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Riders ch.4
Good it was good to see her. Dana was one of the few people I had ever truly considered friend. We had spent years as juniors competing together until she went off to be a vet. Then once she qualified she joined a practice and got a job on the tour. We had had some serious fun partying and pleasuring our way around the world in the previous two years before she had returned home. I was glad she had met Alice they would make a great couple. Though I did not think she was any more likely to settle down than I was.
But then she was the elder of the two of us at 27 maybe she was ready and had found what she went home to look for. Alice was seven years her junior but they matched well in their youthful spirits and dirty minds. And I was glad that my old friend and new friend were together as I liked Al and would have hated Dana to be with someone I could not stand.
As we all stood laughing at Dana’s stories of how she had seduced Al I happened to glance over at the door. At that moment I think I forgot to breath. There stood looking like a deer caught in headlights was Bette Porter. I had not seen her in anything other than riding clothes and she took my breath away in her casual outfit of choice for the evening.
She was wearing jeans that I new made her ass look amazing even though she was facing me. And a white T-shirt that hugged her body with you’re the top of my to do list written across her chest. She had her hair down framing her face and falling over her shoulders in perfect ringlets. Subtle make up surrounded her amazing eyes drawing me to look into the.
As Alice went over to invite her in I felt Dana lean in to whisper in my ear.
“Looks like I’m not the only old timer to have her heart stolen by a young gun while we have been apart.”
“Don’t be stupid Dana. I mean she hot and everything but I don’t live her. I just want to sleep with her. You know I’m not into all that if I wanted to settle down I could have done it. And less of the old I am only 26 which makes me younger than you.”
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(51 votes, average: 3.53 out of 5)
I like your story a lot. It’s different and entertaining. I enjoy the perspectives of each character and seeing Bette as the “straight girl.” It sounds like it will be a fun “ride!” Thanks for writing.
I see Tina becoming a mega bitch without her cigs unless she chugs a lot of water which is supposed to flush out the nicotine. And for Bette to supposedly not want Tina, that t-shirt sure said the opposite. ;)
Enjoyed. Thanks for the bet to get Tina to stop smoking. That was my favorite part. Love how Dana is TOTALLY into Alice and being the aggresser.
So great to see another post from you – it’s a great, funny and very diffirent beginning, so keep’em coming….
I was thinking about this story! I am so glad you posted LMAO! Love the update, please post soon!
ok, a little slow with the post…but well worth it, now, off you go to write some more….all us unsatiable’s
This should be fun!
well, i’m ready for fun too
Good chapter, like it!