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Shane turned around and met eyes with Carmen. Decked out in a silvery dress for just such a formal occassion hanging out with what appeared to be her new girlfriend looking very Shanesque in the corner. Shane turned back and faced Will for a moment.
“That’s her I take it,” Will asked not removing her eyes from her friend. Shane couldn’t even tell Will had even looked in that direction let alone knew who she was talking about. Shane shook her head a little meeting with a non-energetic “yeah”.
“She didn’t waste time,” Shane added remorsefully. Will continued to stare at Shane watching the speeding metamorphises take over her body.
“She could be just a friend, Shane. Why don’t you go say hi to , uh sorry, Cartman?” she suggested.
“Carmen,” Shane corrected flinching as she said it as if the very word was to painful to pronounce. Shane turned around and saw her laughing with Jenny next to some statue of stainglass suspended on stainless steel arms. Shane started striding over to her, her heart pounding inside her head as she neared the two laughing, apparently all unaware of her prescence until the last moment. Carmen’s back was toward Shane and Jenny’s smile turned soft as she said hi to her. “Hi,” she answered.
Shane’s voice rang in Carmen’s ears, they sounded warm and soft but hurtful all at once to her. She hesitated to turn around but soon was left with no other option as Jenny quickly dissapeared into the crowd of the rest of the art galleries patrons and party goers. Carmen and Shane stared into each other’s eyes for moments that seemed to them like eternities in uncomfortable silences.
“You look nice,” Carmen started smiling bleakly as she did so. Shane looked down at her clothes, nothing special she thought but looked up quickly and said thanks.
“You look nice too. The silver really brings out your uh..” she trailed off. There was no point of easy conversation beyound this point.
“I heard Jenny took you to rehab,” Carmen said. Shane shook her head finding it hard to find words to talk with the woman only a few weeks ago she had confessed everything to. “How’d that work for you,” Carmen asked.
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fabulous story, you’re a really good author!You seem to know the characters very well! I must say I was suprised Carmen doesn’t want to be with Shane anymore ,please don’t let it be that way , they are perfect for one another ,pretty please:)
This is a really impressive story and one that i will definitely be checking for updates. I love how detailed it is and how much thought that has obviously been put into making the story what it is. I thought it was hilarious when Blaine, a Shane look-alike was introduced as Carmen’s new girlfiend.I mean even the name is similar, classic! Anyhow, I hope that Carmen changes her mind, cause she’s Shane’s girl not Blaine’s.
i like the style of writing…cool! keep posting..!!
This is BRILLIANT! Totally fresh, original and witty . I loved that Carmen’s new g/f looks like Shane , it totally cracked me up .I hope you update soon because it’s a really great fic and let Carmen and Shane make up , they are soul mates . Carmen can date Blaine but still desire to be with Shane. AWESOME JOB!!5 STARS. update soon,please…..
*juicy* dare I request more???? This was good…:-)
Im enjoying this. I really like Will and how she helped Shane at the end. Hope you keep going with this.
This is a great story:) I hope that this isn’t the end for Shane&Carmen, please , let Carmen give her another chance. She’s dating a Shane lookalike , she obviously wants her!
This was great! You have obviously spent a lot of time developing this story, and is definitely worth it!!
I told u i was going to comment and here i am LOL. It’s a really good story and i really like it. I cant wait for ur next post so hurry up with that editing!! POST SOON!! :)