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Reprisal Reprised- Chapter 11
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“Al, it’s called being responsible and having a job. Only one of which would you know about.”
“Careful there Kennard” she smiled through a yawn. “Only one of us has Porter’s ear these days.”
“That’s low, you know that?”
“But true” snickered
“When Bette and I are happily married again, don’t think that I’ll forget that comment” chuckled Tina.
“And who is the one person that can get the two of you married again?” asked
“Well, I would say that there are two people actually and that would be Bette and me” she answered.
“Oh, the simplemindedness of the ungrateful” sighed
“Uh huh” said Tina. “So, what did Bette have to say this morning?”
“Well, she seemed surprised that I had spent the day with you” she started.
“Surprised or pissed?”
“I’m not sure, maybe a little of both.”
“What did she say about Friday night?” she asked, holding her breath as she waited for the answer.
“After a little hemming and hawing she said that I should invite you and that she would show up as well.”
“Really?” she asked, not trying to hide the excitement in her voice.
“Really, but not to burst your bubble or anything, I think that she agreed to coming more for the reason that she thought that it was the right thing to do than the fact that she wanted to see you.”
“What does that mean?” asked Tina.
“Just that when we were sitting out by her pool, she really wanted to be sure that I contacted you and you know, made sure that you were not alone. And now, for her to not come to the party after I did what she asked, I don’t know, it would make her look like she wasn’t practicin’ what she was preachin’. Does that make any sense?”
“I guess” said Tina, trying to follow this tangled web of logic. “So, you’re saying that she could care less about seeing me and that she is going to show up just cause it’s the proper thing to do. Is that right?”
“Well, I wouldn’t say that she could care less about seeing you, but I do kinda think that she feels like she has to come by.”
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I’ve been waiting for this update, and I’ll have you know that I am anxiously awaiting the next. Great story, and great writing.
it looks like your trying to make my day. but a bit of a hesitation. i get it, they just can’t get back together. there has to be pain, drama and pulling our hair out in the mean time. love this skippy. love your words and how you use them. cant wait to see if this mountain can crumble just a bit. bette is hopefully trying not to be to giddy about seeing tina. more please. thanks.
hey i missed you…Tina is right.. she have to rebuild her and Kits relationship but Bette was the one she hurted the most then if she wants her back she have to be honest with her and open her soul to Bette..cant wait for next chapter post soon thanks :o)
Glad you posted Skip.Always good to see a post from one of my favorite authors.I can’t wait for the conversations between Kit and Tina.I hope Tina and Bette can mend their broken relationship.
I guess there’ll be a few more chapters to the Friday-night one. Go Tina, saving private Bette!
Just about to go to bed and seen you has posted, if I am cranky tommorrow it is you fault, ooohhh but soooo worth it. Another wonderful chapter please post sooon and make Kit be nict to our Tina, when are our girls getting back together? soon please
I too would like to see T&B together. However, I think we could have real drama or at least a beatdown (verbal that is) by Kit of Tina. This Tina is in la la land and Kit will bring her back to earth. She left her wife in the middle of the night, refused to see her or explain, initiated a divorce. Now she suddenly pops back into her life and expects to be a happily married couple again. Tina wonders if Bette will take her back, but she doesn’t seem to wonder about he damage or pain she caused to Bette. Oh Kit should enjoy this! Write on, sooner rather than later.
Doing a happy dance. Thank God you posted! Great update and brilliant writing as usual.
hey there! glad to see you writing again… and cant wait to see where you take this — -really — can’t wait! more please Skipton… and thanks for sharing this story with us…
Glad to see you post great story please post again soon!!!
Skip, your stories are always worth waiting for! I think I like this story so much because it is one of the few where Tina is trying to win back Bette. It sets up all kind of dynamics and in your capable hands I know I will enjoy each and every chapter. Oh, and thanks for the letting us in on Tina’s little dream at the beginning.
come on man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WOW! U should one day have your stories published?..you certainly should. :) Keep it up! You’ve made my day wonderful. Please know that I read every single word. You truly have a gift. Don’t keep us waiting too long for the next chapter.. ok..?
i was so happy to see your name up again! I love how determined (and confident) Tina is to win Bette back. I agree with everything chasemenow said about it being so refreshing to see T pursue Bette for a change. Thanks bunched for sharing!
What a treat…and Halloween is still a week away! thanks for the update
well, it seems to me that it’s going to be a long journey for tina to win bette’s heart back, i’m anxious to see how it will go, i just hope it’s not too long
Hey Thanks for update that was great I’m Love it Pls post soon Thanks!!
I think Tina should cut straight to the ‘sackcloth and ashes, prostrate on the ground in supplication, begging’ mode. But, where’s the story in that?
Great chapter, Skipton.
Tina is slowly making progress in the credibility department. I still don’t know if her return is in Bette’s best interests, but reading your fine fic makes deciding that a wonderful process.
Thanks!
Thanks so much for the updat. I am loving this story. I hope Kit will hear Tina out and maybe help in getting them back together…that’s unlikelly to happen but I can dream. Pleas post soon
thanks skip always on the lookout for ya
Skip,
What the? Now, I did see the rating before I started reading mind you. But told myself there was time to ease into the intensity which I knew this chapter would entail. Nope, not this time. You were about it from the get-go & I’m still trying to regulate my breath.
So Bette thinks that she & Tina are mature enough to be in the same room for a couple of hours. You know what they say. Maturity is a funny thing… ’now you see it, now you don’t.’ My curiosity is piqued.
good to see you Skip. good to see Tina going after what she wants and needs. she needs her Bette. cant wait to see the party
Thank you for writing.
It sometimes takes me a while to catch up…but I’m back to comment again. Your writing is always such a pleasure to read. Thanks!
Oh my, is Friday going to be a very interesting day or what? Love this and please post soon. Thanks.
Excellent chapter, Skipton. I’m in no position to criticize people for writing slowly. (ahem) Your writing is always worth the wait and the quality is always top notch.
Said it before and I’ll say it again: Tina’s got it bad – hot dreams and all!
Skipton,
I love the slow burn of your stories.
This is a torturous journey for both Tina and Bette. There is so much hurt and sorrow to be overcome. There is so much rebuilding and trust to be cultivated. There is so much pride and bravado to be cut through. There are other innocents involved in this voyage who need protecting.
Again the relationships between the cast of characters feel real. Alice uses her humor to defuse potentially dangerous conversations while her heart desires the most for both Bette and Tina and her head realizes the difficulties that exist and may ensue.
As for Tina, the understanding that her connection with Kit may be a deal breaker in her craving to re-establish her connection with Bette shows how much she cares for both Porters.
Life is not lived in isolation therefore we endeavor to bring everyone together and make the most of all possibilities. Remember you need to break some eggs to make an omelet so life can be destroyed before it will re-grow stronger.
I will be constant in my desire to follow this tale and will be here waiting and watching.
Your Loyal Fan
Thanks for the update. Excellent, as always. I love your take on Alice.
yay..yay..! we have got a chappy from skippy..~ LOL. great one..been waitin ages for this one! so…when will be the next one? hee~
nice to see you here. great chapter and I await the drama and eventually their reunion. Thanks.
Love it, love it, love it. Slowly, but surely Tina.