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Reprisal Reprised- Chapter 27
Rolling onto her back, Tina began the slow process of bringing herself out of a deep slumber.
With eyes still closed, she reached a hand out to the place that Bette had been but came up empty.
Opening her eyes, she looked around but saw no trace of Bette. Turning to her right, she finally located her, sitting on the deck in one of the two lounge chairs, looking over what Tina could only guess to be work papers.
Swinging her legs off of the bed, she slowly stood and reaching for the ceiling, stretched the sleep from her tired limbs.
Making her way over to the sliding glass door, she slowly opened it and walked outside, closing the door behind her.
Hearing the door open, Bette turned her head slightly and smiled when she felt Tina running her fingers though her hair.
“Hey” she said as Tina slid Bette’s legs over and joined her on the lounge chair.
“Hey” she sleepily said, not fully awake.
“How’d you sleep?” asked Bette, smiling at Tina’s sleepy demeanor. She had always found Tina to be at her cutest when she was just waking up. She looked like a little girl, innocent and vulnerable, someone that Bette wanted to pull into her arms and protect forever.
“Really hard” she replied groggily.
“Come here” Bette said as she placed all of the papers that she was looking through on the table between the two chairs.
Without saying a word, Tina climbed between Bette’s legs and curled herself into a tight ball as Bette wrapped her arms protectively around her.
Neither woman said a word, Bette just inhaling Tina and all that she was and Tina simply loving being in Bette’s arms again.
After a few moments of silence, Tina said, “How long did you stay in bed?”
“For a few minutes after you fell asleep.”
“So all of five minutes?” she chuckled as she wrapped her arms around Bette’s, pulling them tighter around her.
“Something like that” smiled Bette, placing soft kisses on the top of Tina’s head.
“Mmm…” Tina moaned in response. “Can we just stay like this forever?”
“We could” said Bette, “but I’m afraid that we’d have to ask Stuart to come join us. You know how he hates to be left out” she teased.
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Okay then. I’m speechless and I need some water cos I can’t swallow. OMFG.
Uh, sorry to contradict you Bette, but yes fucking, no stopping. Enjoy!
A pleasant surprise and a hot chapter!
Sweet, sweet surrender…don’t f**kin stop. Pleassse post soon!
Oh, my. You do have a way with words, skip. Damn, that was excruciatingly hot. Great imagery. My breath caught in my throat. Thank your nanny for us. PPS, if you can.
What, What, What…..hey were did the rest of that chapter go…….oooohhhhhh darn computer!!!!! pls pls help!!!
great, as always.
yes thankyou nanny, we are all very happy to see skipton 2 days in a row. made my week
Oh Happy Day!
And yet, You stopped!!!!!!!!!! You are the tease!!! Thanks to the nanny…looking forward to tomorrow…OK, I know I’m being greedy, but one can wish, right!
Skip, listen to Bette!Great to see you back and with a bonus chapter, no less. You’re in fine form and loved reading every line. As if they were gonna keep their hands off each other… chuckle, chuckle.Come back soon.
Thanks!Very much.
That was dazzling. And hot. And sexy. And about time. And bless your nanny. You have written the tension so well. I totally felt Bette’s struggle and Tina’s patience. Carmel is the perfect place for Bette to move through all her doubts. I don’t know how anyone could keep thier hands to themselves with such an amazing ocean view.
My breath is caught in my throat. How fucking hot can you get. Great chapter.
Damn that was smoking!So glad to see another post. Tell the nanny I said thanks!
wow, i’m still recovering…the best sexy chapter i’ve read in a while and there was not any sex yet…wow…thank, nanny ;)
Attention people: I’m asking each and every one of us to dig deep in our pockets in the hopes that we’ll collect enough money to pay Skipton’s nanny (well, not HER nanny, per se) for overtime. It’s for a good cause…that cause being the Please God, Allow Skipton to Post Again Soon Fund (or the PGASPASF). Carry on, people! Another fantastic chapter Skipton!
WOW! Very, very nice! Thank you Skipton…
Damn this is what we all waiting for and glad you do it this time and hope to see the hot and smoking coming next. Damn they are hot and can’t wait to see more. Post soon please, thanks!
I feel so blessed…thank you nanny…and thank you skip for posting. My jaws are aching from grinning thru this whole chapter…I just don’t know what to say…so thank you will have to suffice. I thought they would at least get thru one day…lol…everytime you post I go back to the beginning and read all the way up to the new chapter…I LOVE this story. Oh did I thank the nanny? Thank you nanny!
Great to see you back! :) Loved yesterday’s chapter, and this one…*THUD*!
I am embarrassed to say just how much I enjoyed that chapter!! Thanks Skip!
Ok, Skip, so why did you stop????
Skip….that was wonderful!
Bette may not be stopping, T may not be stopping, but Skipton stopped!! ; ) Thanks for the post!!
ALRIGHT SKIPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
damn Skip, where have you been babe? that was fucking hot!! please continue soon.
Ah, another Bette and Tina ballet as they dance toward each other with doubt, love, lust, fear. Skip, nobody does it better.
I think a page is missing, maybe you can help me find it? lol. Post soon
Please, allow me to give you these five stars. It’s such a small price to pay for such pleasure! Thanks to you, your spouse and the nanny!
Omg..another Excellently Hot Chapter In the same week Skip.Wow. I’m Soo happy. Thank you nanny. This chapter is just so sexy,filled with intensity of wants,love, and desires from both B&T.Iloved how Bette loves Tina’s morning look. That’s Love.After such a wonderful morning and dinner, The hotness between these 2 is outstanding. They can’t keep their hands off eachother, and their kissing it too hot. I’m ready for Tina to start screaming!! But then you stopped! Oh please post soon Skip.
Skip – another finger lick’n good chappy.
HOT!!!!!HOT!!!!! HOT!!!! Damn you are killing me here. I hope you post soon. I am so glad you are back. THank you PPS
Oh my god that was amazing, need a cold shower now, Hot, Hot, Hot, Hot
Damn right, No fucking stopping this time…BUT why you stopped right there, Skip!!! lol it’s HOT, great chapter. thanks for posting :)
well that was just a perfect way to end my day. skip, that was agony and almost ecstacy. thanks, ill put some in the kitty also.
Uhh, kind of speechless and uhh hot and uhh in need of a fast cool spray of water. Thanks for the chapter.
no stopping, no stopping so why did you stop? So when Tina stopped Bette from unzipping her dress and told told her to get a good nights sleep i was on the floor laughing. Like there was any chance of Bette sleeping after Tina got her all hot and bothered. I’m glad Bette got a second chance to go at Tina that night. I’m sure they’ll both be seeing fireworks soon enough. post soon.
Well, well, well, missy Skip, What do we have here; A hot and intense night with Bette and Tina. I adored the build-up as the sexual tension finally exploded between this pair. It was torturous to see the scene so slowly played out but the fire once lit is now all-consuming. Boy how these ladies wanna burn! It is a testament to your talents and skills as an author that this has been paced perfectly and demostrates the eternal attraction between these women. Now I can’t wait to see how this night progresses. Please continue soon. It was an exciting and entertaining chapter. Many thanks for this guilty pleasure (as I shoulda been working and not reading your delicious drama). Your Loyal Fan.
Please advise address where I can send a check to your nanny in hopes that another chapter isn’t too far away! Love this fic. Thanks for writing.
Phew…More, please, just MORE…!
wowza!
Major happy dances going on in my office as I catch up this morning. Incredible I love how you get me to feel the agony of Bette trying to resolve her issues but yet wanting to move forward. I’m liking this move too. Thanks the nanny, thank the pope hell I’ll thank anyone who lets you post again. Thanks
Just too good!!
“I haven’t done away with anything that you’ve given me, Bette. You should know that” she gently said.it felt as though tina is referring to bette’s heart as well. thanks skip, for 2 wonderful chapters. what more can we ask for… except for more. lol. please post soon.
woohoo!!!! What a splendid surprise!! Can I say I’m loving your nanny a little? Thank you so very much Skip!
Aint no stopping T&B now, and a big thank you to your childs Nanny.
Oh wow – back with a bang eh Skipton! Please stay a while & leave us some more chapters!