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QUE SERA SERA- Chapter 20
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“She is…she’s sooo tired baby…” Dana purred taking Alice in her arms.
“Aww…my baby…” Alice purred in response, bending her head again to Dana’s lips.
“Missed you…” Dana mumbled against Alice’s lips.
“Missed you too…” Alice whispered.
“That was Bette. Wanna go to the Planet tonight for a girl’s night out? Kit’s got this new band playing.”
“How’s Bette and Helena?” Dana asked propping her head on her hand now with interest.
“Well…it looks like there’s been trouble in paradise today…Helena’s not taking Bette’s calls…and Bette asked me to find out if she was going tonight.” Alice said lowering her voice conspiratorially.
“Already! So is she going?” Dana asked disbelievingly.
Alice nodded.
“Do you know why? Does she know Bette’s gonna be there?”
“No and to your second question, I dunno either. She didn’t ask about Bette when I rang and I didn’t want to say anything.”
“Wow…count me in then…this I gotta see!” Dana grinned pulling Alice into her arms again.
“Now what’s all this I hear about you wanting to kiss someone’s sweet ass?” Dana continued grinning up at Alice.
“Well…if you’re too tired…(kiss)…maybe…(kiss)…another time…” Alice said huskily…
“I’m not baby…you so know I’m not…” Dana cooed.
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“Aw, Dana, how are you?” Bette shouted over the music, leaning over to kiss Dana’s cheek.
“Good, good. Thanks. And you?” Dana nodded and replied loudly.
“I’m good. Alice, thanks.” She replied smiling and leaning over to kiss Alice now.
“Oh you’re not gonna start that again…” Alice grinned hugging Bette.
“Ok…I’ll stop…” Bette gave in, scanning the entrance again.
“Oooo….there’s Shane! Shane! Over here!” Dana exclaimed loudly, waving and shouting.
“Hi guys, how’s it going?” Shane asked loudly, kissing them each in turn.
“Jenny an’ Max are just behind me.” she added.
“Great, you know they live next door to me and I hardly see them anymore…” Bette said shouting.
“So, who’s getting the drinks in?” Shane smiled.
“Usuals everyone?” Bette volunteered.
Shane and Dana nodded.
“I think I’ll have a screaming orgasm. Thanks Bette.” Alice beamed mischievously.
“Coming right up.” Bette smiled, turning on her heels towards the bar.
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Now you know you are wrong…all that space you had left on the page…you could have written something…lol. Keep posting I love me some drama.
uh oh….somebody’s gonna get it…skycaptain is right, you are sooooo wrong for leaving us hanging like this…it’s like a banana split with no bananas…you’ve got to post soon…PLEASE!
Great Chapter as alwaays Sis =)Can’t wait for the next…
I was so excited to see four pages…But as is Nesha’s style she’s left us hanging again.I love that Bette’s jealous. Now we wait for the explosion.
*read like fine print* Niki’s play by plays are reserved for drama only. So here goes: *whispering* Dag on it where is she? I know she saw them. Tina, keep it in your pants…who’s the latin guy?…oh, it’s Al..hehe…what is with all the kissin’? This has got to be the English version.!! PB and hot sauce…ewww…….Melanie?….what the?…aaaaahhhhh……..alpha Bet—I agree with Sky, now you KNOW that YOU are wrong, girl!!! Get back here! PPS
You are so wrong, so very wrong. Wht did you leave us hanging. that is so bad. Someone is in trouble. But who/ thanks
wow….datz intense
CLIFFHANGER! Nooo. That was soooooooooo not nice.
OK, so I gave in and read it early. I figure it wouldn’t take TOO long because you like adding a ton of space between your lines >:o ;p :D :D It’s so like Helena to bring some new girl in when she feels hurt or vulnerable. Yay for Bette! You grab that arm of Helena’s! I can’t wait for some heated verbal exchange between the two!
oh shoot!!!! Porter on the move and that could be one dangerous thing. I’m with sky captain though, you were hecka wrong for leaving all that space one the bottom of the page, you know you could of filled that up a little more LOL
Nesha – I’m glad you’re back sweetie but damn did you have to bring the drama right away. So Tina still confuses me; I don’t know who the hell she wantsto be w/ but I wish she’d make up her mind already. And poor Bette; Helena is handling this the exact wrong way. If only she would try hearing Bette out instead of trying to show her up….. post soon please.
Damn, I’ve just noticed you had updated on the 4th november ! And now I’m so late to comment… A
Damn, I’ve just noticed you had updated on the 4th november ! And now I’m so late to comment… A
Oh my God Nesha how could you do this to us??? You really are the queen of cliffhangers huh? Don’t wait another month before you give us the rest of this story girl, we won’t make it that long LOLZ
great chapter! really love the drama! thank u! pls post soon!
Brilliant chapter as always! Love your portrayal of Alice and Dana. And I really like how your very own sense of quirkiness is becoming infused in your writing- ‘the sofa said’ :D Great! Loved it, thanks, and do post soon!
omg, what does Bette really want? and as for Tina, shame on her!!!
I agree with Rau. Helena isn’t a toy and yet Bette seems to be treating her like a yo-yo. Which coincidently is exactly how Bette is letting Tina treat her. Where’d her spine go?
these two really nned to talk and get things sortet out… please don’t let them split up…. PPS… btw… great chapter
Ooh, drama drama drama! I don’t know how Bette can justify being angry at Helena when she’s treating her like a toy she can use whenever she wants. How hypocritical! Honestly! Come on, Bette… dump Tina and choose Helena already!
fantastic chapter nesha. i been sitting on te edge of my seat waiting for the end to see what would happen and you leave me with a cliffhanger like that. i’m having a moan but i really love it. good chapter we missed you. post soon ok
Tina’s crazy and Bette needs to figure out that Helena is the one for her….Make Helena see that Bette is the one for her too!!!!
About bleedin time darlin. You cant leave us hanging like that. However I will forgive you this time cause you put my fav ladies in this chapter (kisses). Still loving the story babe, please try not to make us wait as long next time xxxx
OUCH, that one had to hurt. Poor Bette, she’s got quite the uphill battle on her hands.
Keeping us waiting that long for an R rated story???. Well ok, it was beautifully written, good character analyses, great dialogues and we’ve got 4 pages and a cliffhanger. But I longed for a hot, sizzling sexscene. Nevertheless, thanks for sharing this great story.
Alright, I have absolutely no idea what happened last night with my computer, I thought I was in the twilight zone, even thought I was interrupted while writing my comment I somehow “managed” to double post ??… And then my connection died. I’m thinking it’s a conspiracy, but since I have no other evidence… Anyway, I just wanted to say I have loved this chapter. When Helena made her arrival at the Planet I even could picture her moving in slow motion and I was sure Bette was going to faint !… LOL ! But seriously, I was totally carried away by this chapter. This is just so thrilling. Thank you very much, Nesha.Ok, off to read your new chapter now !