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    Reprisal Reprised- Chapter 6

    Story written on September 13, 2005 by Skipton.
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    Even though the path back to her office had not changed in the brief period of time that Bette had been out front, she could have sworn that she had never traversed it before. 

     

    The fog that had surrounded her mind upon seeing Tina was gaining strength and thickening.  There was a slight humming sound that she was hearing and yet was not able to discern from where it was coming.

     

    Shelly looked over at Bette as she walked next to her, a worried expression taking control of her attractive features.

     

    As they reached the door to the office, Bette turned to Shelly and said, “It’s ok, thanks, I’ll take it from here.”

     

    “Bette-” she started.

     

    “Really Shelly, just give me a minute, ok?”

     

    Taking a deep breath, she simply nodded her head and turned back towards her desk.

     

    Walking over to her own desk, she sat for a moment before she reached for the phone that was lying on top of the invoice that she had been reviewing just moments before.

     

    Clearing her voice, she put the phone to her ear and said, “Hello?”

     

    “Baby girl?” Kit asked, concern pouring through the phone.

     

    “Yeah” answered Bette, the tone of her voice leaving a lot to the imagination.

     

    “Bette” began Kit.  “Baby, are you ok?”

     

    “Why do you ask, Kit?”

     

    “I don’t know” she answered honestly.  “Shelly said that some woman came by to see you and I just couldn’t shake the feeling that I was getting.”

     

    “And what feeling is that?” questioned Bette, voice void of all emotion.

     

    “That it wasn’t anything good” she replied.

     

    “The visitor or what they would have to say?”

     

    “Both I guess.”

     

    Neither woman said anything until Kit spoke and asked, “Bette, who’s there?”

     

    After a brief pause, Bette collected her thoughts and said, “Sounds to me like you already have a good idea.”

     

    Rubbing her temples in disbelief, she softly said, “Tell me it’s not Tina.”

     

    “Ok” said Bette.  “It’s not Tina.  But that of course would be a lie.”

     

    “Damnit” she whispered.

     

    “Yeah” agreed Bette, “damnit.”

     

    There was another period of silence between the two women as both sat there and each allowed her thoughts to play out.

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    5. oh my..what a tease!!!! im dying of anxiety i hope they talk and try to give one another a chance i know Tina acted realy wrong but this is Bette and Tina and no matter what they belong together hope you feel that way soon Skip..lol..amazing chapter please post soon cant wait for that talk

    6. skippy, when i see your story i feel the need to take a xanax. my mouth goes dry and my heart is doing double time. so im still here and waiting to see what your gonna do to us. it was excellent as usual. thanks.

    12. And so the dance begins…but, who will lead and who will follow?

      I’m sure that some toes will be stepped on and there will be some faltering steps, hopefully they will listen to the rhythm that is set by their hearts.

      Lovely as always.

    13. Hmmn I wonder how this conversation is going to go? I’m reading this late at night – correction early morning 02.20am because I can’t sleep – & i’m not sure you’re helping Skip! I’ll have to try sleeping now – but I just kno my head will be full of story stuff!

    14. Take your time?

      Throwing rocks at downlow95 and goldfish….why do we want Skip to take her time? Have you 2 lost your minds? Skip….hurry up with another one….don’t listen to those 2.

      I start to salivate when I see that Skip has posted….I don’t want her to take her time…this story is just so damn fuckin’ good!

    15. Awesome! Just a quick question—- Is Bette’s assistant Shelly or Kelly? I’m really attached to this story whatever the assistants name is!!!

    17. I get such a kick out of Snoopy! *lol* I’m so torn myself. I want you to take your time in writing ’cause you are such a master at weaving a story, and I’m really, really enjoying this on so much…which leads to me wanting instant gratification! Shit! I want you to post away, Skip! This story is exceptional! Thanks!!!and more thanks!!!!

    18. As much as I want to say hurry up with this already, I won’t say it because I like it when you take your time and hover over every detail. Wonderful as always.

    19. Skip, you always leave me wanting more, and I have no problem with the idea of getting down on my knees and begging, if it will produce another chapter faster!!!!

    23. 1. What does she want?

      2. How could she possibly want anything, except to apologize profusely and offer a pound of her flesh?

      3. Bette is a gentlewoman. Kit is a saint.

    24. 09/13/2005, 22:30:57 PM
      From: Seahurst
      Comments: Skip, you always leave me wanting more, and I have no problem with the idea of getting down on my knees and begging, if it will produce another chapter faster!!!!

      Where’d I put my video camera…..

    27. This is really a amazing story Bette is just getting her life together,now Tina is back in town. How will this start.are if this just the beginning of a long heart break for Bette,

    29. Skipton,

      And now so near and yet so far; you have teased and torture your adoring fans with the last two chapters so I am ecstatic to hear and hope that your next chapter will bring the two gals together. Now is the perfect time to let them open up to each and hear one another. Only by sharing their fears and hopes can they move toward together. These women belong together. If only they will take this chance and open themselves up can they ever hope to enjoy the splendors of their love. They are two halves of the same soul. Yes, other pieces may fit but not completely.

      The back story was perfect along with Kit’s sisterly interruption but let’s move on to the good stuff.

      I can’t wait to see where and what will happen next in this terrific and tremendous tale. I will be waiting and watching.

      Your Loyal Fan

    30. Oh, Miss Tina I do believe you have some splanning to do. This needs to move slowly, but not too slowly. We can only hope that Tina has come back to win Bette back for good, but she needs to tread lightly. Please don’t leave us hanging too long.

    31. Great story! Dare I hope that there will be another post today? I’m out of town for the rest of the week and hate to miss out on your updates. Thanks for this story.

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