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Round n Round We Go (Ch.11)
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The brunette brushed her dense hair on one shoulder and rinse off the shampoo bubbles. She reached for the body wash and squeezed a handful of it. After the pile leathered enough amounts of bubbles, she laid her hands on Tina’s shoulders and upper arms, kneading the muscles, taking the soreness from her, cleaning her up. Very attentively, she washed every inch of that creamy skin, even kneeling down to massage the slim legs.
Tina closed her eyes, enjoying the attention on her body. When Bette stood up, she rewarded her with a devoted kiss. Bette instantly cornered her, trapped her in those long arms. She smirked, reaching out to cup a feel of the mocha colored mounds.
“Hmmm-hmmm-hmmm” Bette warned with guttural moans and spun the girl around, started punishing the naughty move with bites on the shoulder blades. Her hands reached around to roam and please. “You know, there’re so many different kinds of orgasm, sweetie.” She lectured during her kisses. And quick to the blonde’s surprise, she knelt behind her, parted the supple ass cheeks slightly, slid a thumb in her and rubbed her clit. She found the spongy patch of inner skin expertly and added pressure on it. “I’ll show you, there’s difference between G-spot orgasm and clitoral orgasm. Do you feel the difference when I touch you like this?” She asked in low voice and pushed her thumb harder at the spot. Even under the hot running water, she could tell the texture of the liquid coaxing her finger.
Tina jumped at the touch. She braced herself on the bathroom wall. A weird kind of pressure was accumulating inside of her. She knew from her “study” that some women have the desire to urine when stimulated this way, but actually it was not urine, but a gland getting too aroused.
Bette switched a hand, pushed two fingers in and held her other hand around Tina’s body, massaging the now swollen clit from the front. She planted open mouth kisses on the ass cheeks, and sank her teeth just by the right amount of pressure.
“Bette… please…” The blonde wanted to giggle, but already sensitive by the last two climaxes, she could barely stand the slow building of sensation. She wanted to release, but Bette worked her fingers nice and slow, pushing her further to her limits. “I can’t take it, baby. I can’t take it…”
“Sure you can.” Saying so, Bette sped up nevertheless. The moans and groans were rhythmic with her every push and pull. She was on edge herself just by listening.
After a nice long draw, the pressure broke completely. The blonde yelled and felt a tide of tingles flood through, from her head to toe. She balled up her fists and trembled.
Bette held her still, amazed at the warm juices that spread out on the snowy thighs and her own hand. “Wow.” She murmured, taken aback by the power of pleasure she brought for her girlfriend.
“Ah, Bette… too sensitive.” Tina felt a slight hint of pain on the gland, so she pushed on the large hand. Bette readily complied and stood up to hold her in place.
The brunette decided that it was probably a bit too much for the girl to take on her first night. She swiftly cleaned them both and wrapped a large towel on the blonde.
Tina’s legs were shaking minutes after. She stood, balancing herself on the stronger shoulders and let the tall girl tend her.
Bette helped blow dry the blonde threads carefully and squeezed water out of her own hair. Then she gingerly walked themselves back to the welcoming warmth of the king size bed. She tucked the blanket for Tina and came to the other side of the bed, sneaking into the cover and embracing the soft torso from behind. “Shoot, didn’t blow my hair. It’s gonna look like I’ve been struck by lightening tomorrow morning.” She murmured against the lean shoulder, the tiredness started weighing on her system.
Tina chuckled, settling further into the warm embrace. Her eyelids threatened to drop any second. Before losing her conscious to a deep restoring sleep, she managed to say “I love you” to the brunette.
“I love you too, T. Good night.”
With the exchange of affection, they both drifted to a wonderful dream, in their dreams, they were just happy, holding each other, making love with the background of romantic songs, none of the outside world mattered as they were wrapped up in the safe cocoon made by Simmons mattress, soft blanket, and their precious love.
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Yes, I fantasized about a perfect room with candle lights and love songs. My love scene writing experience is still limited. I hope you enjoyed it and I welcome suggestions.
Thanks for reading!
woo!got me all hot, great writing.looking for the next.
Thanks! Hope it was better depicted than the original one. I tried my best. Truth be told, I barely review the Chinese version these days and forget some plot.
So I’m working off script right now. Don’t be too surprised if it comes out not exactly what you expect ;p
Yeah,that’s exactly what I am waiting for. Follow your imagination,I want to be surprised.while waiting for your post,I am reading this novel named The Groves,a ghost story.
Isnt that a BenMac story? God I looooove BenMac. That author’s work always gives me chills. I’m actually catching up with her “the eternal rocks beneath…”
I thought ” “the eternal rocks beneath…”haven’t end yet,is that so?
No, it hasn’t yet. But BenMac said that it’ll be finished in a number of chapters.
Ahh that was great..literally!!!!!!lol…well worth the wait let me just say. Oh and this line..” Bette in her underwear and high heels, that was a picture, one hell of a sexy picture, itself.” My first reaction was Whoa!!you are wrong to put this kind of imagination in our heads, a person can loose focus for days thinking about Bette with heels and lingerie. I hate that Tina still havent told Bette the truth I know its must be hard on her but when she does I know there’s going to be some drama, hopefully bette get upset and leaves tina and then tina have to work hard to win her heart and trust back…ok im rambling lol im just excited…update soon
Yeah, thanks! The truth will be revealed in about another two chapters or so. And hell is definitely going to break loose. But of course, I will find a way to fix it for them. After all, I still believe in true love between Tibette!
Hot,thank you.PPS
Thanks for reviewing. You’ve been very supportive!
Tina’s dad is a real jerk to have wanted to do that. Loved the connection the two girls share. Thanks
Well he’s a mean little guy alright. He’ll learn his lesson. Let’s just hope a despicable person like him could eventually change.
Thanks for reviewing!
It was worth the wait. You put so much into your characters n you develop easily what you want us to feel w/ your stories. Their feelings for each other were captivated flawlessly. Our imagination runs wild! Thx for your EROTIC posts. I’m sure all hell s gonna break loose if/when Tina tells Bette about Sam s revenge. Bring it on! Don’t stay away too long……
You’re very kind. I will continue to work on my plotting. Well, who knows, maybe Tina would not be given the chance to tell Bette. Maybe things will take a even worse turn so there must be a greater effort to mend their love.
Thanks for commenting. I’ll try to post soon.
Nothing wrong with your love scènes, it was beautiful written.
Sam is a asshole and i am sure as hell is gonna break lose when Tina tells Bette.
Thanks for the update.
Don’t Let us wait for long.
Thanks for supporting!
Actually, I feel like letting things kept hidden to the most critical point. That way, it will take more effort in repairing their relationship.
Who knows, I let my imagination guide me. ;)
So hot and sexy! Thank you!
Thank you for the comment. I try my best.
RT,
That was freakin’ HOT! Just hope Tina will open up now to B.
Nice chapter indeed. Will be waiting impatiently for your next post :)
Well then I better work on it harder now!
I think given the condition, it will be harder and harder for Tina to reveal the truth now. I wonder what will happen if Bette finds out by accident. That’ll demand greater attempts for me and Tina to save the relationship. (I’d like the challenge actually ;))
Thanks for commenting!
I do not often let a comment to this story, but I read since the beginning, and I really liked it.
it is very well worth the wait, not only erotic but very nice. It was the typical “first night” is what every virgin girl dreams (lesbian virgin girls) :P Bette was very romantic.
first love all earth-shattering experience, I hope the two girls love will survives, Tina’s father desire for revenge, and the fact that Tina keep secret this from Bette. and that in the beginning, Tina approached Bette because of the plan.
you told come to the drama but I hope it will not be too bad. everyone write drama lately :) my little heart desires a milder version of the drama: D
I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
Well thank you very much for commenting and telling me your feelings. I am truly flattered, blown away by the generosity of my readers.
I don’t know about EVERY lesbian virgin but I definitely created this first night in the way I wished for mine. ;p
Drama is good, my friend! Haha, I think it gives me space to develop more in the characters. And believe me, when they are finally able to fix things, it’s going to be sweet!
So beautiful and hot