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Real Love – Chapter Seventeen
Chapter Seventeen
Ben picked up his sister and was determined to pull Tina out of her emotional slump. After ten minutes of Donk telling Tina how beautiful she was, they were on their way.
Tina: “Im really glad you dragged me out tonight Ben, your such a wonderful brother” she smiled.
Ben: “I know things have sucked lately but everything is going to be ok.” he reassured her
They pulled up to the bar around eight and made their way inside.
Donk managed to grab a table while Tina and Ben got the drinks at the bar. Tina found a small gap in between two suits at the already crowded bar and slid in.
Ben: “Nice work” he said shaking his head in approval .
Tina: “Thanks.” she smiled then her thoughts trailed off.
Ben: “What’s up Tina?” he saw the sadness creeping back in to her eyes.
Tina: “It’s not that this isn’t fun or anything. I mean what more could a girl ask for, im hanging out with my little brother and” looks at the table. “Who is he again?”
Ben: “Donk’s awesome, he may be a little eccentric sometimes but he’s cool. He really likes to sing.” he laughed “But if your not having fun we can leave”
Tina: “No, no, this is fun, it’s just..”she trailed off
Ben: “you wish Bette were here?” he flashed a sympathetic grin.
Tina: “Or something like that..”
Ben: “Well that will be figured out soon enough, tonight we drink” he picks up his beer and raises it to Tina. “And sing” his eye lit up as he reached for the karaoke book.
Tina lagged behind and watched as her brother danced back to the table. She had grown envious of Ben in the past couple of days. There he was without a care in the world. He lived by the spur of the moment and didn’t believe in regret. Why couldn’t Tina be that way? Why couldn’t she get a Mohawk too (metaphoricly speaking of course, Tina would never dream of having that hair cut) Christ he was even more open minded than she was. Tina shook off her self loathing and made her way to the table. She was going to have a good time, darn it.
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(47 votes, average: 3.32 out of 5)
Noooooooooo Please make her go the the airport some how and sort it all out
OMG, you can’t leave us hanging like this!! Please hurry with another chapter!
Damn this is sad and hope Tina will find Bette before she leave. Good chapter, post soon. Thanks!
:( Well that’s not good. I hope Tina gets to her before she leaves. Love your story.
Oh sh#%t!!! This is so wrong!! No, I mean the thing with B & T, not the story…the story is really great! I am so hooked! Please post soon cause I’m afraid Bette’s gonna hop on that plane before Tina has a chance to talk to her! Hurry, Tina…hurry, Piratesb/f!!!
Cliffhanger!!! NOOOO, need more soon!!!!
Oooh! Make Bette have a flat on the way…thanks…hurry T!
Ouch! That’s was so
hurts I’m really sad OMG I’m feel the pain Whoa! LOL Beautiful Story keep it going Please post soon.
What a twist you made….what a cliffhanger. We neeeeeeed moooooorrrreee. Post soon
Oh come un you can’t leave us hanging like that Let Tina catch Bette before she leaves
Why in heaven’s name is Bette so impulsive? She doesn’t give anyone a chance to explain before condemnation!! But we all love her…and we know T does too…so have them work this thing out so that Tina will have support when she tells her folks about Bette!
awesome..plz cont!!
nooooooooo