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Reasons Pt. 2
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“Oh fuck!” I hear her say. Her moans are filling this room. i lift her hips slightly and enter her with my tongue. Her back arches and she gasps with surprise.
“Oh Tina…Oh god.” I moan as she says my name. Coming from her lips at this very moment, it sounds like more than a cry of passion. It’s a cry for release. She’s so close I feel tightening against my tongue. She’s moving frantically trying to make my tongue enter her deeper. I move her so I can suck her clit. I wrap my tongue around it, then suck it. Wrap my tongue around it, then suck it. She’s losing herself to me. Her legs are trembling beside my head. She’s no longer moaning; all sounds are trapped in her throat. Not for long though. With one final suck, her entire being quivers, and I know she’s about to have to the orgasm of her life. Her eyes roll back. Her mouth opens. She’s even more beautiful when she cums. Her facial expression is one of total pleasure and ecstasy.
“Ahhh” She moans loudly and lays off to the side, trying to catch her breath. I lick my lips, tasting her essence.
“You taste so good Bette.” I tell her that every time, and every time I taste her, I realize yet again why I fuck her.
I stand up and strip my clothing. I get back into bed with her, lying on top of her between her legs. I lean down and kiss her forehead. I allow my lips to linger. I feel her running her hands on my back. She looks up at me.
“I think you may be wearing me out instead.” She says playfully. I laugh lightly.
“I’m not done either.” Before she can respond, I lean down and take her lips into a fiery kiss. She holds me tighter as our lips and tongue join our souls together. We’re connected in every way. Our lips are touching. Our breasts are touching. Our centers are touching. She’s rubbing her heel against the back of my thigh, her palm is rubbing the middle of my back, and she’s caressing my breast with her other hand. I’m lost in her again. I’m headed to that world. Everything was perfect.
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whay makes this so sad is that Tina was so dead set againest cheating. And Bryye putting up with it for two years.Bette was always so jealous of anyone looking at Tina yet she lets her go home to another woman. They do so make hot love together tho. thanks
this is wonderful! i wonder what is going to happen next. you asked us what we would like to see in the story: who is tina’s wife? Can bette be more expressive about her feelings? Can she say I love you too to tina? And finally, can you make Tina and her wife break up? It can be drama ! I love drama :-) Thank you for anything that you’re going to come up with! I’m sure it will be great.
very hot and beautifully written, but I fear i can’t read any further. My pain for Tina’s wife overrides wanting to see T&B together. Not judging a wonderful story – I just feel it is never right to do this. Tina needs to leave to be with Bette.
With the recent disclosure of Tiger Woods’ affairs, it places a larger cloud over Tina’s indiscretion. Although, I believe you express their love for each other beautifully. Yes, it is the sex but also something deeper and more profound. You write w/passion and grace. It is very difficult to write erotic stories that rise above cheesy. Their passion and desire for each other is palpable and wonderful. Tina needs to come clean to her wife and divorce her. It’s not fair. Besides, her wife might sense that Tina is not 100% committed. Excellent, excellent writing.
I suppose I’m just shallow…but I’m good with not analyzing either one of them and their reasons for fucking each other. I’m also good with the line “and that’s why I fuck her” as opposed to “make love to her.” Sometimes a fuck is just a fuck. There is no substitute. I really like your writing…it’s primitive and animalistic at it’s best and I really enjoy that. As for the cheating part…this is a story to me and I don’t really want to think about the moral implications. This is a great guilt free read and I look forward to more of your stories. Thank you. :)
That was more than amazing, WOW I can’t wait really to read what the next chapter hold for us. Thank you so much for this amazing story that you decided to share with us, we are so grateful. Post sooooooooooooooooooooooon please. Love
I agree with talaula… role playing story would be a great addition to your NC17’s…. Damn .. i wish i was them
Amazing! That was really hot!! Great story.
Brilliant.
That is so sad for both of them-has Tina not heard of ‘divorce’?
Have you done any role playing? Stories, I mean have you written any role playing stories yet? That would be an good read. This was an awesome update although I feel bad for Tina’s wife. I know, who cares! I can’t help it. . . . please make her a bitch so I don’t feel guilty for enjoying this affair, LOL.
You weren’t kidding about 1000 degrees hotter…Now how the hell am I supposed to get to sleep?
It’s official my screen melted and I have to get a new one :) That was absolutely smokin! Tina needs to see her lawyers and soon. Thank you for this story :)
WOWEE.. That was smoking! Send Tina to a lawyer ASAP! PPS! =)
I especially like how you expressed Tina’s inner feelings for Bette, not just the sex, and of course the NC-17s were great. Fantastic erotica with lots of substance.
P,S.: And when will Tina recognize that they are “making love” and not just doing the “F” word. She certainly knows the difference. Does she feel safe just using the F word?
P,S.: And when will Tina recognize that they are “making love” and not just doing the “F” word. She certainly knows the difference. Does she feel safe just using the F word?
Oh my, that was very hot. Yes Tina we have known the real reason you are with Bette from the beginning, I was just hoping that someday you would tell Bette. One thing I’ve not read that Tina has admitted is if she has children and if she is in love with her wife or not. She can’t love her too much if she has fallen in love with Bette, which we already knew, by their reactions to each other. Maybe if she has children that would preclude her from leaving or at least she thinks she can’t. If there are no children, then divorce should be looming large in her future. She can’t keep doing this to her wife or herself and Bette. They are in love and belong together, however, that said, it doesn’t always flow that lovers can be together permanently for myriad reasons. I’ll let it rest at that. Keep writing and we will keep reading. I love the story. Thanks for posting. PPS
1000x hotterd eosn’t do this story justice. So the real reason she f***s Bette is b/c she loves her…makes sense to me; I’d love Bette Porter too. But they’ve been going like this for years so Tina must do a really good job at hiding her feelings for her wife to have no idea what’s going. Has Tina’s wife never seen her w/ Bette? There must be sparks flying off the two of them whenever they are together. Great update, PPS!
Great Update!!!! Hope Tina ends things with the wife soon. Thanks PPS
Bittersweet. And you were slightly wrong about your warning… It’s isn’t 100times hotter… It was 10000times more illicit than the previous :)
I agree with Rau…it is kinda sad. I would love to see them end up together. It would be hard for Tina’s wife but at least it would be honest. It would be best for them all in the long run.
As hot as this is, its heartbreaking at the same time, I dont like the fact that Tina is cheating on her wife, I can’t help but feel that someone is about to get hurt pretty bad. Smh even though they are soulmates they sure as hell knows how to fuck up and hurt others along the way…and, Bette shouldn’t fall in love with Tina because if she’s cheating on her wife then eventually she will do it Bette, this needs to come to end…but I gotta admit its so fucking HOT!