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Regret
I woke up with a gasp in cold sweat. I sigh and look at the clock 4:18 AM I rub my face with my hands and get up. There’s nothing to do so I guess I might as well work out. Half an hour later I head to the bathroom and see my reflection. My hair is wild and sticking out every direction but it needs a trim. I am getting paler and paler everyday and dark purple bags have formed under my eyes. I hop into the shower and feel the relieving hot water on my body. I close my eyes and sigh
Shane: 2 Months 5 days since making the biggest mistake of my life
CARMEN
I wake up and scratch my head and look at the redhead girl next to me
Girl: Hey Baby
Sigh
Carmen: Just leave Tata
She picks up her clothes quickly gets dressed and leaves crying. I get up and take a shower. Dry off, get dressed look at the clock 10:00AM, at 8 tonight I’d be back home, I’ve been in NY 2 months but I know I will never get used to it. I pick up my cell and check the messages.
2 New Messages
Hi Carmen!! It’s Dana, And Alice!!! Alright and Alice, we’ll go get you at the airport can’t wait to have you back home
The other message was from a private number it was completely silent until the end where it sounded like crying and then a kid asking “ are you okay”
I closed my phone and began to pack, since I’d been to lazy to in the past few weeks
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(35 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
I’d love to see where this story goes! It’s interesting to see the different ways that Shane and Carmen have been dealing with the separation. And that phone call Carmen got from Shane… so sad. :(
I’d like to see where this goes. I agree with bum, the last call had to come from Shane. Please continue.
You should! Shane and Carmen are missing each other each in their own way… And Dana is not dead… And Alice is here too. Yep, you should continue.
It’s cool. Please continue the fic.