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Right Next Door PT1
“Would you like a tour?” Bette questioned quietly.
“That would be great, thank you,” Eric answered for the both of them.
Bette nodded and motioned for them to follow her. She led them past her bedroom and down to the hallway where the guest bedroom was. She pushed open the door and walked through.
“This will be the room you’ll be staying in,” Bette pointed to the bed, “I’ve put clean sheets on but if you have some sort of accident or just feel the need to change them again, there are some in the drawers underneath the bed – along with fresh towels.”
She turned around and walked to the large wardrobes along the wall adjacent to the bed, “Lots of space for when you unpack, if there isn’t enough, I think there is an empty drawer on the right hand side of the bed.”
Tina was watching her every move. It was like Bette was giving them a lecture. Her body moved with such elegance and beauty that it made her mouth go dry. She loved the way she moved her arms as she explained things, as soon as she’d opened the front door she had noticed this.
“Baby,” Eric mumbled, nudging Tina softly in the ribs. Tina looked over and clutched her side. As if she was expecting the pain to be excruciating when instead, she didn’t feel a thing. “You were kind of out of it. Bette asked if there would be anything that you would need.”
She looked over at Bette and was alarmed to see the amused expression on her face. Her eyebrow was arched and she noticed the corner of her lips tugging upwards in a sly smile. Tina shook her head in reply and turned away, not wanting Bette to see the blush that once again attacked her skin.
Bette went on to show them the rest of the house.
She was about to offer them some light food but Eric asked if it would be ok if he could go out for a while. Tina seemed against the idea but she didn’t object. Eric gathered his coat and keys before quickly leaving. Probably off to some bar, Tina thought miserably.
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(45 votes, average: 3.56 out of 5)
Did Eric even come back? Any of my friends show up that time in the morning, they can just wait outside. I like how Tina seems to be the more aggressive one here. I do believe they need more time in the pool
well you have got my attention, I also find I enjoy the Tibette beginnings especially when the writers add in Eric. He is such a jackass and always brings a smile to my face when he is in a storyline.Great start… well done and I look forward vey much to your next postings
Awesome concept. Can’t wait to see it play out.
Nice beginning…now, if we can just get rid of Eric…
I have a date with your next chapter so post it soon, please. I like this story. One whole month with Tina in the guest room with the cheating boyfriend. You need to find a girl for the cheating boyfriend so that Tina can move on with Bette.
Great start!! Eric totally reminds me of zee penis, zee pussy guy!!LOL. Can’t wait to see where this goes, thanks for posting.
This is good and like it
a very good beginning ! hope you update again soon
Oooh, I’m liking this already. Poor Eric has no idea what’s about to hit him :). I hope he doesn’t cause Bette too many problems at work. Loving the B&T chemistry. Great start, please continue.
So far we have a non-jackass Eric which is a nice change. I just feel bad for him already. PPS!
One glass of wine and Tina hops in the pool naked?… can we buy Bette a case of wine, please? ;-)
This was a fun start! Isn’t it a relief to finally write down a story that has been knawing at you for long time!? :) Thanks!!
eric should just move out pms
Nice and original. Lots of potential for fun.
Great start,im with the others eric should just give up already.please update soon.:))))
Super ! Great concept for their first meeting.
Great Start!!! By Eric. I am glad to see your back. Thanks PPS
This is a great start. I hope you provide us with a lot of nice turns in the story like only you can. Thanks.
I’m intrigued. Please post more.
This is good..really good!! I’m sure there will be more of those chemistry moments full of fire and sparks.
hmmm… i like it… great start.. please continue
Well i be damned, Tina is pretty bold in this story and i love it yes finally, Bette dont know what to do lol…this is about to get interesting