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“I’ve learned my lesson.” Bette murmurs to herself bolstering the commitment she has made never to put her family in jeopardy again.
Never in her life will she forget the scene when they landed at the Coast Guard station. To Alice’s credit she must have pulled in a lot of chips because the little jet coasted right up to the Coast Guard hanger upon landing. Bette and Tina were made to wait on board while the reporter and cameraman departed the plane and take up their positions.
The hatch of the jet was opened and Bette walked down the few stairs to dry ground. They were parked in front of the hanger with the doors of the hanger swung opened revealing the massive cavity within. In the predawn darkness the powerful lights coming from inside drew the eye within. The hanger was humming with activity with uniform men and women moving quickly and with purpose each on missions still not complete.
At the bottom of the stairway, a little reception committee waited, looking back Bette held out her hand for Tina to grasp as she came out the hatch. She quickly grabbed Bette’s hand. It seemed to help orient herself to the scenes before her. Each of them glancing around making a quick search of their surroundings for Angelica. When she was no where to be seen they focused on the group gathering just a few steps away. The cameraman was off to the side crouched and already filming. The reporter seemed to be talking to a gentleman in uniform who appeared to be in charge. Alice was right there too absorbing everything he said and then looking to Bette and Tina. Alice waved them forward letting them know with her smile that things were still good.
“Guys this is Colonel Bringham of the US Coast Guard.” Alice introduces. “This is Bette Porter and Tina Kennard, Angelica’s mothers.”
Bette offers her hand free hand, “Nice to meet you.” Both Bette and Tina voice at the same time.
“Likewise” the Colonel nods, “but I don’t think you’re here to meet me. I have your daughter let’s get you two inside so we can get this reunion underway.”
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First, thank you for saving Dan! I appreciate that! This story was simply amazing. I know it has to end, but rest assured I’ll be reading anything that you decide to write and post. You’re an amazing writer J….come back to us when you’re ready!
Thank you for such an exciting, warm and wonderful story. I look forward to the next one. Take care of yourself.
I for one enjoyed the happy ending. I am sure that Angie is scarred for life but knowing that she survived this ordeal gives her a foot up on most people. She is a fighter and would not give up hope. I was glad to read that Dan was able to meet and talk to Bette and Tina and for Dan to also know how terrifying it was for Angie to watch him getting knocked off the tower. With you new story please do not keep B&T apart for long.
Even in FF you find yourself thanks The God upabove for the life that was spared. Dan and Angies. Being a parent is hard. You are a Mother before anything else. Thanks so much for this wonderful written story. Hey Lady I was born in Dallas been here for a long time except for my husband being in the service. A lot of time wasn’t with him. We carry a spray bottle of water in the car Just spray the inside ,the car is so hot the water is gone and the car is 15 degrees Cooler. thanks
Thanks for writing this great story.
Jwet an amazing story and one showing all the love for our girls and the family. All of Bette’s good intentions did not go to waste but it was an experience that no one wants to have especially for a child. Angie and her family have learned a very valuable lesson, most especially Bette. We can not always control every situation we find ourselves in. We should just give it up to the spirit most high and let him take care of everything. Please write something else for us when you can, I really do enjoy your writing and stories. A little angst but always much love and understanding. Have a rest.
The only sad thing is that your story has come to an end. Thanks so much! Glad you got to stay home, I’ll catch you next time you’re in NYC.
Yey!!! You made my eyes tear up! This story was sweet, and touching, and thrilling, all at the same time…….I twist your arm and get this great story. You twist my arm and nothing happens! Uh, I think I got the better end of that!! LOL Thanks J.
Thanks so much for your lovely story. I have enjoyed it from the beginning and am glad that you were coaxed into continuing. I’ll be sitting by the computer anxiously awaiting your next tale!
What a lovely, touching story. Thanks so much for coming back to it. You are just amazing!! Please feel free to bring us another story when you’re ready. I always enjoy your writing. :)
This has been a great story. Thank you so much for sharing.
Thanks Jwet, I enjoyed that. And thanks for saving Dan. I think B & T should never fly commercial again, just Air Dan. Looking forward to your next.
Thanks for such a nailbiter tale. Hope you have a new story for us soon.
thanks for lovely and thrilling story…who said it was predictable? but it sometimes the best…thanks for keeping everyone alive and well…looking forward for your next story…hopefully with happy ending too ;)
thank you for coming back to this and finishing it up so beautifully .
It made me cry.
it was as always excellent. have always loved your writing. cant wait for the next one. im really gonna have to find sometime to call. thanks again.
Hey JWET…Thanks for the kind words. It’s always fun to bounce around your ideas for a story or chapter. You are a truly gifted writer and it continualy amazes how you can take the ‘bounced around ideas’ and turn them into a story that flows effortlessly, taking us through all the highs and lows of our favorite characters. I have been blessed to be able to involved in your creations! Ha…if my high school English teacher could see me now…an “editor” when I had such trouble with writing & grammer!!! Get some R&R and post your next story soon. Take Care!
Jeez, I’ve got a little lump in my throat. You did a great job with this story from beginning to end. Thanks for sticking with it and for sharing your talent with all of us.
That was a wonderful ending, glad everyone are ok and good now. Glad to catch up with this story and love it. Thanks for sharing this story with us and hope to see you soon, thanks!
Predictable? Yes, but when it’s good, it don’t matter; it’s good! I had tears even though I know you’ll reunite the family. It’s like the classics, when it’s well written, it’s enjoyable reading! Thank you. I just hope you write/post another story; and very soon! Aloha!
JWet, Thank you so much for this fabulous fan fiction. It has scalesd the heights and depths of emotions. Showing how wonderful and terrifying love can be. Everything that the gang have been through has left they stronger than before. Most pleasing was Bette’s epiphany that she cannot control the world but has to go with it. I hope that this lesson will stay with her and provide a mantra for the rest of her life. Family is everything; love and communication are the mortar that hold it all together. JWet, as always you have pricked my heart and soul with these superb scenes. Thank you so much, Your Loyal Fan.
hey u, haven’t read the story yet; and I hope I didn’t pester u, know I’m gonna love it & cry; hope u r working to post the other one soon, much luv, T.
oh so sweet….thank u for the time & EFFORT…great story telling on your busy schedule…cheers…one of my friends got a full-time job, i won a victory over violence at work and u are about to commence a new story…go on!!!! Lol…celebrating 4 and with u….
Thank you for a lovely story Jwet!… Hope you would come back with another one :-)
That was such a sweet and exciting story, thank you for sharing with us. Eventhough I’m a bit nervous about your next story with a separated B&T, can’t wait to read it though ;) I’m sure it will be done in a mature and meaningful ways so post soon.
What a lovely story. Thanks so much. Can we visit the family again next year when art camp is offered again? Will Angie want to leave her cute little brother (or sister) behind to go to art camp?
What another brilliant story you have written, I always look forward to reading your work, I hope you have some more stories lurking in the background.
Jwet, such a great story! Angie’s wait til next year at camp… like B/T will let her out of their sight by then! lol, but it shows her strong spirit. looking forward to the next story… no pressure!