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    Round n Round We Go (Ch.14)

    Story written on May 16, 2014 by robyntibetter.
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    “That’s not…!” Tina argued. “That doesn’t give you the right to sabotage my marriage. It’s different now!” “Oh really? Well then aren’t you such a little snobby liar. If I recall it right, you slept with her, and got your fancy little ass into this place huh? My, my, you’re just like your mother, Tina,

    “That’s not…!” Tina argued. “That doesn’t give you the right to sabotage my marriage. It’s different now!”

    “Oh really? Well then aren’t you such a little snobby liar. If I recall it right, you slept with her, and got your fancy little ass into this place huh? My, my, you’re just like your mother, Tina, thinking with your look you can get away with everything.” Sam viciously spat.

    “Don’t you dare, say that about my mother.” Tina warned the man.

    Sam was in hysteria. “You are such a good actress, all that ‘I’m a poor little innocent girl’. Didn’t even have to teach you just get her skinny ass in a snap of finger. I guess I have to solute you, Tina! Bravo! I didn’t even see that coming. Now you’re young Mrs. Porter, you are trying to get rid of me, ain’t it? Just so you remember, I fucking made all this happen!”

    Tina felt shame and rage in her chest, she wanted to launch on this monster and beat him till he couldn’t say another word about her mother, about Bette. She was shaking all over, unable to talk, and the woolen cloak dropped to the ground. As she looked at him with hate and anger, a cold voice, freezing, harsh, with absolutely no emotion, appeared behind a tall plant.

    “So what he said, it’s true.”

    In a millisecond, her heart shattered into pieces. The yard became quiet, so quiet. A crane flower fell off its stem, broken by the impact as it reached the ground. It made such a loud noise that deafened the blonde. The rest of the flowers shook in the wind, thin and pallid, like she herself. Tina looked into the direction of the voice. Gone was the warm chocolate color, gone was the gentle smile, the big lifeless eyes contained the darkest color of the universe, and the thin lips slowly tugged into a bitter, cruel curve.

    cue: Gone with the Sin– HIM

    ”I love your skin, oh so white.

    I love your touch, cold as ice.

    And I love every single tear you cry.

    I just love the way you’re losing your life.

    ……

    I adore the despair in your eyes.

    I worship your lips once red as wine.

    I crave for your scent sending shivers down my spine.

    I just love the way you’re running out of life.

    Ohohohohoh my baby, how beautiful you are.

    Ohohohohoh my darling, completely torn apart.

    You’re gone with the sin my baby, and beautiful you are.

    So gone with the sin my darling…”

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    1. Author:
      Right, it’s the fall-out! Drama and heartbreak!
      But I promise you to fix things up, maybe not right up, but slowly and gradually for the couple. I’m already working on it!
      I am about to try a new writing technique, and frankly, I don’t think I can write more confrontation after this… it’s just too difficult I didn’t even want to write it, so I will let this part of the story hang, and go on to the next part.
      I can’t ask you to enjoy this, can I? But I hope you understand, and wait patiently for the next chapter.
      Thank you for reading. I welcome your reviews.
      Peace

        • Well, actually I’ve decided to not let Tina get pregnant, not when things are chaotic like this. You’ll find out what I have stored for the plot. ;)

    2. RT,

      I have expected that this will happen but I still felt bad for B & T. Frankly, Tina should have told Bette about Sam after their wedding or after the credit card incident but Tina’s love to her father hindered her from telling the truth.

      Now I wonder how will this affect her relationship with her father.

      Btw, Was it grandma who heard the conversation?

      Thanks for the update :)

      Scribe

      • Well, you’ll find out how the relationships turn out.
        And no, it wasn’t grandma who heard the conversation. You see, grandma has blue eyes. The brown eyes indicated that it was Bette herself.
        Thank you for the comment :) Please continue to read and review.

      • Yeah, very sad indeed.
        Haha, Sam will be of use later in the story. Can’t cross him off now. He’s Tina’s father after all.
        I believe in people, actually, that they can change.
        Please continue to read. I appreciate your comment!

    4. Oh no no no this is what I been waiting for and you gonna stop right there, you are so evil its not even funny…lol ok maybe a little bit but please update soon im too suspense about this!!! Poor bette ahh this is good

      • Thank you very much!
        Haha it’s another cliff hanger. I know, I’m terrible.
        And this time it’s gonna hang for a lil bit longer. You’ll see how this all turn out.
        :)

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