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    Reflection

    Story written on October 10, 2005 by ayns.
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    Tina reflecting on their first time together. Chapter 4

    “Oh my God Bette, your shoulder, I scratched it”. I had felt terrible, the gashes were deep and red and I imagined quite painful.

    “What?” She was looking over her shoulder, straining to see the marks.

    “I mush have done that when I came, I didn’t even realize it. I’m so sorry”. Great, the first time we make love and I scar her for life. Way to go idiot. I was brought back from my internal berating by a soft hand on my cheek.

    “I’m not sorry at all. I’d take a thousand scars just like it to hear you call my name the way you did”. I couldn’t help the blush that rose in my cheeks. Just the memory of her hand inside me sent a shiver down my spine. “Of course, I’m sure you could kiss it and make it better…” Like I needed the encouragement.

    I left a soft kiss on each scrap and moved my face to the back of her neck. When I straddled her body my damp curls brushed deliciously across the firmness of her *****. She pushed herself against me leaving her cheeks glistening with my excitement. She lifted her body up on both arms urging me to taste her. I let my tongue lick each vertebrate in neck, savoring the salty taste of her skin. I moved down her spine, licking as I went, letting my lips trail along her softness. I could hear her breathing become shallow and felt my own heart beat speed up in response. I felt to attuned to her, like I could read every small change she made. My senses were heightened, all focused on her. I’d never felt this connected to anyone in my life.

    When I reached the dimples in her lower back I nuzzled each one with my nose. I could smell her arousal coupled with the lingering scent of my own and it was making me dizzy. I bit the tender skin of her ***** and she let out a little squeal before calling my name.

    “Tina”! She sounded breathless and I loved the sound of my name said like that.

    “Does that feel good baby”? I was trying to sound innocent, as if I already didn’t know the answer. I think her bucking hips told me everything I needed to know.

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    3. so beautiful . just so simply beautiful . your story, their words, the emotion . makes me think of the love in my life and that is a good thing . thanx

    4. Whats left to say!… except you promised us a few short chapters and blew us away with maybe one or two more than we expected,it was so beautifully written so pure and so honest,tho i love so many stories on this site not many take my breath away as this one has so a big thankyou (oh god im getting mushy now lol…)looking forward to more of your other story and if you feel the need to share Bettes POV well that would truly be the iceing on my cake..lol Who doesnt want to have their cake and eat it too…lol ok im rambling again thanks again for this ive loved every minute

    8. “That sounds just about perfect to me” ….just like this story. I didn’t fall for it this time…& you know what I’m talking about. I didn’t even attempt to achieve any balance and centeredness before reading. See, after your previous chapters, I knew I would be knocked off my feet which, indeed I was. This time I was prepared though. Excellent chapter. Uh, are you still doing the school thing? Yes? Drop out girlie!! (smile)

    12. I think that maybe the best chapter I have read and I have read many amazing chapters. I love the chapters that when they talk about sex it is with love, and yours my girl you could touch the love please please continue

    13. OMG!!! I have read this little ‘reflection’ of yours …absolutely beautiful. It brings out every emotion I can fathom. You are extremely talented with your words…
      thankyou

    21. Just re-read all your chapters. Can’t get rid of the smile that’s plastered on my face, and wouldn’t want to. What a heck of a job you are doing entertaining us.

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