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“Well, Mr. Carvington,” she started with alarm as Tina lurched forward at the name now sitting close to her partner on the bed, “I don’t know if you’re aware but I’m no longer in the service of the CAC.” Tina was mouthing the words “Carvington” as she continued to bounce Angelica into a quieter, yawning sob.
“Yes I am aware, Ms. Porter or I would of contacted you at the office during business hours. However, you came highly recommended to me through an associate of my father’s and I would rather like to employ your services if you will give me the opportunity to entertain the thought. Let’s say lunch? At Chez Triumph 11:30 my treat of course. I would love your input on a restoration project my father is currently attempting,” Mr. Carvington stated matter-of-factly. Bette’s head was spinning.
“Of course, Mr. Carvington, I would love to meet you for lunch. Ok. I’ll see you there.” Bette hung up the phone and stared with a huge grin at Tina. “My god, I have a luncheon with Harold Carvington,” she gasped. Tina was shocked and grinned from ear to ear.
“See babe what did I tell you. You’re in demand!” she started but caught herself at the slight whisper from the now sleeping Angelica. “I’ll make coffee,” she whispered and gave Bette a kiss on the cheek.
Shane tapped on the paint faded door. A window slid open and a face briefly appeared. “What do you want?” a voice asked. Shane looked around the alleyway.
“I’m here to see Kevin,” she said. The little plank of wood over the window slammed shut. Shane stood with her back to the door and looked out into the street watching the cars go by. A second later the door behind her opened and she stepped inside.
Bette walked into Chez Triumph and adressed the matre D. “I’m here to meet with Mr. Harold Carvington,” she told him as he smiled and looked into his reservation book. He took out a hand and led her through the overpriced tables and into a corner of the room where a young looking man sat in a dark blue suit with emerald green tie. He stood as she approached and the maitre d left the two alone after a little bow. “Mr. Carvington, I’m Bette Porter.”
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fabulous story, you’re a really good author!You seem to know the characters very well! I must say I was suprised Carmen doesn’t want to be with Shane anymore ,please don’t let it be that way , they are perfect for one another ,pretty please:)
This is a really impressive story and one that i will definitely be checking for updates. I love how detailed it is and how much thought that has obviously been put into making the story what it is. I thought it was hilarious when Blaine, a Shane look-alike was introduced as Carmen’s new girlfiend.I mean even the name is similar, classic! Anyhow, I hope that Carmen changes her mind, cause she’s Shane’s girl not Blaine’s.
i like the style of writing…cool! keep posting..!!
This is BRILLIANT! Totally fresh, original and witty . I loved that Carmen’s new g/f looks like Shane , it totally cracked me up .I hope you update soon because it’s a really great fic and let Carmen and Shane make up , they are soul mates . Carmen can date Blaine but still desire to be with Shane. AWESOME JOB!!5 STARS. update soon,please…..
*juicy* dare I request more???? This was good…:-)
Im enjoying this. I really like Will and how she helped Shane at the end. Hope you keep going with this.
This is a great story:) I hope that this isn’t the end for Shane&Carmen, please , let Carmen give her another chance. She’s dating a Shane lookalike , she obviously wants her!
This was great! You have obviously spent a lot of time developing this story, and is definitely worth it!!
I told u i was going to comment and here i am LOL. It’s a really good story and i really like it. I cant wait for ur next post so hurry up with that editing!! POST SOON!! :)