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Reflection
“Curl your fingers T…it should feel spongy…you’ll know…” She was having trouble getting a sentence out, but was guiding me along just as she had promised. I did what she said and felt around her inner wall. It took me a moment, but when my fingers brushed that spot I knew immediately.
Her eyes shut tight and she screamed out my name. She squeezed my fingers painfully hard, accompanied by a gush of warm liquid that ran down my forearm. She pulled me to her, pressing our sweaty bodies together and captured my mouth again muffling her cry. It was then I felt myself let go. I was so utterly amazed that I as able to come without her even touching me. But feeling her tense and shake in my arms, knowing I did that to her, sent me crashing over the edge. When she released my mouth I buried my face in the crux on her neck, her pulse beating rapidly against my lips. We lay like this forever, wrapped around each other; our sweat and excitement and breaths all mixed together. She finally cupped my cheek, turning my head to meet her gaze. The look on her face told me everything I needed to know.
“God Tina, I’ve never felt anything like that before in my life. You were amazing.” My heart soared when she said that. I knew she came, but hearing her say it out load chased away the last lingering doubts from the back of my mind.
“So I did good then?”
“So good baby. You sure you’ve never done this before?” She gave me a curious glance, followed quickly by a heart warming smile that conveyed the playfulness of her statement.
I know I should have retorted with a funny quip, but I said the only thing that was running through my head.
“I love you Bette.” She pulled my face up to hers and left the softest loving kiss on my lips.
“I love you too.”
And that is why I’m sitting here now with a thousand thoughts running through my head. My whole life I have been waiting for the one person to complete me, to share my life with. And I found her. She’s lying beside me, snoring softly against my shoulder. I guess I just don’t want to wake up and for none of this to have happened. I know that’s not going to happen, but I just can’t bring myself to fall asleep. Guess I’ll just have to lay here for the rest of my life staring at this extraordinary woman cradled safely in my arms. That sounds just about perfect to me.
TBC
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(42 votes, average: 3.90 out of 5)
So beautiful!
beautiful ayns
so beautiful . just so simply beautiful . your story, their words, the emotion . makes me think of the love in my life and that is a good thing . thanx
Whats left to say!… except you promised us a few short chapters and blew us away with maybe one or two more than we expected,it was so beautifully written so pure and so honest,tho i love so many stories on this site not many take my breath away as this one has so a big thankyou (oh god im getting mushy now lol…)looking forward to more of your other story and if you feel the need to share Bettes POV well that would truly be the iceing on my cake..lol Who doesnt want to have their cake and eat it too…lol ok im rambling again thanks again for this ive loved every minute
i work with a gaggle of lesbians. and ive now got them hooked on ff. you so rock.
love the use of words. keeping em coming.
Whoa! Beautiful as Always great written I Love it Please keep going I’m just really happy to read of this it’s Awesome Please post soon Thanks!!
Damn that was so fucking hot and amazing, love it. This is beautiful and can’t wait to see more. Post soon please, thanks!
“That sounds just about perfect to me” ….just like this story. I didn’t fall for it this time…& you know what I’m talking about. I didn’t even attempt to achieve any balance and centeredness before reading. See, after your previous chapters, I knew I would be knocked off my feet which, indeed I was. This time I was prepared though. Excellent chapter. Uh, are you still doing the school thing? Yes? Drop out girlie!! (smile)
Forget the sounds perfect, it felt perfect. Great job.
well it also sounds perfect to me… love this story… i hope to change your mind and continue with it…
Perfect and more than perfect! Thanks– you blew me away once again!
I think that maybe the best chapter I have read and I have read many amazing chapters. I love the chapters that when they talk about sex it is with love, and yours my girl you could touch the love please please continue
OMG!!! I have read this little ‘reflection’ of yours …absolutely beautiful. It brings out every emotion I can fathom. You are extremely talented with your words…
thankyou
this is a very amazing sensual story. it is so reel that you can sense the feelings they have. thanks and i hope you continue.
A M A Z I N G!!!!!
Amazing! Absolutely amazing!! More really,really soon
perrrrfect..!
absolutely beautiful.
THIS IS SOOOO SEXY.
I WOULD SO RATE THIS A TEN**********BUT IT WON’T LET ME CLICK ON THE FIVE TWICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Just re-read all your chapters. Can’t get rid of the smile that’s plastered on my face, and wouldn’t want to. What a heck of a job you are doing entertaining us.