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Realizing – Chapter 1
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“Okay.” He says and smiles. Tina places the food on the table and takes out a beer for Martin and an ice tea for herself. They both sit down.
“Tina, I’ve wanted to talk to you about something for a little time now, but haven’t found the right time.” Martin says and looks down before he looks into Tina’s eyes.
“What?” Tina asks as she takes a bite of the hotdog.
“Well. We’ve been together for a little over two years now and I love you, I’ve asked you to marry me. I love Angelica, I wish that she was mine, but she’s not. She already has two parents.” He starts.
“Martin, what is it?” Tina asks in a comforting voice.
“I want a kid, a baby… with you.” He says and holds his breath for Tina’s reaction.
“Oh wow.” Tina let out at first.
“Not exactly the reaction I hoped for.” Martin says.
“Martin, I… this is… I don’t know what to say.” Tina says.
“Well, you told me yourself that you wanted more kids.” Martin says and looks at Tina.
“Yes, I’ve always wanted more kids. I want Angelica to have a brother or a sister. But…” Tina says.
“Then what? I thought we were building a future here. I want a future with you Tina. I thought I made that clear by proposing to you.” Martin says.
“You did and I want that too. But I’m not sure I’m ready for another kid just yet.” Tina says. Martin smiles vaguely.
“Oh okay.” Martin says and takes Tina’s hand. “What about my proposal?” Martin asks.
“Didn’t I just answer that?” Tina says and smiles.
“I just wanted to make sure. I love you Tina.” He says and leans in and kisses her softly on the lips.
“I love you too.” Tina says and kisses him back.
Back at Bette’s.
Bette is in with Angelica to put her down for the night.
“Can I talk to mommy?” Angelica asks.
“Now? You want to talk to her before you go to sleep?” Bette asks.
“Can I?” She asks again.
“Sure, hold on, I’ll go and get the phone.” Bette says and runs into the kitchen to get her cell phone.
“She’s asleep?” Caitlin asks.
“No, she wants to talk to Tina first.” Bette says and smiles.
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Lauren, This story is just GREAT!!! I hope Bette will be OK. Please Post More Soon
this is a good story please post soon and please dont let it be a short story keep it going
Wow…I feel the emotion in this story…Poor Bette, I know this is what she did to Tina…but it hurts just the same. Why did Tina say yes to Martin if she has some unresolved feelings for Bette. I mean she dosen’t have to act on them but she dosen’t have to jump into a marriage and possible family if she isn’t sure. And I don’t understand Caitland…why bring that nonsense back to Bette’s house…surely she knew the risks…people just don’t think. Please post soon.
TINA TO THE RESCUEEEEE……YES…..I LOVE THIS …..PLEASE CONTINUE SOON…..
Damn this is awesome and love it. Bette and Tina need to get back together. Poor my Bette, good she is done with Caitlin and now is Tina turn to break up with Martin and go to Bette. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Interesting start. Poor Bette, why is a beautiful and successful woman alway cheated by her partner? Maybe she should think about changing Fengshui of the house… :P
wooo I just don’t know what to say. Great story….but Bette in so much pain…I can’t have that…it’s just to much. Hope to read more soon.
Poor Bette all she needs now is her woman to put her back together. Great story
OMG!!! The drama. I love it. This is a great story. I’m truly hooked. Thanks. Please post soon.
So I was happily reading along, right? Well I let my eyes scan down around page 7 I think and I yelled, “WHOA!” I really did not see Caitlin cheating at all. That really sucks for Bette. :( It’s funny but Martin seems like a nice guy. Granted I thought that about Caitlin and look how that turned out.
this new one is so interesting, i like this Bette so relax! Caitlin is out of the picture and i hope for good!
Oh poor Bette! how horrible for her.
Excellent storyline, please post soon.
Wow, this was really amazing. What a great start! Cheating Caitlin totally took me by surprise. Poor Bette. It’d be cool if she called Tina for some comfort. Hehe
Caitlin down and Martin to go…
oh wow! this is fresh!! please please continue soon…very keen to know where this is going. Am a die hard tibetter…even when they put each other through every imaginable hell.
My thought was, Bette is getting a little long in the tooth to be punked like this. Caitlin sounds like a young thing, gettin’ her groove on. Bette is a mother, ready to settle down. I wonder if Martin knows?…Tina might get ‘inseminated’ at the cabin – throwing a monkey wrench in the B&T reunion. Thanks!
OUCH! A little taste of her own medicine kinda. It’s Tina’s turn to shine now!
Off to a great start. Lauren, now you know this story will take more than three chapters, don’t you??? This is a good story. Please don’t let it be short. Post soon because I can’t wait to see Tina come to Bette to offer comfort.
Wow! This is awesome! Please post again ASAP. Great story.
Lauren I love all your stories and eagerly await your next chapters on any of them. It sucks that Bette had to experience Caitlyn doing this to her. I guess my beef (and it’s not with you) is people’s responses. I mean…is everytime some to f*ck up with Bette going lead back to she cheated on Tina? If this follows the show up until S3 wasn’t enough that Bette had to watch Tina with first Helena then Henry? wit a little daddyof2 and JOsh throw in on the side? I personally think that it wasn’t the same thing (Bette cheating versus Caitlyn’s) Why? becasue when you walk into the scene and see it unfold well…it’s that more devasting. Bette’s well come on let’s admit Bette & Tina’s relationship wasn’t exactly perfect when Bette cheat from what you’ve written here Bette and Caityln had no major issues to over come. Bette and TIna? were fighting one another, pushing each other away after a miscarriage, and dealing with a downward slope of thier relationship and that was BEFORE the affair…oh well good writing can’t wait for more…
Bette is getting the short end of the deal. I hope that she will reach out to someone (Tina) and maybe get their life where it belongs, in each others arms.
Poor Bette, I know she cheated on Tina, but who would cheat on her. Ms. Tina, she’s confused, didn’t really mean yes,time to face the facts and go get her woman back.
damn girl ! this is great! :D more please :D
caitlin…that bitch, i’m glad bette caught her and threw her out…time for B&T get back together…great new story
Wasn’t sure whether I wanted to get into a story about B/T being with other people. But, liking the direction this is heading. Please post again, soon!
Wow…great first chapter and leaves me anxious for more. Look forward to the next instalment.
Boy if Bette didn’t have bad luck,she would have no luck at all. At least Bette didnt cheat on Tina in her bedroom. Is Bette just to good to the ladies are they feel like the will always be second best to her first love? Post soon thanks
Really Lauren this is an amazing story, a great plot line with lots of potential. I sincerely hope you will continue it for not only 2 or 3 chapters, but for a lot more. Thanks for sharing this with us.