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Reprisal Reprised- Chapter 6
“Do you want me to come over there?”
Bette chuckled at Kit’s question and said, “No, its ok but thanks for asking.”
“Bette, you’ve come a really long way. You know that right?”
“Sure” answered Bette, convincing Kit of nothing.
“Bette, listen-”
“Kit?” interrupted Bette.
“What baby?”
“Thank you for caring. Really, I mean that. But I should probably go out there and see what she wants. *****” she chuckled. “For all we know, I forgot to sign one of the many pages of the divorce papers.”
“Bette” said Kit, not trusting Bette’s bravado.
“I’ll call you after I’ve talked to her, ok?”
“Right after? You promise?”
“Yes, right after.”
“I love you baby sister” said Kit.
“And I love you too, Kit” said Bette.
Placing the phone down, she looked at the glass of wine that was still sitting on her desk from before.
“Probably not a good idea” she thought.
Pulling out the top drawer of her desk, she reached for the bottle of Excedrin and after popping the top, threw two tablets into her mouth and swallowed.
Standing up, she smoothed down her pants and taking another deep breath, walked back towards the door to her office. Opening the door, she couldn’t help but wonder what it was that was out there waiting for her.
Closing the door gently behind her, Shelly made her way back towards her desk. She wasn’t 100% certain who Bette’s mystery guest was, but was beginning to figure it out.
Settling down in her chair, she looked at her computer screen but all she saw was blurred lines. She had not seen Bette in this condition since she had first started working for her and to say that she was concerned was an understatement.
“It’s beautiful” she heard.
Whipping her head up, she took in the blond woman that was a mere ten feet in front of her. She had actually forgotten that she was even there and so hearing another voice had startled her.
“I’m sorry” the blond quickly apologized. “I didn’t mean to scare you” she smiled.
“What a great smile she has” she thought to herself.
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(50 votes, average: 4.04 out of 5)
This is such an amazing story. Please keep it going, I’m glued to this one!
Great chapter..please continue
Take your time, it’s coming along beautifully!
luv it!! but damn these ending r killin me skip!!
oh my..what a tease!!!! im dying of anxiety i hope they talk and try to give one another a chance i know Tina acted realy wrong but this is Bette and Tina and no matter what they belong together hope you feel that way soon Skip..lol..amazing chapter please post soon cant wait for that talk
skippy, when i see your story i feel the need to take a xanax. my mouth goes dry and my heart is doing double time. so im still here and waiting to see what your gonna do to us. it was excellent as usual. thanks.
ok SKIP… now on with the real story… please update soon
I am totally stuck to your story Skpiton !! Post soon !!!
great story. I wonder what Tina wants.
hey is it Kelly or shelly? or are these 2 different characters?
Great story Skip, take your time. We’ll read when you are ready to share. I can’t wait to see what happens. please continue.
And so the dance begins…but, who will lead and who will follow?
I’m sure that some toes will be stepped on and there will be some faltering steps, hopefully they will listen to the rhythm that is set by their hearts.
Lovely as always.
Hmmn I wonder how this conversation is going to go? I’m reading this late at night – correction early morning 02.20am because I can’t sleep – & i’m not sure you’re helping Skip! I’ll have to try sleeping now – but I just kno my head will be full of story stuff!
Take your time?
Throwing rocks at downlow95 and goldfish….why do we want Skip to take her time? Have you 2 lost your minds? Skip….hurry up with another one….don’t listen to those 2.
I start to salivate when I see that Skip has posted….I don’t want her to take her time…this story is just so damn fuckin’ good!
Awesome! Just a quick question—- Is Bette’s assistant Shelly or Kelly? I’m really attached to this story whatever the assistants name is!!!
What SnQQpy said.
I get such a kick out of Snoopy! *lol* I’m so torn myself. I want you to take your time in writing ’cause you are such a master at weaving a story, and I’m really, really enjoying this on so much…which leads to me wanting instant gratification! Shit! I want you to post away, Skip! This story is exceptional! Thanks!!!and more thanks!!!!
As much as I want to say hurry up with this already, I won’t say it because I like it when you take your time and hover over every detail. Wonderful as always.
Skip, you always leave me wanting more, and I have no problem with the idea of getting down on my knees and begging, if it will produce another chapter faster!!!!
Absolutely wonderful! Just work at your own comfortable pace – you can’t rush these things.
Thanks for taking us on this journey!
been waiting long enough for this update. great chapter….*finger-crossed* for bette and tina!
mmmmm… I can’t wait until Bette makes it to her office…should be interesting, I can’t wait to hear what Tina has to say!!
1. What does she want?
2. How could she possibly want anything, except to apologize profusely and offer a pound of her flesh?
3. Bette is a gentlewoman. Kit is a saint.
09/13/2005, 22:30:57 PM
From: Seahurst
Comments: Skip, you always leave me wanting more, and I have no problem with the idea of getting down on my knees and begging, if it will produce another chapter faster!!!!
Where’d I put my video camera…..
great chapter, pls don’t leave us hanging too long it’s shear torture!!!!!
You make us wait so long for this? Let’s get to talking already. Nice story
This is really a amazing story Bette is just getting her life together,now Tina is back in town. How will this start.are if this just the beginning of a long heart break for Bette,
LOVE IT….THANKS SKIPTON FOR THE FABULOUS CHAPTER…PLEASE POST SOON..
Skipton,
And now so near and yet so far; you have teased and torture your adoring fans with the last two chapters so I am ecstatic to hear and hope that your next chapter will bring the two gals together. Now is the perfect time to let them open up to each and hear one another. Only by sharing their fears and hopes can they move toward together. These women belong together. If only they will take this chance and open themselves up can they ever hope to enjoy the splendors of their love. They are two halves of the same soul. Yes, other pieces may fit but not completely.
The back story was perfect along with Kit’s sisterly interruption but let’s move on to the good stuff.
I can’t wait to see where and what will happen next in this terrific and tremendous tale. I will be waiting and watching.
Your Loyal Fan
Oh, Miss Tina I do believe you have some splanning to do. This needs to move slowly, but not too slowly. We can only hope that Tina has come back to win Bette back for good, but she needs to tread lightly. Please don’t leave us hanging too long.
Great story! Dare I hope that there will be another post today? I’m out of town for the rest of the week and hate to miss out on your updates. Thanks for this story.
this story is amazing skip. i hope tina can explain herself to bette and get her back . they belong together. cant wait for ur next post
Excellent, I am so hoping for a happy story here. Love it so far.