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    Ramblings – Chapter 24

    Bette: Listen I know … I know it must really hurt but Jenny is a writer, you know? I mean writers crave experience. I mean, what if that’s all it was with Marina?

    Tim: What, craving experience? You think so … I think it was you fucking dykes, that’s what I think.

    Bette: Hey, don’t curse us all, OK? That’s why Tina and I left your dinner party because we didn’t want to be any part of it…

    Tim looks at Bette as if he’s been slapped in the face. Both Jenny and Marina had told him
    that it was just the one time. Bette is flustered but it’s too late to take the words back.

    Bette: Oh my God … you didn’t know it was already going on then? Tim I didn’t … I’m so sorry. I didn’t say anything because I didn’t know what to do. I mean you’re my friend and sometimes people kill the messenger.

    Tim is furious and starts yelling at Bette.

    Tim: How long was it going on?

    Bette: You know I think you should ask Jenny that question

    Tim: Why won’t anyone tell me the truth, Bette?

    Bette: I mean … no more than a month

    Tim: How many times

    Bette: Tim I have no way of knowing that

    Tim: What 10? 100? I mean come on Bette I thought we were friends right?

    Bette: I am your friend … I just … I don’t know. I’m sorry

    ***

    “It doesn’t sound like you were much help in easing his pain. Actually sounds like you added to it by telling him that you suspected it was already going on that night we had dinner at their house.”

    “I didn’t do that on purpose. I really thought he knew.”

    “I feel bad for him. He must have been really devastated to just up and move back to Ohio. I never even got to say goodbye to him.”

    “Yeah … he told me to say goodbye to you for him but I guess I never got the chance. You’d moved out and we weren’t exactly on speaking terms.”

    “I suppose you didn’t tell him why I’d moved out.”

    “No I didn’t even tell him that you’d moved out. He just assumed you weren’t home and I didn’t elaborate.”

    Comments

    1. Oh it makes sense BAT and personally I like the way you are writing it.

      Reminders of the parts of the show are good and highlight the issues to be dealt with.

      I certainly did not feel disconnected from Bette in any way.

      Thank you as always. Enjoyed it ready for the next post.

    2. It did make sense to me. It is important what Bette was feeling at that time and why she succumbed to Candace and betrayed her own morals. Heck, even i would have cracked. There was so much going on and her relationship was already in heavy waters, she was right, they should have had seperate then to spare them all the pain instead of bringing a baby in their lives to save their marriage.

      She said very honest and thruthful things, but you had me scared for a moment that she wanted to break up and only wanted to be parents to Angie with Tina.

      I can see/read that Alice played a (big)part in the down fall of their relationship with her actions,She did it with good intentions, but she caused them harm with her advice and mingling.

      Ok, enough rambling, i hope i made sense, English is not my native language. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you.

    3. Bibi28 You make perfect sense, and you got what I was trying to convey in this chapter so thank you for letting me know that my ramblings actually got the point across. The next chapter is posted.

    4. BETTE had no compunction calling MARINA out yet held on to her high morals about monogamy to ALICE.While in NY she never gave it a second thought when she heard TINA needed her,she came home.BETTE held it in her mind somehow that becuz TINA couldn’t come with her she didn’t want BETTE to go.TINA was in a way asking BETTE to choose her/baby or NY and once she came back home lo and behold TINA is just fine.Breaking up another foolish thought of BETTE’s but happened anyway .Was this her way of getting out from under the pressure of job,lack of intimacy,becoming the most wanted lesbian in we-ho again,or perhaps she was over her head in self doubt about what family means coming from one so dysfunctional?When they were boring they at least spent the time with each other and at home.Trying to change from homebodies to life of the party had major setbacks for them both.thanks

    5. The conflicting feelings of the beginning of the first pregnancy of Tina,
      messed with Bette, because it was a turning point in the family life of the couple, the pregnancy period in the life of Tina and Bette unfortunately bring about change, psychological and social influencing the dynamics of the couple as their own marriage relationship.
      It was a daydream on my part.
      Sorry if I said something stupid.
      The complete constellation.

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