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Reflection
When I spread her legs I froze for a moment. Not out of fear or nervousness, just wanting to admire the glistening flesh I was about to claim as my own. She was beautiful, like nothing I had ever seen. The bronze skin of her thighs in sharp contrast to the dark pink flesh surrounded by mahogany curls. I felt so privileged to be trusted by her, to be sharing such an intimate moment with such an amazing woman. Her hands curling into my hair brought me back to life. I took one deep breath before diving in.
That first lick was like nothing I’d ever dreamed of. She was so warm and wet and soft. She let out a little yelp at my first amateur stroke before I moved up to her ***** taking the little bundle of nerves into my mouth and sucking lightly. Her hips bucked towards my face, so I increased the speed and flicked my tongue over the very tip. She was groaning continuously now and my name would occasionally float from her lips making my heart and my center swell with excitement.
“I need to feel you inside me, now”!
I never let up the pressure from my mouth and slipped two fingers into her open and willing body. It was unbelievable to be inside of her, her velvety walls squeezing my fingers, pulling me farther in. The connection you feel to someone when you are physically inside them is almost overwhelming. Being joined to her made me feel like we were one person, as if you couldn’t tell where she ended and I began. I never wanted to move, I wanted to be in her forever.
I felt her pulling me up towards her face and I reluctantly released her ***** and moved up her body, leaving a trail of kisses along the way. Our mouths came together, tongues dueling back and forth; we breathed heavily through our noses not wanting to break away from our embrace.
Her body was moving hard against my hand, her heels dug into the bed lifting herself up towards me. I sped up my thrusts adding a third finger with ease as the liquid please ran down my arm puddling in the palm of my hand. She finally broke off the kiss and rested her forehead against mine. Her hand was on the back of my neck, holding my tightly against her. She finally opened her eyes and our gazes met with a burning intensity.
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(42 votes, average: 3.90 out of 5)
So beautiful!
beautiful ayns
so beautiful . just so simply beautiful . your story, their words, the emotion . makes me think of the love in my life and that is a good thing . thanx
Whats left to say!… except you promised us a few short chapters and blew us away with maybe one or two more than we expected,it was so beautifully written so pure and so honest,tho i love so many stories on this site not many take my breath away as this one has so a big thankyou (oh god im getting mushy now lol…)looking forward to more of your other story and if you feel the need to share Bettes POV well that would truly be the iceing on my cake..lol Who doesnt want to have their cake and eat it too…lol ok im rambling again thanks again for this ive loved every minute
i work with a gaggle of lesbians. and ive now got them hooked on ff. you so rock.
love the use of words. keeping em coming.
Whoa! Beautiful as Always great written I Love it Please keep going I’m just really happy to read of this it’s Awesome Please post soon Thanks!!
Damn that was so fucking hot and amazing, love it. This is beautiful and can’t wait to see more. Post soon please, thanks!
“That sounds just about perfect to me” ….just like this story. I didn’t fall for it this time…& you know what I’m talking about. I didn’t even attempt to achieve any balance and centeredness before reading. See, after your previous chapters, I knew I would be knocked off my feet which, indeed I was. This time I was prepared though. Excellent chapter. Uh, are you still doing the school thing? Yes? Drop out girlie!! (smile)
Forget the sounds perfect, it felt perfect. Great job.
well it also sounds perfect to me… love this story… i hope to change your mind and continue with it…
Perfect and more than perfect! Thanks– you blew me away once again!
I think that maybe the best chapter I have read and I have read many amazing chapters. I love the chapters that when they talk about sex it is with love, and yours my girl you could touch the love please please continue
OMG!!! I have read this little ‘reflection’ of yours …absolutely beautiful. It brings out every emotion I can fathom. You are extremely talented with your words…
thankyou
this is a very amazing sensual story. it is so reel that you can sense the feelings they have. thanks and i hope you continue.
A M A Z I N G!!!!!
Amazing! Absolutely amazing!! More really,really soon
perrrrfect..!
absolutely beautiful.
THIS IS SOOOO SEXY.
I WOULD SO RATE THIS A TEN**********BUT IT WON’T LET ME CLICK ON THE FIVE TWICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Just re-read all your chapters. Can’t get rid of the smile that’s plastered on my face, and wouldn’t want to. What a heck of a job you are doing entertaining us.