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Romance Is Dead
"I didn’t say that," Tina sighed.
"Mom, can I stay with Auntie Kit tomorrow instead of mom’s job?" Angie said, "the flowers kept poking me!"
Bette frowned, ‘well that backfired."
"Uhh Angie why don’t you get changed you can sleep over," Bette said.
Tina poked her head out of the room, "absolutely not! Bette she’s grounded."
"I’ll tell Kit no T.V allowed," Bette said.
"Bette, she can convince Kit, I know her," Tina said.
"I’ll tell her not to give her anything Tina, come on babe I want to take you out for a romantic outing," Bette said.
Tina rolled her eyes, "this is not what I wanted."
"You said you wanted romance and that’s what I’m giving you," Bette said.
"Bette I…"
"Shh, no discussion," Bette said, "Angie get your stuff ready." Angie scampered off excitedly and Tina shook her head angrily.
"Go get changed sweety," Bette said with a grin, "I have a special treat for you."
"Bette you don’t have to do this," Tina said, "I shouldn’t have even said anything."
"No, no you’re right Tina, just because we’ve been married so long doesn’t mean I shouldn’t romance you," Bette said.
Tina sighed and walked back to the bedroom to change.
…………………
The little carnival was not very full. There was a few families there and some couples walking down the pier hand in hand. Among them was Bette and Tina who were walking down the pier in silence.
"This is nice huh?" Bette said.
"It’s kinda cold but yeah it’s nice," Tina said.
Bette hurriedly took off her jacket and slipped it over Tina’s shoulders.
"Oh Bette you don’t need to do that, I don’t want you to get sick," Tina said.
"It’s alright, I’m fine," Bette said.
"Thanks," Tina said.
"You still mad about that thing with Angie?" Bette said.
Tina sighed, "I’m sorry about that babe, I was just angry from work and Angie was not helping."
"You mean the flowers didn’t help?" Bette said with a pout.
"No, no Bette, I’m not ungrateful," Tina said, "thanks very much for them, seriously."
"But?"
"There’s no but," Tina said.
"Come on T, we’ve been together for 23 years," Bette said, "tell me the truth."
"Alright, well…maybe you didn’t have to order every type of flower on the planet," Tina said with a small shrug, "with one type it would have been enough."
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Great story. Finally Bette learned that it’s not a lot of money spent or the big things that counts, it’s the love and attention that means the most.
That was simply excellent. thank you.
Ahhhh it was just getting good too!! Great fic ;)
Lol yucky to the orange chicken out the teeth thing lol but great story
fuck that was hhhhhhhhoootttttt and sweet thank you tb24!!!!
This was great. Some of your scenes parallel mine: the card 5 years instead of 10; flowers, not a roomful, but enough to trigger a sneezing fit, and $85 later at the ring toss, a three-foot tall Bart Simpson doll…I don’t like Bart Simpson and was never a fan of the Simpsons.
lovely little tale romance is to ones own interpretation. and that was a simple gesture of love.
Thanks for posting. Forget the critics… i love reading your stories. If you can please 51% of the readers, you are successful. Please keep them coming… no pun intended.
That was great and love it, thanks for the post!
Sooo cute.Thank you .Again I love your writing.PPS
Superb! A very nice loving story, with a lil drama..at first i thought tina was being ungrateful but i get it now…very lovely