette answered turning around.
She felt Tina’s arms embrace her underneath her robe and as she gasped in disbelief, she felt Tina’s sweet hot tongue enter her mouth passionately. It felt good.
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tbc.
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alrighty then
I think you blew my mind with that ending. never figured that would happen Great writing
Neeeeeshaaaa, I am so glad that you are back. On to the story: Whaaaaaat?!!!
aaaaarggh no no no!! please let Bette say no to that! pretty please? oh can I use those 100 brownie points to convince u to write Bette saying no to Tina? (OR I could put those points to better use!) ;) really really loved this one as well babe- the unediting shows, trust me. And you DO have every right to be proud of this one- I felt like I was part of Bette’s every emotion.. excitement to see Angelica, at ease with Kit, and annoyance at what Tina said. Brilliant chapter, seamlessly written. Thanks, can’t wait for more! PS: I’m really glad you think my writing’s good. Hope you know I think the same of yours!
oh shiz-nit…didn’t see that happening. what will bette do? will her body give in to reflex, will she hurl, or will she slap the shiz-nit out of tina for playin’ her? well, post soon so that we can find out. enjoyed the post…looking forward to the next.
Whaow ! I’m so late to comment. Anyway, this was a grrrreat chapter, Nesha. I loooove the last twist. You sure know how to keep this thrilling for your readers, girl ! You know, even though I don’t think Bette is gonna give in to Tina this time, I must confess a part of me would like to see that happen… Anyway, I’m really loving this triangular story between Helena, Bette and Tina and I know I’m gonna sound like a perv, but what the hell, I’ll say it anyway : bring on the threesome, Nesha ! LOL ! Just kidding, of course !
INCREDIBLE ENDING!! Didn’t see that coming. What is with Tina? she just wants everyone– not caring who she hurts. See, THIS is why I like Bette and Helena together. Tina is crazy these days. Great story!!!!!!
Hey girl, first you let us wait for 19 days, then you come sneaking in and give us a cliffhanger as big as a house. Shame on you ;). On the other hand I have to commit that this is an excellent chapter worth waiting for, sure hope the next one can be expected this weekend. Btw. Bettefortina I don’t think it’s an ego thing that’s goin’ on with Tina. It’s common knowledge that one can have almost the same feelings for two different persons, though it’s very confusing it can happen. Sometimes it’s necessary to look with someone else’s eyes just to see what’s right in front of you. I do hope they both make the right choices. Nesha thanks again for this great chapter.
Oh no you didn’t!!!! Ok we tagged you and I guess we deserved you leaving us hanging like that BUT Nesha babes???? This is BeLena talking don’t please don’t let B & T get back together again. Please give Bette the strenght to push that dicklover away from her please for the sake of BeLena. PPS
*sputters* OK, what did Tina lace her tongue with? That plus Bette’s record of Her Body vs. Bette with Her Body +1, Bette 0, uh-oh!! Naaaah, Bette won’t hurt Helena *innocent smile* Right? *smile wavering* Never ever *nod*
what a gr8 cliffhanger Nesha, this is a really really good chapter and i really cant wait to find oiut if tina a nd Bette get it on. i hope they do and i hope they don’t i can’t wait to see what you write for us, please publish soon ok thanks.
My first reaction to seeing the story. YES!!!.nesha has posted again. My first reaction after reading the story. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!. NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!. NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
lol….love you Neesha! I was reading this and was like ” she said this one was for me but all Tina is doing is twisting the knife in Bette’s heart by asking her to go with her male lover and son to freakin Disneyland” then I got to the last few sentences and I was like “yeah baby” but I know what you’re gonna do…sigh…you have all these Belena’s crying about the injustice and what is Bette thinking…so what you’re gonna do in the start of your next chapter is have Bette push Tina away from kissing her and send her away…and I say this because you are a tease…lol…but I could be wrong…prove me wrong Nesha
Haha, shame on you getting all the Belena fans worked up only to put Tina back in the mix. Love your work as always babe xxx
ok so that is very mean of you to leave us hanging liek that lol but yeah ppskthx
More B & T, Please? How sexy they are fighting one minute, then Tina has her hands inside of Bette’s robe the next. Absolutely lovin’ it. Oh, and please disregard “witches” comment. Do not have Bette say “no”, make her say “Yes” and let them both have mind blowing make up sex!!! LOL!
real good chapter Nesha =)
well damn nesha you get me all riled up and then boom……no follow through. I just don’t get Tina. She wants Bette, she wants Henry, she doesn’t Bette to be w/ anyone else—the ego on that chick. I know I said the suspense was killing me but deep down i like it. I ove that you keep me guessing so keep it up and i can’t wait for the next post. Until then my imagination will just have to run wild w/ what is happening b/w Bette and Tina in that bedroom right now…..
I”l give A fREE GETOUT OF JAIL CARD some strawberry Ice Crean, Dont lke Bettes body betray her. Let her say NO Her let Tina take Her boy toy to disney land and his son and Angie,just get her out of her home. Leave Bette in peace. thanks PS honey am a reader not a writer. thanks