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Angie doesn’t immediately respond to Dan’s question. He is too busy looking at the ladder and then behind them to gauge how much time they have to see her head nodding up and down.
“Do you think you can do that?” Dan asks a little louder this time commanding Angie to answer.
Shocked out of her silent, “Yes” Angelica says quickly not even think if she can or can’t.
“Good girl now let me hand you up.” Dan says when they reach the bottom. The wall of water didn’t look to be that far away and already a roaring sound was getting louder and louder. Dan didn’t want to waste valuable seconds looking back. Instead he lunged forward reaching the far footer. Without letting Angie’s feet hit the ground, Dan turned her around so she was facing the ladder a thrust her up in the air.
“Angie can you reach the bottom rung? Grab it girl.” Dan instructs in the calmest voice he can muster. “Do you have it?”
When Dan can see that Angie is holding on to the bottom rung he moves his hand down to her calves and begins pushing them up. He is trying to get her as high as possible. “Climb Angie … Climb. I’m going right behind you. Don’t wait. Climb.”
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Bette escaped to their bedroom leaving Tina in the living room with the TV on and the new still blaring. She needed to pack her bag. She needed to be ready to leave the moment they confirmed Angelica’s safety. Angelica’s safety that was the only coherent thought going through Bette’s mind right now. Anything else and she would be left in the same quaking mass she had been earlier on the patio.
Robotically Bette pulls down a small overnight bag from the top shelf of the closet. Placing on the bed she opens the bag before turning around to the dresser behind her. Opening a drawer and pulling out a few items, panties, a couple bras closing the drawer Bette then opens the one beneath it, pajamas, a couple tank tops. Bette isn’t really paying a lot of attention to what she picks up. Turning she puts the clothes in the bag and then turns back to the closet to pull out a few suits. Bette doesn’t really know what to pack and isn’t thinking clearly on what she will need. Finally satisfied that she has enough close for a few days, Bette walks into the bathroom for her makeup, toothbrush and any other items she will need and quickly throws them in on top. Satisfied she closes up the bag and goes to leave the room.
At the door way Bette stops, was it just a week or so ago that Bette had just return here to Tina bedroom. Looking around the room Bette feels destroyed inside. The rebuild trust that Bette had worked so hard to construct with Tina didn’t turn out to be the life sustaining substance she had hoped. If trust was a currency that measures the safety between two people right now Bette felt bankrupt, broke. Turning away this room represented failure to her again. Bette hiked the bag over her shoulder and walked out the front door. She was going to drop it in her trunk so she would be ready to leave when they got Angelica’s safety confirmed.
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now that was just painful, how are you going to leave us hanging like that. Tina needs to block the door.
I have to agree with brighteyez07… it’s heartbreaking point to leave us at. 3 weeks?? are you sure? check your ticket, I think it says 3 days! how ironic that all 3 Porter-Kennards need to pull themselves up with a strength they didn’t know they had to save their lives (literally and figuratively of course!). I’ll be waiting!!!!!!
Well, I guess we won’t be seeing Bette and Tina on any of our Crystal Coast or Outer Banks beaches anytime soon.. Have a good trip, Jwet!
well that was just sad all over. tina, tina tina. grow the hell up and go to therapy. thanks and have a good time.
Isn’t Tina at least going to attempt to make things right with Bette? I can’t believe she didn’t follow Bette and try to talk through this. And 3 weeks!? Damn.
we just get u back,and ur leaving again.Damn women.lol why didnt tina try to talked to bette and work this out this issue.when ur scare,and unasure for a loved one we say things we dont mean but they come out.OOOOPS! post when can please
Oh my goodness…you just came back to us, you can’t leave already. Please…just one more before you go??? :)
Oh NO we have to wait another 3 weeks to find out if Both Dan and Angelica make it through wave of the storm surge. COME ON Tina snape out of it and stop Bette. Have a GREAT trip Jwet and hurry back :o).
Way too short! And I don’t want B&T to split up…AGAIN!
Enjoy your vaction and thank you for this post. There is so much pain in that house with Tina dwelling on Angie’s safety and probably what she said to Bette. Bette feels like her entire life is over and is in another world. While this is taking place Angie and Dan are fighting for their lives. I hope that one day we get to see the Porter Kennard family together with Dan and his. Again enyoy your vaction.
You are such a tease!! Great job of describing Dan and Angelica. I could see them running…could see Dan lifting her up, and Angelica desperately trying to climb up the tower. Did I tell you how happy I am that you are posting again? See how much we all miss your writing? :)
Bon Voyage, but see if you can squeeze in something for us along the way. You’re almost as bad as Tina: you just come back and now you tell us you’re leaving us again. Makes me want to pack my bag. Doesn’t mean I’ll put it in my trunk, though. Sure hope that tower is on strong foundations and old Danny boy has a bit of strength left to hoist himself up.
Nice to see your posts. Thanks.
Please let Angie be ok and B&T too!
Hey JWet, Given your marvelous talent I will wait an eternity for a new posting. This story really is heating up and the fate of Dan and Angelica is at mother nature’s misery. Meanwhile Bette and Tina have ripped uot my heart and stamped all over it. This all important muscel is bruised and battered but able to recovered with time and patience. This is what I hope that Tina has for Bette plus a little compassion and understanding. These gals do need to work at their relationship but that can only be done with open and honest communication. It may be hurtful but it needs to be said as only then can it nurture and deeden their bond. Please bring some fine weather into this tumultous time. I absoluteky love your work and applaud your talent, skills and work rate. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Wow, two chapters in two days? I was so excited to see you had started posting again. Thanks for the update, enjoy your vacation, and come back to us soon :)
You can’t leave now, that’s just plain mean, get us all revved up again and then disappear!! Holy heart stoppers Batman. Guess we’ll be patient but please don’t wait too long again to continue this fabulous story.
That was sad. See u back in three weeks Jwet. Have a good one.
u have to write while u r away and send the next chapters to us…do u hear me…it is downright unfair to leave us hanging like this….so I’m waiting; lol…take care…