Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of PG-13. Age verification is required to proceed.
Real Love – Chapter Seventeen
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Alice had been sitting outside Bette’s bedroom door for what seemed like a coons age.
Alice: “Come on Bette, you have to come out some time” she rested her back against the door.
Bette: “I changed my mind Alice, I don’t feel like going out, epically to a straight bar.”
Alice: “You really want me to sit out here all night, cause im not leaving until your in the car with me”
There was no response, Alice sat patiently in the silence trying to figure out her next move when all of a sudden she wasn’t leaning against the door anymore. She was flat on her back and Bette was standing above her, looking amazing as usual.
Alice: “Fantastic, let’s go” she sat up and climbed to her feet.
Bette: “Alright, you win but we can’t stay out too late I have to fly to Pittsburgh tomorrow”
Alice: “Oh yeah, I forgot. What are you doing there again?”
Bette: “Maybe you should try listening sometime and not to just the voices in your head”
Alice: “Oh well im glad to see your sass is back.” she scoffed as she climbed in to the car.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Tina had been nursing her second beer while the boys were already six rounds in and going strong. Ben sat quietly as he studied the songs listed in the karaoke book while Donk was on his way up to the stage for the third time.
Ben closed the book and pushed it aside. He looked as his watch then glanced around the bar.
Tina: “Waiting for someone?”
Ben: “What? No, just looking around”
Tina had a feeling that Ben might be hiding something and was about to question him further when she suddenly heard her name being called. A wave of embarrassment washed over her as she looked towards the stage.
Donk: “Tina Kennard, I dedicate this to you, my love.” he laughed
Tina put her hand over her face while Ben bursted out laughing. Somehow he composed a straight face as the sound of eighties pop filled the room followed by is rendition of Madonnas “Open Your Heart”.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.



(47 votes, average: 3.32 out of 5)
Noooooooooo Please make her go the the airport some how and sort it all out
OMG, you can’t leave us hanging like this!! Please hurry with another chapter!
Damn this is sad and hope Tina will find Bette before she leave. Good chapter, post soon. Thanks!
:( Well that’s not good. I hope Tina gets to her before she leaves. Love your story.
Oh sh#%t!!! This is so wrong!! No, I mean the thing with B & T, not the story…the story is really great! I am so hooked! Please post soon cause I’m afraid Bette’s gonna hop on that plane before Tina has a chance to talk to her! Hurry, Tina…hurry, Piratesb/f!!!
Cliffhanger!!! NOOOO, need more soon!!!!
Oooh! Make Bette have a flat on the way…thanks…hurry T!
Ouch! That’s was so
hurts I’m really sad OMG I’m feel the pain Whoa! LOL Beautiful Story keep it going Please post soon.
What a twist you made….what a cliffhanger. We neeeeeeed moooooorrrreee. Post soon
Oh come un you can’t leave us hanging like that Let Tina catch Bette before she leaves
Why in heaven’s name is Bette so impulsive? She doesn’t give anyone a chance to explain before condemnation!! But we all love her…and we know T does too…so have them work this thing out so that Tina will have support when she tells her folks about Bette!
awesome..plz cont!!
nooooooooo