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    Reprisal Reprised- Chapter 11

    Story written on October 25, 2005 by Skipton.
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    “What if I told you the person that I was with yesterday was Tina?”

     

    Bette stopped drying her hair and gripped the phone a bit tighter.

     

    “What did you say?” she said in a low voice.

     

    “What if I told you that I spent almost the entire day with Tina yesterday, just like you asked” she quickly added.

     

    “When did I ask you to spend the entire day with Tina?” Bette asked incredulously.

     

    “The other night, when we were sitting out by the pool.  You asked that I go by and spend some time with her so that she wasn’t all alone.”

     

    “Some time with her, Alice, that doesn’t mean the entire day.”

     

    “So, I went a little above and beyond the call of duty.”

     

    “Hmmm” was all Bette said.

     

    “Do you want to know what we talked about?” asked Alice when she didn’t get more of a response from Bette.

     

    “As far as I’m concerned Alice, that conversation was between you and Tina, therefore, no business of mine” she responded as she began drying her hair again.

     

    “Not even a little of it?” she asked, knowing that she needed to figure out a way to share with Bette what she and Tina had discussed.

     

    “Nope” said Bette as she hung the towel up.  “And actually, I have to go so that I can finish getting ready.  I have a full day ahead of me at the gallery.”

     

    “Wait, Bette” said Alice, knowing that Bette was going to end this conversation soon.

     

    “Yes” said Bette, patience beginning to wear thin.

     

    “I kinda invited her to the get together at my place Friday night.”

     

    “You kind of invited her?” asked Bette.  “How does one kind of get invited anywhere?”

     

    “Ok, I did invite her, but she wanted me to check with you first to see if you were ok with it, you know, with her being there and all.”

     

    “Alice, it’s neither my house nor is it my party and so, it shouldn’t matter what I think.”

     

    “Cut the *****, Bette.  What Tina wants to know and what I would like to know is if you’ll still come by if she’s there.”

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    2. it looks like your trying to make my day. but a bit of a hesitation. i get it, they just can’t get back together. there has to be pain, drama and pulling our hair out in the mean time. love this skippy. love your words and how you use them. cant wait to see if this mountain can crumble just a bit. bette is hopefully trying not to be to giddy about seeing tina. more please. thanks.

    3. hey i missed you…Tina is right.. she have to rebuild her and Kits relationship but Bette was the one she hurted the most then if she wants her back she have to be honest with her and open her soul to Bette..cant wait for next chapter post soon thanks :o)

    4. Glad you posted Skip.Always good to see a post from one of my favorite authors.I can’t wait for the conversations between Kit and Tina.I hope Tina and Bette can mend their broken relationship.

    6. Just about to go to bed and seen you has posted, if I am cranky tommorrow it is you fault, ooohhh but soooo worth it. Another wonderful chapter please post sooon and make Kit be nict to our Tina, when are our girls getting back together? soon please

    7. I too would like to see T&B together. However, I think we could have real drama or at least a beatdown (verbal that is) by Kit of Tina. This Tina is in la la land and Kit will bring her back to earth. She left her wife in the middle of the night, refused to see her or explain, initiated a divorce. Now she suddenly pops back into her life and expects to be a happily married couple again. Tina wonders if Bette will take her back, but she doesn’t seem to wonder about he damage or pain she caused to Bette. Oh Kit should enjoy this! Write on, sooner rather than later.

    9. hey there! glad to see you writing again… and cant wait to see where you take this — -really — can’t wait! more please Skipton… and thanks for sharing this story with us…

    11. Skip, your stories are always worth waiting for! I think I like this story so much because it is one of the few where Tina is trying to win back Bette. It sets up all kind of dynamics and in your capable hands I know I will enjoy each and every chapter. Oh, and thanks for the letting us in on Tina’s little dream at the beginning.

    13. WOW! U should one day have your stories published?..you certainly should. :) Keep it up! You’ve made my day wonderful. Please know that I read every single word. You truly have a gift. Don’t keep us waiting too long for the next chapter.. ok..?

    14. i was so happy to see your name up again! I love how determined (and confident) Tina is to win Bette back. I agree with everything chasemenow said about it being so refreshing to see T pursue Bette for a change. Thanks bunched for sharing!

    16. well, it seems to me that it’s going to be a long journey for tina to win bette’s heart back, i’m anxious to see how it will go, i just hope it’s not too long

    18. I think Tina should cut straight to the ‘sackcloth and ashes, prostrate on the ground in supplication, begging’ mode. But, where’s the story in that?

      Great chapter, Skipton.
      Tina is slowly making progress in the credibility department. I still don’t know if her return is in Bette’s best interests, but reading your fine fic makes deciding that a wonderful process.
      Thanks!

    19. Thanks so much for the updat. I am loving this story. I hope Kit will hear Tina out and maybe help in getting them back together…that’s unlikelly to happen but I can dream. Pleas post soon

    21. Skip,
      What the? Now, I did see the rating before I started reading mind you. But told myself there was time to ease into the intensity which I knew this chapter would entail. Nope, not this time. You were about it from the get-go & I’m still trying to regulate my breath.
      So Bette thinks that she & Tina are mature enough to be in the same room for a couple of hours. You know what they say. Maturity is a funny thing… ’now you see it, now you don’t.’ My curiosity is piqued.

    26. Excellent chapter, Skipton. I’m in no position to criticize people for writing slowly. (ahem) Your writing is always worth the wait and the quality is always top notch.
      Said it before and I’ll say it again: Tina’s got it bad – hot dreams and all!

    27. Skipton,

      I love the slow burn of your stories.

      This is a torturous journey for both Tina and Bette. There is so much hurt and sorrow to be overcome. There is so much rebuilding and trust to be cultivated. There is so much pride and bravado to be cut through. There are other innocents involved in this voyage who need protecting.

      Again the relationships between the cast of characters feel real. Alice uses her humor to defuse potentially dangerous conversations while her heart desires the most for both Bette and Tina and her head realizes the difficulties that exist and may ensue.

      As for Tina, the understanding that her connection with Kit may be a deal breaker in her craving to re-establish her connection with Bette shows how much she cares for both Porters.

      Life is not lived in isolation therefore we endeavor to bring everyone together and make the most of all possibilities. Remember you need to break some eggs to make an omelet so life can be destroyed before it will re-grow stronger.

      I will be constant in my desire to follow this tale and will be here waiting and watching.
      Your Loyal Fan

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