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The air under the desk was beginning to feel humid and stagnant, Dan huffing away and Angelica barely breathing. Dan could feel the sweat move down the center of his back. He was just about to reach out for Angelica in an effort to calm her nerves when the lights when out.
“Well there goes the power.” Dan says not sure if Angelica could even hear him.
Despite the darkness, Dan could still feel Angelica shaking with her fear. He continued his efforts to reach out to Angelica by placing his hand on her arm trying to stroke it up and down. He prayed his actions would sooth her ragged nerves.
“Take in deep breaths Angie girl. It’s all going to be OK.” Dan yelled at the top of his lungs.
Angelica gave no indication that she even heard Dan. The involuntary trembling of her skin continued its motion unabated by Dan’s efforts. The only thing that was paramount in Angelica’s mind was the runaway freight train that sounded like it was going to crash into them at any second. Angelica had never heard anything this loud in her entire life.
She could physically feel the wave of sound as it hit her body. Having the lights go out only increased her anxiety. All of her muscles were tense, her sense of flight making her feel trapped under this desk. It was becoming hard for her to catch her breath. A heavy weight was beginning to press on Angelica’s chest preventing her from getting the air she needed. The harder she tried the harder it became to breath until it wouldn’t have mattered whether the light was on or not. Angelica was rapidly getting to the point of blind panic.
Dan could feel the panic pouring off of Angelica. He was just about to attempt to calm her further when he felt her press against him. Angelica began flinging her arms the best she could in the limited space hitting Dan in the face and shoulders. She was trying to get Dan to move anyway she could so she could escape this prison.
“Angelica!” Dan yelled.
“Angelica calm down!”
”I’ve … got … to get … out of … here.” Angelica finally yells back.
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Well a dirty bathroom was good enough so far, maybe Dan can jump the shark with the jet. But, j-WET, I’m not convinced it was rainwater that got their pants wet. You have my sympathies regarding your writer’s cramp, but I’d trade you for the viral gastroenteritis I was playing host to this week. Talk about cramps! So Happy Holidays, girl, light the lights and maybe you’ll get a new laptop for the holidays.
Wow Jwet thanks for posting…we appreciate the effort you took to get this to us. I hope they remain fine…I wouldn’t want a message to get to Bette & Tina that they are fine only to drown. I hope you get a new laptop for the holidays also…with your writing you deserve one.
i also appreciate the effort to bring us this wonderful story. if anyone deserves a present its you. if you dont post before christmas have a jolly one. mine wont be so good. my bro is maybe a week to 10 days to the end and my mom has been in icu for about 3 weeks. so…. not the best holidays. but thanks for all you do and the time and effort you give us.
OMG, you can’t leave it like that…pls that just is so mean….pls post again and soon
albeez sorry about your mom and bro…tuff times…now jwet…i was so happy and now u r gonna drown them?? Mama B will come hunting u down for giving false hope…holy hell, how r they gonna escape the water…outrun or fly???? please post as soon as u can, i’m waiting….
This such an exciting and well written story. Tina’s letting her deepest and most heartfelt feelings come out. Will her revelations ruin their relationship? PPS. Hopefully your computer problems will be happily resolved. Albeez, I can’t begin to understand the sad times you’re experiencing but my good thoughts and prayers are w/you to find the necessary strength to soldier through. God Bless.
Oh Albeez, my thoughts are with you and your family. It is a tough time no matter what, but especially during the holidays…..JWET, have I told you lately what a gifted story-teller you are? If I haven’t, let me do that now. Gifted…story-teller…that would be you. Hey, great surprise…after we spoke today I went home and was brought to tears when I saw my apartment building had electricity!!! All around me there is pitch dark, but I am warm and safe. Still over 700,000 people in the Puget Sound area without power and temps will be close to freezing tonight. A lot of very cold, miserable people here. As a woman said today…this has been the longest winter before winter has even started!
OMG, what next!!!!!!!PPS
holy shit! you cant leave it like this you big TEASE… least tibette will findout that angel is alright now… and thank god she can swim..lol ive been in a tornado butt a hurricane never,but i saw pictures of KATRINA COMING A SHORE… blew me away.. p.p.s.
Yep that wall of water will do it everytime. A forty foot surge took the interstate bridge 15 to 20 miles from the coast in Florida. You sound as if you have lived through a few of these storms. This story brings back so many memories but now I can reflect on them and not cry as much. I hope that when Angelica (and you better not bring harm to her) gets back home that the nightmares that she will have will be comforted by her moms who love her beyond anything else in this world. Thank you for the post and hope that the hand is healing nicely.
Hanger? What hanger? I have to wonder where they will run for cover from the wall of water because it sounds like there isn’t much of a hanger left.
OMG! Post Soon!!!! ;(
FTLOG—you can’t leave it there!! You’re killing me here! plz post soon… plz, plz have a happy outcome all around here!!!!!!
What!!, after all that, please let them be safe. albeez,sorry to hear about your family, were here with you and will keep you in our thoughts and prayers.
This is a great story you’ve got here!!
talking about disaster…i hope angie will be okay, so are her moms….thanks for posting even after everything…albeez, you know i’m praying for you and your family…be strong
albeez so sorry to hear about your family members being so ill, my thoughts are with you. Jwet, damn girl you brought the drama. Have a wonderful holiday season and thanks for posting.
Hey girl; what a story! I’m very happy that hurricane season for Hawaii is over. This is a great story. I have been waiting for each post. It’s been a heck of year. Happy Holidays to you and yours.
You didn’t just leave us like that did you? Well I guess you did! Great chappy, well worth the wait.
That was so cruel to leave it there, but lets hope Santa brings you a new laptop to continue your great story.
OMG! Thanks for great update Jwet! Bette and Tina will be so glad to get word about Angie. Now don’t let anything happen to her.Albeez, our thoughts and prayers are with you.
OMG! What drama, what suspense! But Dan is the man and I’m sure they’ll both ride out the storm. If we don’t hear from you in the meantime – have a great Christmas!
Albeez..you are in my thoughts and prayers Hun. J…you stressed me out here! I clicked on this and thought..phew they’r eok and are gonna get outta there. What’s with the cliffie? My ol’ heart can’t take it! Happy Holidays to all…thanks for the post!
Albeez, my prayers are with you. Jwet, you gave me hope, took it away and left me with a cliffie. I can’t fuss too much because it was a great chapter. Ask Santa for a new laptop. I’ll email you soon.
Damn this is bad and please let them run quick up to the moutain and be safe, please dont let anything happy to Angei. Damn you killing us here my friend. OK post soon please, thanks!