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Random Acts – Chapter 10 – Part 3
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“Hey baby, how did it go?”
“Good I think.”
“What does that mean exactly?”
“It was weird. Tina was very introspective. Apologizing for everything that happened between us. She is going into therapy.”
“How do you feel about that? Does it mean she will be in town more frequently?”
“I want her to be happy so if this helps then I’m good with it. And yes she will be in town with very little travel. She wants to see more of Angelica but doesn’t want to split custody just yet.”
“Sounds like you had quite the morning and its only 9. Let me help you relax.”
“What did you have in mind?”
“Hmmm, come here.”
She moved to sit up and come towards me but I stopped her. I moved the sheet down to reveal her round breasts and used my fingertips to softly stroke them. I watched as her nipples hardened and I longed to take each of them in my mouth but decided to tease her a bit more.
“Ah God, you’re such a tease baby. Put that legendary tongue of yours to good use and lick me.”
“Tell me where baby?”
“Here.” Her right hand tweaked her right nipple.
“Here.” Her left finger and thumb rolled her left nipple over and over and then she pulled gently.
“Here.” Her right index finger trailed along the valley between her breasts, down to her belly button, past her patch of hair and rested on her clit. I moaned and took a deep breath.
“Anywhere else baby/”
“Oh yeah, here.” She entered herself with two fingers and stroked in and out a few times as I watched and felt my own wetness start to overflow. She was driving me absolutely fucking crazy and she damn well knew it.
“And here.” She removed her fingers and brought them to my mouth. I eagerly devoured them as if they were my last supper. Her smell combined with her sweet taste put my senses into overdrive. I heard her moan as I licked and sucked her fingers clean.
“God you are so damn hot,” I said as I lay down on top of her so our breasts were touching. I lowered my hips then and began to undulate them slowly, every so often pushing into her and grinding. She kept time with my rhythm and we were soon lost in our own little world. Kissing and touching and moaning. I had an overwhelming desire to taste her and be tasted so I asked her to flip around. I plunged my tongue into her at the same exact moment that she entered me with hers. I pushed forward and used my nose to rub her clit and my tongue to stroke her walls. I was holding on for dear life as my own orgasm built and built. I waited until I felt her walls begin to collapse around my tongue before I let myself go. We orgasmic almost simultaneously and spent the next few minutes licking up each others juices before we settled into each others arms. My breathing was barely evening out when the phone rang.
“Don’t answer that,” I said.
“But what if it’s Tina about Angelica.”
“Shit, ok, go ahead.”
“Hello?”
“Hey Carmen, its Tina. I’m sorry to bother you but Angelica is asking for one of her stuffed animals.”
Carmen handed me the phone and I arranged for Tee to come over to pick up the Winnie the Pooh that Angie was demanding.
Tina hung up the phone totally embarrassed that she had to obviously interrupted Bette and Carmen. She could tell by Bette’s breathing that they had just made love. You don’t live with and love someone for 8 years without know these things. She felt a wave of jealously wash over herself and shook her head in disbelief. I really never stopped loving her.
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Bette and Carmen would be HOT! It’s great to see you ramdonly posting again, lol! Excellent chapter!
See, I was so excited, I couldn’t spell. Randomly *giggles*
I immediayely stopped rading after I knew the identity. Not consistent with Bette’s character at all. Too many class, IQ and educational diferenes – and those traits are all important to Bette whether we like it or not. Bette can get someone who is hot AND smart. Sorry if I sound snobbish but I am spaking on behalf of the haughty Bette. I appreciate the thought experiment of pairing Bette with various women but an author as good as you cannot give up the essential character for some plot points. Again, sorry if I sound harsh but I speak as someone who has always admired your enormous writing skills.
Fortlw, you are certainly entitled to your opinion. No need to apologize for it. I guess I wrote this from the perspective that Bette was beaten down, lost and not feeling her alpha self after Tina got “done” with her. She needed some TLC and adoration and I think Carmen is capable of that. Plus I wanted to just turn things upside down….if Ilene can do it so can I. Lol.
No, revenge is a dish best served hot!
Testing.
interesting…
Nice twist Chase – didn’t see that one coming at all. Thanks for writing, this piece was all class.
i guess shane is lonely as well now LOL…well, another tibetter gave up on B&T, but at least tina is admitting her love for bette…i hope the next random act would be for B&T
You have managed to put into words exactly what I’ve been feeling. It’s difficult to put yourself into a frame of mind where B&T are happy when each week, they’re being beaten down by the situation the characters are faced with. Thanks for sharing a story with us. I agree – Carmen could boost almost anyone’s self esteem. And the Tina as we’ve seen her does need therapy, and I would be checking for pods.
Liked this very much – although the Bette we see on the show seems a little too conservative for Carmen in bed I think – but loved your vision.
Excellent as always. In the series now, I see Bette as being terribly selfish. I am in the minority I know but I can really see things more from Tina’s point of view. (Except for the man thing)
Chase!!!! You always did know how to get our juices flowing…….creative juices that is!! :-) Glad to see you back!!
WTF!!!!!!! bette , carmen hotttttttttttt
I was so happy to see that you had posted. Of course, my happiness ended with your author’s note. It seems the torture has spread to FF as well. I despise the fact that the show is messing with some of my favorite authors. No hate here, I just didn’t like the chapter. Thanks for posting.
What a treat to have you back with a story that stirs everyone up. After the tv shows, I’m ready for anything. Thanks.
Oy, Oy Vey, Sheesh, blech and WTF? “Lucy…you’ve got some splaining to do.”
hey chase! good to see you again…your stories are always so hot!
Chase, Chase, Chase. It’s amazing that 6 mounths ago I’d be screaming but now it’s just awesome. Yes! Yes! Yes! I can so see this Bette and the pod Tina is exactly what we’ve been seeing this year. I loved this and you for writing it. Thanks for coming back
I like the pairing. I can see where your coming from with Bette hooking up with Carmen, why not???
Carmen and Bette together forever no, Pillow friends yes. Everyone needs someone sometimes. Glad to see Angie loves Bette so much. Didn’t want to stay with Tina,Tina is lucky to have someone like Bette to love her daughter so completely. You never know what you have until you do not have it. thanks
I was afraid the lover was going to be Candace, so Carmen was a relief! I see her as a good bed partner for Bette, but not much else. And if Tina hates that, it makes it even better. Cheers!
Hello Chase, it is such a pleasure to have your writing up on the board…As for this chapter I enjoyed it immensely—as from a writer’s viewpoint we allow our minds to take us to that “Place” and I loved where you took us…I can’t wait for the next one…Excellent as always…
Bette and Tina have both been ass’s on the show IMO. I don’t think Tina would leave Jeli like that. She may have issues with Bette but not enough to leave her daughter. I also agree with Southgirls comments :(
Oh Chase now you and Ilene are breaking my Tina lovin’ heart, you’re really trying to get my passive agressive side going aren’t you. Great writing as always, loved the twist at the end. 2 yo Angelica reminds me of someone…..you forgot the running away and trying to bite. lol
It is so nice to see how passionate everyone is about this chapter. For the record I am still a Tibetter at heart. I just wanted to do something different and stir the pot. Thanks for all your comments and I must say its a little disconcerting to have a 4 rating. Lol!
Dude my comment didn’t post again. Anyhoo, the sex was hot but I don’t see Carmen/Bette in any sort of relationship beyond the bedroom. Before reading this I reread the last chapter and it’s really hard for me to link those two together. I’m not liking Tina right now either but that wasn’t who I read about in the previous chapter.
First of all Chase you are an excellent write and I love you story, but I employ you and other Fanfiction writer NOT to let IC and S3 effect and or alter your storyline. As a TiBette fan it is also VERY hard for me to watch S3. What they are doing makes absolutly no sense to me, even after I factor all of my knowledge of filming and having to hide JB’s pregnancy. At this point the Fanfic.’s is our only refurge. Please stay the course until IC comes to her senses (and I hope it is before they cancel the show for low viewership). Yes this is fiction, but let get back to some reality B&T fiction :o)
Ah, Chase–You have to expect a 4 star for this kind of story. Comes with the territory. (smiling)
You wanna stir the pot eh? I do that an someone dies… Oh and btw… Not bad, pas bad at all… ya becming a real rabble-rouser… i like it!
I read one page and coudn’t read anymore. I started reading fan fiction because of the amazing woman who wrote great love stories about woman. The show is completely depressing now that the creators have given up on Bette and Tina. The reason I love fan fiction is because it seemed that what ever was going on in the show with Bette and Tina, the writers of fan fiction never gave up on them the way people do in real life. Now every fan fiction writer is giving up on Bette and Tina as well and forgetting how truley great they were. The writers of this show are on crack to split them up. But now its just sad that nobody has faith or loyalty. I know this happens in real life, but if we wanted real life we wouldn’t watch the show or read fan fiction. I love your writing, but please find some inspiration and the two together who really belong together!!!
Hmmm…I totally sympathize with the feeling of desperation because of the way the B&T relationship is crumbling in the show…and I enjoy the creative detours taken by the fanfic writers…and I love your work… but I’m just not feeling the Bette and Carmen thing. I dunno why…both are amazingly hot and awesome…but I just can’t see them together. Eh, to each their own. I still enjoyed the premise of the story and it was cute to see the toddler Angelica. Looking forward to more!
Chase, glad to see you’ve posted. Good to see Angelica so attached to Bette. And yeah, therapy will do Tina good. Bette & Carmen is an interesting pairing. Hmmm, I’ll reserve my opinion in the mean time. At this point, having Carmen say “come here” is just not the same as when Tina said it. Please continue and thanks for the chapter.
That was awesome and I think at this point we can take Bette and Tina with others. IC is breaking us in well..
Yes, indeed, Carmen was unexpected. But I think she would be a pleasant refuge. However I need an explanation for the position they ultimately adopted at the end of page 2. Or maybe an anatomy lesson. Anyway, I’m glad the pod is trying to get back in touch with herself at the very least. Whether she can get back in touch with Bette remains to be seen. Please just leave Kevin McCarthy out of it.
hey there- i thought it was a lot of fun. thanks for this and everything else that you write!
Great story, and yes, Tina needs her head examined! The way I feel right now, Bette and anyone would be hot. Another female, of course.
I applaud your courage, creativity and sense of hotness. Girl, you went for it. 5 Big Stars.
:O very very very very nice !!!!
I love this. I hope Bette makes Tina beg for another chance…I never thought that I’d say that because I love TiBette, but my heart is breaking for Bette this season.
Now that would be HOT…i loved the turn around in this…Bette having Angie,…Hell Bette having Carmen…lol love it
What the? You wanted to stir the pot? I think you were quite successful Chase. ;) Really enjoyed the suspense and the chapter as a whole. I think Angelica summed it up best when she said “No Tina, no Tina, no Tina”. LOL! I admire you for veering off the beaten path. Infinite stars from me…
donna your killing me… killing me
Turncoat, traitor, Benedict Arnold, lol. Use your powers for good why don’t ya? Let them love each other and be happy…please, pretty please?
Wow what a fucking hot couple – that was so great. I love this and especilly Bette and little Angel – so sweet :o)) Please continue with this – I hope B&T find back together now she is in town….
please post again.. i love bette and carmen stories..
Sad for Bette and Tina but damn Bette and Carmen is fucking hot and sexy. Ok post soon please, thanks!