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Right Next Door PT1
She was normally a confident woman who had no problem with talking to women! Now this one girl comes along and shakes her complete world. Bette threw her head back and downed the rest of the alcohol. She needed it.
They continued to talk for the next hour. They mainly talked about Eric and his career in the art industry. Tina had confidently told Bette that she was wary about Eric travelling so much; because of the obvious reasons and that she didn’t trust him. That was when she shyly admitted that it was the reason she accompanied him on this trip.
“Want to go for a dip?” Tina whispered as she kicked her feet in the pool.
It had long turned dark and the wine was taking affect on the blond. Suddenly taking a dip in the pool was a fantastic suggestion. Bette didn’t even have time to answer; Tina was already tugging her dress off over her head and chucking it to one side.
Bette’s jaw dropped as soon as the moonlight bounced off of Tina’s naked body. She was incredibly beautiful. Not wanting to be noticed just sat there. Bette rose to her feet and quickly removed her own clothing. Once she too was naked, she lowered herself in the pool and hid underneath the surface.
“This pool is so nice, the water is just right, you know?” Tina approached Bette in the water and smiled. “Do you often do this kind of thing?”
“No, not really, I’ll just put this under special occasions, how about that?” Bette moved a little closer to Tina whilst sweeping her damp curls away from her eyes. “Do you often do this kind of thing?”
Tina bit down on her bottom lip and looked away, “No, not usually. Eric doesn’t like me in the pool when I’m naked; it makes me quite upset actually. He doesn’t like me to be naked an awful lot.” Tina tried to hide her sadness by laughing loudly, but it sounded nervous and strained.
Bette didn’t laugh. She reached across and brushed a stray blond lock away from Tina’s face to behind her ear. Tina smiled weakly but forced her eyes to stay locked with Bette’s. She didn’t want to ruin this moment, this… whatever it was. Bette dropped her hand to her shoulder and gently massaged her skin.
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(45 votes, average: 3.56 out of 5)
Did Eric even come back? Any of my friends show up that time in the morning, they can just wait outside. I like how Tina seems to be the more aggressive one here. I do believe they need more time in the pool
well you have got my attention, I also find I enjoy the Tibette beginnings especially when the writers add in Eric. He is such a jackass and always brings a smile to my face when he is in a storyline.Great start… well done and I look forward vey much to your next postings
Awesome concept. Can’t wait to see it play out.
Nice beginning…now, if we can just get rid of Eric…
I have a date with your next chapter so post it soon, please. I like this story. One whole month with Tina in the guest room with the cheating boyfriend. You need to find a girl for the cheating boyfriend so that Tina can move on with Bette.
Great start!! Eric totally reminds me of zee penis, zee pussy guy!!LOL. Can’t wait to see where this goes, thanks for posting.
This is good and like it
a very good beginning ! hope you update again soon
Oooh, I’m liking this already. Poor Eric has no idea what’s about to hit him :). I hope he doesn’t cause Bette too many problems at work. Loving the B&T chemistry. Great start, please continue.
So far we have a non-jackass Eric which is a nice change. I just feel bad for him already. PPS!
One glass of wine and Tina hops in the pool naked?… can we buy Bette a case of wine, please? ;-)
This was a fun start! Isn’t it a relief to finally write down a story that has been knawing at you for long time!? :) Thanks!!
eric should just move out pms
Nice and original. Lots of potential for fun.
Great start,im with the others eric should just give up already.please update soon.:))))
Super ! Great concept for their first meeting.
Great Start!!! By Eric. I am glad to see your back. Thanks PPS
This is a great start. I hope you provide us with a lot of nice turns in the story like only you can. Thanks.
I’m intrigued. Please post more.
This is good..really good!! I’m sure there will be more of those chemistry moments full of fire and sparks.
hmmm… i like it… great start.. please continue
Well i be damned, Tina is pretty bold in this story and i love it yes finally, Bette dont know what to do lol…this is about to get interesting