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Reconciliation Part 33
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Helena watched the interaction between Dylan and the coach and her sixth sense thought there might be more than simple friendship. Dylan teased the players and kicked around the soccer ball with them for awhile before joining Helena who was seated on the side. Helena noted that the coach would periodically look their way while she ran drills with the team. Helena got the courage up to ask, “Did you go out with the coach?”
Dylan chuckled, “Why do you think so?”
“Call it woman’s intuition. It’s something about your interaction. Something about the way she looks at you.”
Dylan teased, “Are you jealous?”
Helena got annoyed at the suggestion, “Forget I asked. I was just wondering.”
Dylan laughed, “I did ask her out but she says she’s straight and turned me down.”
Helena laughed, “Right! Well, you are straight until you’re not. From her looks over here, I think she is reconsidering things.”
Dylan shook her head, “I think she might not be straight but I think it is you who is capturing her attention. She sees me all the time and has never given me a second look. I think all these looks over here are for you.”
Helena smiled and began to fuss with her hair and curl her unruly locks around a finger, “You think? She’s kind of cute in a soft butch kind of way.”
Dylan elbowed her. “It’s bad enough to lose you to a super fine, super model but to have you flirt with a woman who turned me down for a date is more than I can take.”
Helena laughed and hooked her arm once again with Dylan’s. “I’m just playing. I would not do anything so crass.” She’s not my type anyway.”
“Really! I didn’t know you had a type. What is your type?”
“Good question. Honestly, I don’t think I have a type. I’ve been involved with so many different types of women. I think I am more about the person than the looks or something superficial.”
“I would think someone glamorous is your type.”
Considering Raquel and a similar statement made by Raquel, she responded, “It’s the person. Not the glamour.”
Dylan sighed and interlaced her fingers with Helena’s. She could not respond, but understood her response was about Raquel. She was beginning to understand without explanation that Raquel did mean a lot to Helena. Helena squeezed Dylan’s hand then rubbed her arm with the other hand. Dylan commented, “I think she is a fool to not want you. Maybe that’s part of the attraction for you. She’s something you can’t have.”
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oh am I first, well I didn’t read yet but just wanted to tell you I have stayed loyal to my Raquel. :(
I wish I was on top of that mountain. I’ve never seen the sun rise or set for that matter. Man, Helena has a tough decision to contemplate. When she’s with Raquel she wants her but when she’s with Dylan her heart tells her she’s the right choice as well. What’s a woman to do….I know one thing I wouldn’t want to be in Helena’s shoes. This story is like when I’m reading a good book. I want to jump to the end to see what happens because I’m so anxious….this is torture but I loe it. pps :-)
…getting to know you like me…And then a little later in the show came “Hello young lovers, where ever you are.”
Wow, I need to take an early morning trek up Stone Mountain…sounds quite beautiful! Very, very nice…They are taking their time and I’m loving it! This really can go either way! Make sure to come back and hang with us on the board so they don’t think I ran you off with my boisterous (and true) introduction! PPS…and Happy New Year!!!!
Ok minor interlude before I go into my much bigger interlude… I’ve been to that spot before… at stone mountain… about 6 years ago… OMG… you capture it so much like my memories…. love and hugs, JC
I’m not posting till I get JC’s and momadukes’ dissertations. I might hold out for East’s and lobo’s too.
I really enjoyed this chapter it was so wishful and full of renewed promises in one another.I feel Helena is allowing herself to want to able to fill her heart with trust for this woman who captured a part of her heart so long ago.I like this more than the Raquel ending there’s more history there to be reckoned with, I know Dylan wouldnt hurt Hels again but how are they going to maintain after this weekend is over im really curious to know.Great update Squirly
Well my dissertation is coming a tad bit late. Sorry ’bout that Squirl. My hick family doesn’t believe in DSL so I didn’t even attempt to access the Internet over the holidays. I hope the old adage better late than never applies. Geez… Helena must be opening to Dylan to vow her trust for her. The massage on Stone Mountain nearly did me in — Jesus, someone better kiss someone soon — and it better not be the damn soccer coach. I think more than anything, Helena doesn’t trust herself; that’s where the real problem lays. I don’t know if Dylan does either. Both of them continue to project their insecurities onto the other. This story is killing me – but I absolutely love it!
I jut caught up and like bettyv I al for Dylan. Raquel was ok bit she’s not the type of woman for Helena, I don’t really know how to say it but there’s too much blabla around Raquel, she lives in a total different world, a world that is atificial while Dylan is confronted with the real world which makes her more down to earth. They still have a long wau to go and Dylan sure needs to be patient cause trusting someone isn’t somthing you do overnoght but I have a feeling that by the end ogf the weekend they will have come a long way. PPS. I wish you and your loved ones all the best for the New Year.
ahhhhh My most Passionate Friend… you are so freaking super fast I just got my thoughts processed about the last one and you got something new for me… ahhhhhh… Ok I will be back very soon… you rock and roll… Love and hugs, JC
Okay,Dylan is still my girl.if I was in Helena shoes.I would go to the lake house,build a 10 ft stockade fence and dare the world to even try to get into it for the rest of my life. Bit much but gee, I really lke her. I couldnt not even picture Rachael with Helena. Nor anyone whe Dylan can on the show. I’m just one person but only you know what will happen. Have a Happy New Year and a beautiful and healthy 2009 thanks
Well, my comments are far from the deep, detailed dissertations of JC, so you don’t have to hold out. ;) It sounds like Helena may be ready for more than just seeing flowers. I love that these two are finally communicating. When there is the misunderstanding or misinterpretation of someone’s actions, facial expressions, words, it’s best to delve into it and get it resolved. Those are the things they really need to KNOW about each other–the little things, the subtlties. Everything else will fall into place.