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Right Place, Wrong Time pt. 2
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Hollywood Hills….
Kali Steakhouse….
Once Tina and Julie finish their main course, their waiter collects their plates.
“Are we having dessert this evening….” He asks with a polite smile.
Julie smiles. “Uh, why not…. I heard you have a fantastic Lava cake?”
The waiter gently nods. “Yes, ma’am…. it’s delicious…”
Julie looks at Tina. “Is that cool with you, Tina?”
Tina drags her eyes from the scene across the room. “Hm?”
Julie smiles sheepishly. “I was asking if you wanted to share dessert…”
“Oh…yes, of course…. you choose…” Her eyes then drift back across the room. “Whatever you order is fine….” She distractedly says as she watches Michelle laugh with the mystery woman.
“Should I put in your order, Ma’am?” The waiter asks Julie.
Julie gently nods. “Yes, please….”
The waiter nods and walks away.
Julie watches as Tina keeps her gaze across the room. “Um…Tina—”
Tina scoots down in her chair and hides her face behind her hand; she then peeks over her hand and watches as Michelle’s apparent date rests her hand on the small of her back and escorts her out of the ding area.
Julie sighs in frustration and leans across the table. “I’ve been patient, but I’m just gonna go ahead and ask…. are you like running from the law or something? Because I’ve been through that once, I can’t do that shit again….”
Tina’s eyes stay glued toward the exit, her mind going a mile a minute, trying to decide what she should do. She then looks at Julie when she realizes what she just asked. “What?”
“You heard me, Tina….”
“Uh, no, I’m not a fugitive….” Tina then chuckles. “You’ve dated a fugitive?”
“Not purposefully, but little did I know I was being surveilled for months…. of course, no one in law enforcement believed that I didn’t know she was on the run; they were convinced that I had some escapee fetish or something… I had to testify and everything….it was terrifying…and you’re behaving just like her…hiding your face, scooting down in your seat, watching the exits…”
Tina knows the situation isn’t funny, but she can’t stifle her laughter.
Julie slowly nods as she leans back in her chair. “And now you’re laughing…. great, this has been a fantastic date….”
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That was a very strong final scene. Bette’s reaction is harsh because she has been able to discover on her own and see with her own eyes and without a doubt what Michelle was doing to her. If someone else had told here, maybe he’d give Michelle the benefit of the doubt and don’t believe she is cheating on her. I suppose she’ll find out now that Tina has already figured it out, I hope she won’t be very mad at her for not saying anything.
Looking forward for the next chapter, please post soon ❤️
Well, Bette finds out and has summarily kicked Michelle out. In her underwear no less. Well, Tina was not the one who told her. Bette discovered it on her own. So… let’s see what happens next. Michelle should know that when you play with fire, it’s really easy to get burned.
Thanks for the chapter.
Uh…harsh, strong. Now Bette knows how Tina felt years ago.
I am glad Tina was not the one to tell her. She needed to see it for herself. Now Bette knows she is a lying cheat. I know it will take some time, but I am looking forward to our girls heading back to each other.
That was a very strong last scene. Throwing her out in her underwear! I’m glad Bette saw it for herself and no one had to tell her. Hate that for Bette. She truly loved Michelle. Michelle let her insecurities get the better of her. Can’t wait to see what happens now.
Thanks for the post!
OMG…Bette picked her azz up and literally KICKED HER TO THE CRUB!!!! Tell YOUR BITCH to come pick your azz up! So glad Tina didn’t tell Bette and she SAW HER CHEATING WITH her own eyes!!! What a F’ing MESS… Michelle, Michelle, MICHELLE!!! How she let her insecurities get the BEST of her and Ava definitely preyed on that I’m sure! All that flirty texting and late night school meetings caught up with her sneaky butt!!! Poor Bette and KARMA taking a bite out of her!
Shane will probably tell Bette what Tina saw tho….
Thanks for the update!
The Fallout from this discovery????
OMG…Bette picked her azz up and literally KICKED HER TO THE CRUB!!!! Tell YOUR BITCH to come pick your azz up! So glad Tina didn’t tell Bette and she SAW HER CHEATING WITH her own eyes!!! What a F’ing MESS… Michelle, Michelle, MICHELLE!!! How she let her insecurities get the BEST of her and Ava definitely preyed on that I’m sure! All that flirty texting and late night school meetings caught up with her sneaky butt!!! Poor Bette and KARMA taking a bite out of her!
Shane will probably tell Bette what Tina saw tho….
Thanks for the update!
Geeze!! So glad Tina was very hesitant to “believe” her eyes for Bette’s sake and more importantly, DIDN’T tell Alice!!!
Thrilled that she went to Shane. Appreciate Tina;’s maturity to fight her instincts to tell Bette when they had a moment.
And Bette??? Woman dont play. Threw Miche out scantily clad and told her to call her bitch to pick her up. I’m hoping Bette will NOT jump on Tina for “not telling what she saw”. It WASN’T Tina’s place to interfere.
Now I’m truly looking forward to the next chapter
Patiently waiting for the next chapter! Ive read the original one, and i know what’s gonna happen next, but this rewrite is a new series for me. i’m waiting for the new weekly episode. Hihihi!
Now Bette has a 1st hand idea what Tina felt when Bette cheated on her.