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Reasons Pt. 2
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Bette opened the door, and her beauty almost suffocated me. She was wearing this black, silk robe. It stopped at the middle of her thighs. Her hair was long and flowing like I loved it. Her skin was pure; she knew how I loved her with no makeup on. Her natural beauty was more than enough to admire.
“Are you going to come in?” She chuckled softly at the stunned expression on my face. She reached for my hand and led me inside. Her house was dimly lit, and there were wine glasses waiting to be filled.
“Would you like a glass of wine? This is the good stuff I promise.” She chuckled again. This time it seemed more sensual. Everything about her was sensual. Yes, that’s why I fuck her.
“Yes please.” I replied with a small smile. ‘Relax Tina’ I thought. I couldn’t figure out why I was so nervous. There was nothing different about tonight. It’s the same as it always is. Maybe I’m just horny tonight. Maybe I’m a little off balance from earlier. Maybe I’m just in trouble. Maybe my heart’s in trouble.
Interrupting my thoughts, she says, “here you go,” and passes me a glass of wine.
“A toast…to tonight, to pleasure, to satisfaction, to…whatever makes you happy.” We clink our glasses, and we each take a sip of our wine.
“Mmm. This is delicious Bette. Definitely the good stuff.”
“Definitely.” She smiles. She takes my hand and leads me to her bedroom. We take a seat on her bed. Oh god the memories we’ve made in this bed. I can’t remember how many times I’ve cum in this bed. I can’t count the number of times Bette has had to awaken me so I could go home before it was too late. I can’t remember how many times I was too exhausted to move. We both finish off our glasses, and she sits them on the night stand next to the bed. She stands up in front of me and leans down. She takes my face in her hands and runs her tongue along my lower lip. Then, she attaches her lips to mine. It’s soft, but she quickly deepens it. Her tongue rubs against mine. Her lips searing mine with the heat we’ve already begun to create. She pulls away and licks her lips.
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whay makes this so sad is that Tina was so dead set againest cheating. And Bryye putting up with it for two years.Bette was always so jealous of anyone looking at Tina yet she lets her go home to another woman. They do so make hot love together tho. thanks
this is wonderful! i wonder what is going to happen next. you asked us what we would like to see in the story: who is tina’s wife? Can bette be more expressive about her feelings? Can she say I love you too to tina? And finally, can you make Tina and her wife break up? It can be drama ! I love drama :-) Thank you for anything that you’re going to come up with! I’m sure it will be great.
very hot and beautifully written, but I fear i can’t read any further. My pain for Tina’s wife overrides wanting to see T&B together. Not judging a wonderful story – I just feel it is never right to do this. Tina needs to leave to be with Bette.
With the recent disclosure of Tiger Woods’ affairs, it places a larger cloud over Tina’s indiscretion. Although, I believe you express their love for each other beautifully. Yes, it is the sex but also something deeper and more profound. You write w/passion and grace. It is very difficult to write erotic stories that rise above cheesy. Their passion and desire for each other is palpable and wonderful. Tina needs to come clean to her wife and divorce her. It’s not fair. Besides, her wife might sense that Tina is not 100% committed. Excellent, excellent writing.
I suppose I’m just shallow…but I’m good with not analyzing either one of them and their reasons for fucking each other. I’m also good with the line “and that’s why I fuck her” as opposed to “make love to her.” Sometimes a fuck is just a fuck. There is no substitute. I really like your writing…it’s primitive and animalistic at it’s best and I really enjoy that. As for the cheating part…this is a story to me and I don’t really want to think about the moral implications. This is a great guilt free read and I look forward to more of your stories. Thank you. :)
That was more than amazing, WOW I can’t wait really to read what the next chapter hold for us. Thank you so much for this amazing story that you decided to share with us, we are so grateful. Post sooooooooooooooooooooooon please. Love
I agree with talaula… role playing story would be a great addition to your NC17’s…. Damn .. i wish i was them
Amazing! That was really hot!! Great story.
Brilliant.
That is so sad for both of them-has Tina not heard of ‘divorce’?
Have you done any role playing? Stories, I mean have you written any role playing stories yet? That would be an good read. This was an awesome update although I feel bad for Tina’s wife. I know, who cares! I can’t help it. . . . please make her a bitch so I don’t feel guilty for enjoying this affair, LOL.
You weren’t kidding about 1000 degrees hotter…Now how the hell am I supposed to get to sleep?
It’s official my screen melted and I have to get a new one :) That was absolutely smokin! Tina needs to see her lawyers and soon. Thank you for this story :)
WOWEE.. That was smoking! Send Tina to a lawyer ASAP! PPS! =)
I especially like how you expressed Tina’s inner feelings for Bette, not just the sex, and of course the NC-17s were great. Fantastic erotica with lots of substance.
P,S.: And when will Tina recognize that they are “making love” and not just doing the “F” word. She certainly knows the difference. Does she feel safe just using the F word?
P,S.: And when will Tina recognize that they are “making love” and not just doing the “F” word. She certainly knows the difference. Does she feel safe just using the F word?
Oh my, that was very hot. Yes Tina we have known the real reason you are with Bette from the beginning, I was just hoping that someday you would tell Bette. One thing I’ve not read that Tina has admitted is if she has children and if she is in love with her wife or not. She can’t love her too much if she has fallen in love with Bette, which we already knew, by their reactions to each other. Maybe if she has children that would preclude her from leaving or at least she thinks she can’t. If there are no children, then divorce should be looming large in her future. She can’t keep doing this to her wife or herself and Bette. They are in love and belong together, however, that said, it doesn’t always flow that lovers can be together permanently for myriad reasons. I’ll let it rest at that. Keep writing and we will keep reading. I love the story. Thanks for posting. PPS
1000x hotterd eosn’t do this story justice. So the real reason she f***s Bette is b/c she loves her…makes sense to me; I’d love Bette Porter too. But they’ve been going like this for years so Tina must do a really good job at hiding her feelings for her wife to have no idea what’s going. Has Tina’s wife never seen her w/ Bette? There must be sparks flying off the two of them whenever they are together. Great update, PPS!
Great Update!!!! Hope Tina ends things with the wife soon. Thanks PPS
Bittersweet. And you were slightly wrong about your warning… It’s isn’t 100times hotter… It was 10000times more illicit than the previous :)
I agree with Rau…it is kinda sad. I would love to see them end up together. It would be hard for Tina’s wife but at least it would be honest. It would be best for them all in the long run.
As hot as this is, its heartbreaking at the same time, I dont like the fact that Tina is cheating on her wife, I can’t help but feel that someone is about to get hurt pretty bad. Smh even though they are soulmates they sure as hell knows how to fuck up and hurt others along the way…and, Bette shouldn’t fall in love with Tina because if she’s cheating on her wife then eventually she will do it Bette, this needs to come to end…but I gotta admit its so fucking HOT!