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    Reprisal Reprised- Chapter 9

     

    Both women sat there in silence, neither feeling the need to say anything.  Reaching for her wine and taking a sip, Alice finally broke the silence.

     

    “Mmmm.  What kind of wine is this?” she asked.

     

    Turning to Alice, she said, “Why?  Do you like it?”

     

    “Yeah.  It’s really good.”

     

    “Good” smiled Bette.  “It’s a 1999 Boone’s Farm Select.”

     

    “Wow” she said as she took another sip.  “Really go-”

     

    Pulling the glass from her lips, she just looked at Bette and said, “Have I mentioned lately what an ***** you are?”

     

    “Define lately?” she chuckled.

     

    “Last five minutes.”

     

    “No” said Bette as she too sipped her wine.

     

    “You’re an *****.”

     

    “Tell me something I don’t know” she smiled as she raised her glass in toast.

     

    “To good friends” she said as she smiled at Alice.

     

    “To good friends that are *****” laughed Alice.

     

    “To good friends that are ***** that serve Boone’s Farm wine” added Bette.

     

    “What more is there in life?” smiled Alice as she took a sip of her wine after their glasses had clinked in toast.

     

    “Nothing that I can think of” said Bette, though not sure that that was really the truth.

     

     

     

     

    Hanging up the phone, Tina was pleased that the owner of the house that she liked had accepted her rental application.  That meant that she would only need to stay in the hotel for about ten more days while the current residents fully moved out and all of her stuff from New York was shipped to LA.

     

    Just as she picked up the phone to call Shannen to share the news with her, there was a knock on the door.

     

    Placing the phone back onto its cradle, she felt her heart immediately begin to beat faster.  She had told only two people here in LA where she was staying, Shane and Bette.  As she had already spoken to Shane this morning, she knew that it wasn’t her.  That left only one person, Bette.

     

    Quickly looking into a mirror while running her fingers through her hair, she walked over to the door.  Taking a deep breath, she turned the ***** and pulled the door towards her.

    Comments

    1. im glad Alice is there for Tina..again..when she really need somebody..it must be really sad be all by herself..Bette still look after her too and she must talk to Tina and ask what the hell happened…and i hope you explain why Tina left soon.. i´m an anxious person..lol..another amazing chapter cant wait for more

    2. wonderful perspective on Bette and Alice – now what’s the skinny on Tina don’t make us wait too long – it’s too intriquing. As always your writing is so so fine.

    3. I love your version of Bette! I’m glad that she’s learned a few things over the years. Al’s a good friend. Bette and Tina are lucky to have her around. Great chapter, skip! Definitely worth the wait. :)

    4. skippy, just dont playing us, k. bette sooo loves her some tina still. sending over al spot on. al will be the messenger that she was sent to be for bette. thanks. and soon please.

    5. Okay, I’m getting a warm fuzzy since one Bette Porter has such a big heart. I’m still wary of Tina though. Enjoyed the dialogue between Alice & Bette. Most endearing. Great chapter Skip!

    6. Thanks so much for this update. I loved the exchange between Alice and Bette, and you captured the electric tension between Alice and Tina, and their subsequent ease with each other so very well. This is a fabulous story–can’t wait to see where you take us with it.

    7. Boones Farm Select Oh the memory of a many of Boones Farm from my youth, I was laughing hard at the at one. Wonderful pace and sentiment in this one. Thanks so much for the story.

    8. Wow that was great and Bette does have a big heart for her to understand what it felt like to be alone and to know how hard that would be for Tina..Can’t wait to find out what kept Tina away..Please post soon and Good Luck with your Katrina survivor..You have a big heart also.

    9. Two great scenes between friends make this an excellent chapter. Bette has a surprising amount of empathy for Tina. I, too, am waiting to see how Tina will explain herself and how you will write it all in your superlative way. Thanks so much! Good luck with your new pet.

    10. Another wonderful chapter Skip. The dialogue in both scenes was perfect. Its nice to see that Bette still wants Tina to have support, even after she left her and went to NY.

    11. I glad that Bette asked Alice to go see Tina she has been there and knows how it feels. If yow need a friend,guess Alice and Shane would be it. Guess you will tell us why she left. thanks

    12. Tina has a ton of fences to mend, and I can’t wait to hear what she’s been up to.

      It was neat of you and your family to open your home to a pet left homeless by the hurricane. We all know that you and your inspiration have biggie sized talents, nice to know you have biggie sized hearts to match.

    13. Skipton,

      Another wondrous addition to this superb story.

      It is comforting to see that the support system is still in place for all of the gals.
      Even though they have all been through tough times the love, understanding and generosity is constant. These things are the measure of true friendship and bonding.
      It may be years since they last saw each other; the separation was sudden but the old habits like a pair of comfy slippers they just slip on and you soon forget you are wearing any.

      This has been poignantly crafted in this brilliant installment. It is a testament to the high quality and standard of your writing that so many fans are devoted to this fabulous fan fiction.

      These are intense and emotive times but through persistence and persuasion the rewards of reconnection are worth all of the short term turmoil and upheaval.

      I will be constant in my desire to follow this tale and will be here waiting and watching.
      Your Loyal Fan

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