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    Round n Round We Go (Ch.15)

    Story written on May 20, 2014 by robyntibetter.
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    “Now, ladies and gentlemen, let us give a big welcome to Angelo Kennard’s presentation on new technology.” Brenda called his name. He stood in front of the giant touch screen presentation board and searched for me. When he looked at me, I smiled encouragingly and nodded for him to proceed. “Good afternoon, everybody. My name is

    “Now, ladies and gentlemen, let us give a big welcome to Angelo Kennard’s presentation on new technology.” Brenda called his name.

    He stood in front of the giant touch screen presentation board and searched for me. When he looked at me, I smiled encouragingly and nodded for him to proceed.

    “Good afternoon, everybody. My name is Angelo Kennard, I would like to give you my report on the research on the topic ‘new technology’…” He continued with nice pace and clear pronunciation.

    Some of the parents were in awe. I could hear their whisper praising through the whole time. My baby totally nailed the whole crowd.

    “That is all I have to share with you. Thank you for the time and I want to thank my mother, and my grandpa, they helped me a lot with this report. Have a nice afternoon.” He said in the end and the class bursted into a loud wave of clapping. It made me so happy that I could actually cry.

    People gave me approving looks, the teacher made compliments on his behavior at school, and Angelo was extra chipper when I told him that he made me so proud.

    “Can we go buy ice cream, mommy?” And the smart little guy looked at me with those twinkling big eyes, bargaining for a reward.

    I almost gave in. But he admitted that father bought him ice cream yesterday. So we made a deal that I’d take him to Disney World on Thanksgiving holidays in two weeks, where he could have ice cream and fried chicken. “Tonight mommy’s making some healthy food for you, honey.”

    “Awww… Healthy food is never tasty.” He pouted and slumped his shoulders.

    “Well you have to eat healthy to grow tall, mister. Hadn’t you told me that you want to be like a tree?”

    “Okaaaay…” He made a unwilling drawl that made me chuckle. He was just a kid after all.

    We went to shopping and got stalled by the dairy bar. He was having a hard time deciding which kind of cheese he wanted with his bread. Then again, he looked into the rows of milk, and picked out the plastic bottled ones that gave away free plastic dinosaurs.

    At the check out counter, when I was putting the goods on the surface, he was juggling with his milk bottles, trying to line them on top of the cheese. But the bottles fell off the counter. We both bent down to pick them up. “It’s okay, honey.”

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    1. Author:
      My dear readers!
      I just did a major change in my story telling. I changed from third person perspective to first person POV!
      How do you like it? I want to know if you prefer this writing technique to the old one. It’s okay if you’d like me to return to third person view point. I’ll just rewrite this chapter and the next one.
      And I know there are questions unanswered, things unresolved. But things will gradually work out.
      Thank you for reading and please, COMMENT on this one because I need your direction.
      Peace

      • woo！now I see the big picture here! You’ve handled well with the child part, so can we see the duo have some passionate action next chapter? I am hanging and waiting, thanks for the adequate updating!

        • Passionate action, huh, well, maybe not the next chapter immediately but soon, I guarantee.
          There’s just so many emotions and complicated issues between the two.
          I hope you’ll enjoy this more. I’m actually improvising here.

        • Oh, I think I’ve read her stories. But lately I don’t have much time reading fanfic. I don’t know why, just have been busy here and there.
          I won’t disappear for two whole months, nevertheless! :)

    2. You did a great Job writing in first person! For me, i like third person versions more, but you don’t have to re write for me. I love the story and will read it in the version you give it us.

      Wow, Bette was so cold, but i hope Angelo will warm her heart.

      They are still married? Hmm…

      Can’t wait for their diner meeting on Monday.

      • Thank you very much for the encouragement!
        Bette is a bit heartless as she comes back. But kids, they have the power to capture one’s heart in no time. She will come around and set things right between her and her son.
        Yes, still married. They have so much history together and it’s kind of difficult for them to give that up.
        I hope you’ll continue to enjoy!

    7. RT,

      The Past was kind of Bad, the Present is Slightly Good but the Future of Bette, Tina and Angelo seems going to be Better :)

      Thanks for posting.

      Scribe

      • The past has some good memories in it, the present is complicated, the future, I promise, will be sweeter.
        Thanks for reading and commenting!

    8. That was great and the kid are so smart and cute, like him. Wow they still married, what a surprise, hope they will talk more and get to know each other again. Please post more, thanks

      • Yes, the kid is great! I wish I could have one of those in the future haha.
        They are still married, and a lot of unresolved issues in their relationship.
        Things will get better!
        Thanks for commenting.

    9. Threw me for loop completely. I would love to really the aftermath from when Bette heard Tina and her father conversation I mean after all these chapters thats what we been waiting for and the story just turn….but Shit I like this too I dont know I want it to be the way you written at first but its your choice and you are a brilliant, exquisite writer, I trust you lol!

      On the other hand wow Bette was a lil mean but can you blame her for the way she treated Tina, I still can’t believe how many chances Tina had to tell her and didn’t, and Marcus died awe how sad, I would love to see them have another baby but im thinking ahead, and can’t believe Tina still in touch with her dad but family is family.

      I guess im going to just see where this goes and enjoy every moment of it.

      • I know, it’s kind of a surprise isn’t it?! I was going for that kind of effect, actually. Besides, I can’t really go on with the confrontation anymore. That was just plain painful.
        Bette is really mean here. She has her reasons to be, and you’re right, Tina not telling her the truth on so many occasions is one of them.
        Marcus, oh I am sorry about him, too. But… to serve the plot…
        They still can have another baby. Just it’s really too long in the future for them to talk about having another kid. They got to get back together first!
        But it will all happen eventually!
        Thanks for commenting. And I wish you’ll enjoy it more!

      • Thank you! You are very kind.
        Ok, I’ll continue in the first person for more chapters and maybe I’ll return to third person perspective in later chapters!

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